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( Axkus's Tomb ) Maybe a working title~

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A 1000 years a go, there existed a Mad overlord bent on world destruction,

With many followers, a captured princess and forsaking power that of darkness
She was well on her way to obtaining her goal, But a lone Hero seemed to come
from nowhere and put a stop to the demonic overlord, but a Immortal being
of this level of power was to dangerous to simply Kill so she was sealed away in a tomb
for what most would hope forever,

Just 1000 years past by,
in a near living like death trapped in a Coffin with only her self to keep her company
and she does this way with having a spit personality, one being good and Innocent
and the other being evil and blood thristy,

but then one day a Little 11 year old Fox girl
finds a Old Story Book in Dr. Quill's lab and upon reading it finds a Ancient Rhyme
that tells of the tomb of Axkus the story book hero of her dreams,
A odd book mistelling everything about Axkus to make her out to be a hero thats been past down in her family

but however the book she finds taking from Dr. Quill makes Axkus out to be a villain
but the young fox refuses to beleve that part she reads in this other book
and follows the rhyme to a mystical forest that unless you know your way you can get lost in forever,
and after some time finds her way to the tomb and breaks a old seal that was keeping the coffin Axkus
was sealed away in, the young fox finds inside a sleeping hedgehog woman covered in mummy wrapings,
she then sees this woman is a live and then drags her back home, then in to her room and the hedgehog
stays a sleep through all of this,

then after a little while she wakes up with a very happy fox girl face right against and
in her face, this is just the beginning of a tale like no other,

You'll take control of the newly awaken overlord but she is not as she once was,

What will happen? You'll have to play this level series to find out!

Character art to be posted later when i get around to drawing them, *mew
Edit-And here's the first character profile
http://www.freewebs.com/chaoswinds/Sozo/Axkus-01.png
Profile:
Name Axkus
Race: Hedgehog
Job: Shes a Ex Overlord,
Gender: Female,
Age: Over 1000 years old with a body of a unageing 19 year old,
IQ: A Genius with a unbelveable IQ of 300,

Personality: She has two split personalties,

Personality#1: The brave silent type, Says little and is very antisocial but is still nice for the most part and innocent,
She understands the world of technology and machines and this being unbeleveable as shes from 1000 years a go,
she'll protect the people who are close to her with her own life tho this being not many people, mostly just being Bubblegum fox, when it comes down to it shes insane and very powerful but beleves she most do what is right
and be the hero to help every one she can to make the world a better place,

Personality#2: Evil like there's no tomorrow and if she has something to say about it there won't be,
she'll kill anyone she finds to be in her way, all that matters is power and to make the world obay her
and pay for what she blames the people of the whole world
rained her life and everthing that had meaning to her, and with a forsakeing power of darkness she waits
for the right time to make her plans come true, but in general dislikes her good side yet she sets back and
has fun wacthing her good side being in control just for laughs, but really she can't do anything else when not in control
just like her good self she feels close to Bubblegum fox tho won't say it openly,

Hobbies: Making machines and a lot of them, and she in general has a strong interest in all technology
But lately she has been watching detective shows with her best friend Bubblegum fox, She also loves Techy like toys		2010-07-10 07:02:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

Wow you are great at storytelling
I immediately fell in love with the characters and I would love to see the art when you post it 		2010-07-10 07:50:00

Author:
Fancy_Zombie
Posts: 226

Very Curious how this will work out...
Good luck!
Oki/		2010-07-10 07:58:00

Author:
Okisaan
Posts: 165

Wow you are great at storytelling
I immediately fell in love with the characters and I would love to see the art when you post it

Zhaha haha! thanks! this will be one of my best yet! *mew
but this will need time and LBP2 clearly to be made

this will be a whole lot of work, not simple levels by far

you'll control sackbots that are the characters
i have the levels plan out a lot you'v not even heard of the game play parts yet
this clearly is a story heavy platforming levels and the game play is one of a kind ,

And yes i plan on puting up the art with in a week or so luckly im a artist Yohoho hoo! x3 *mew		2010-07-10 08:17:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

Zhaha haha! thanks! this will be one of my best yet! *mew
but this will need time and LBP2 clearly to be made

this will be a whole lot of work, not simple levels by far

you'll control sackbots that are the characters
i have the levels plan out a lot you'v not even heard of the game play parts yet
this clearly is a story heavy platforming levels and the game play is one of a kind ,

And yes i plan on puting up the art with in a week or so luckly im a artist Yohoho hoo! x3 *mew

Lol well, I can't wait to see the character sketches and I'm sure I will love the game when you make it in LBP2 		2010-07-10 20:35:00

Author:
Fancy_Zombie
Posts: 226

Lol well, I can't wait to see the character sketches and I'm sure I will love the game when you make it in LBP2

haha ok ok, and i hope you and a lot of people will enjoy the story my levels will have
and see you around, i'll message you when the pics are up. *mew		2010-07-10 21:27:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

haha ok ok, and i hope you and a lot of people will enjoy the story my levels will have
and see you around, i'll message you when the pics are up. *mew

I love the story
I especially love how you play as Axkus as opposed to the fox - an interesting direction

Sweeet Thanks!		2010-07-11 00:34:00

Author:
Fancy_Zombie
Posts: 226

Hey, interesting tale you've got going on here I'd love to see it come to fruition in the world of LBP.2010-07-11 02:37:00

Author:
lyrradXOX
Posts: 285

Hey, interesting tale you've got going on here I'd love to see it come to fruition in the world of LBP.

thanks, :3 i hope enogth people will enjoy it,
i'll do my best *mew		2010-07-11 04:05:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

Yoho! Update!!! the first character profile is out and has been added on the first post
its Axkus, More art and profiles to come at later times. *mew		2010-08-01 06:55:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

i read the word "darkness" and instantly invisioned my character shadowcrazy lobbing shadow dragons at things lol....so needless to say i like the story i read and look foward to the character profiles you create and what else will be shown...this looks like a good LBP2 level to WOW those newcomers that get into LBP2 when it releases2010-08-01 08:10:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

i read the word "darkness" and instantly invisioned my character shadowcrazy lobbing shadow dragons at things lol....so needless to say i like the story i read and look foward to the character profiles you create and what else will be shown...this looks like a good LBP2 level to WOW those newcomers that get into LBP2 when it releases

thanks :3 and do you like the character design art?		2010-08-01 08:13:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

i like the ones in your art profile site...but if you mean on this thread i dont see any2010-08-01 08:48:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

i like the ones in your art profile site...but if you mean on this thread i dont see any

wooh there we go rehosted now it should show *mew		2010-08-01 09:23:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

This sounds and looks very interesting I like the plot and the concept art as well.2010-08-01 10:01:00

Author:
Oddmania
Posts: 1305

This sounds and looks very interesting I like the plot and the concept art as well.

thanks, i hope i can make like i plan on so every can look forward to something great :3		2010-08-01 10:48:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

wooooow that looks awesome lol i wanna be in it....i wanna be Sunday the Hedgehog and i'd be a green male hedgehog with lots of steampunkish clothing an.....lol sorry i got carried away 2010-08-01 18:18:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

wooooow that looks awesome lol i wanna be in it....i wanna be Sunday the Hedgehog and i'd be a green male hedgehog with lots of steampunkish clothing an.....lol sorry i got carried away

Yohoho hohoo!
the main cast and overall storyline is set as im sure you can tell,
but that don't mean i can't add you as a character in a sidequest
that there be some of, if you really want to be added in
someway that is, *mew		2010-08-01 20:09:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

i would love to

thanks for the opportunity

and yeah like i said since you're going the hedgehog route i might as well add my character "Domingo (Sunday) the Hedgehog" who is a dark green hedgehog from a different land (speaks spanish...unless the world where this takes place has no spanish then another cool foreign language would be alright)

he is strong, determined and has a great fear of spiders and heights (ironically you can always see Domingo running at sonic speed jumping large leaps on rooftops in very high places....only his fear of heights affects him when in mobilized aircraft for fear of engine failure...otherwise if he could fly he'd take the skies more often)

his reason for being in this world is to find his missing brother who is a dark red hedgehog who leads a secret life as a sort of "mafia boss" in this land

anyways yeah thought id share a story and see what you think about it		2010-08-01 22:52:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

anyways yeah thought id share a story and see what you think about it
hmm i think theres a little bit of a problem here,
yes i did base a little of my ideas off of sonic but not by much
as you can see the characters are more human looking then
sonic characters she may look a little short but thats just my art style
and axkus about 5.5 foot tall, and yeah shes a hedgehog but
im going more general animal people overall in this world
meaning not just hedgehogs, foxs etc any animal or thing is possible
dragons, owls, even made up things a little bit,
its fantasy so being as thinking things up in ways that
not been done much is fun, :3 *mew yes if you want them as
hedgehogs thats fine im just saying your not limited
to things sonic has done only thing i base off sonic is
a hedgehog main character though i made her and all
my animal people or what we furrys call furry characters
that being a human with animal parts etc,		2010-08-02 06:13:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

have to do another post because im writing this on ps3,
and a sidekick fox character well in my story's case
a fangirl that has hero love, she can't battle shes just a normal
Fox girl, its not normal for most people to have super powers
in this world, though there is some clearly,
and a villain haha though hes not really, hes a good guy
but is stubborn and believes in what he most believe
that being he thinks axkus is a evil overlord
btw Dr. Quill is a Porcupine, Yoho xD
made him not a hedgehog as not over use that idea
just as you can guess he has crazy hair that being
perfect as hes a mad scientist though his IQ.
is less then Axkus's, his is 210 that still awesome as
160 is genius level. *mew		2010-08-02 06:20:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

hmm i think theres a little bit of a problem here,
yes i did base a little of my ideas off of sonic but not by much
as you can see the characters are more human looking then
sonic characters she may look a little short but thats just my art style
and axkus about 5.5 foot tall, and yeah shes a hedgehog but
im going more general animal people overall in this world
meaning not just hedgehogs, foxs etc any animal or thing is possible
dragons, owls, even made up things a little bit,
its fantasy so being as thinking things up in ways that
not been done much is fun, :3 *mew yes if you want them as
hedgehogs thats fine im just saying your not limited
to things sonic has done only thing i base off sonic is
a hedgehog main character though i made her and all
my animal people or what we furrys call furry characters
that being a human with animal parts etc,

lol yeah tru well if you'd like for a more interesting sidequest you could use my SHADOWCRAZY character (being a shadowcreature that can shapeshift would make for an interesting concept) but if not we can stick to Domingo the Hedgehog (actually Domingo the Hedgehog was a character i created long ago so its not because this story had hedgehogs in it...just i already had him premade) but yeah i like the DEMI-ANIMAL type beings you have i dont mind my character being more human then hedgehog		2010-08-02 06:57:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

lol yeah tru well if you'd like for a more interesting sidequest you could use my SHADOWCRAZY character (being a shadowcreature that can shapeshift would make for an interesting concept) but if not we can stick to Domingo the Hedgehog (actually Domingo the Hedgehog was a character i created long ago so its not because this story had hedgehogs in it...just i already had him premade) but yeah i like the DEMI-ANIMAL type beings you have i dont mind my character being more human then hedgehog

hey whatever one you want in is fine
i could even put both in the same sidequest
if it worked somehow. *mew		2010-08-02 07:16:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

hey whatever one you want in is fine
i could even put both in the same sidequest
if it worked somehow. *mew

that would be weird...you know what? i wanna be in there as Shadowcrazy....only because i had a goal in my gaming life since LBP and LBPC came out that id try to CAMEO in many level series, comics, machinima, etc.

so yeah ill be shadowcrazy,...shapeshifter extraordinaire 		2010-08-02 07:26:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

that would be weird...you know what? i wanna be in there as Shadowcrazy....only because i had a goal in my gaming life since LBP and LBPC came out that id try to CAMEO in many level series, comics, machinima, etc.

so yeah ill be shadowcrazy,...shapeshifter extraordinaire

Zhaha, sure then friend thats fine,
you can talk about what kind of sidequest
you'd find your character in though i can work on
it all my self but its nice to know what the kind
of things your character be doing and would need help with,
even though could be something like have to go
hunt a monster upsetting a poor town and he joins
to help you for the quest, *mew		2010-08-02 07:35:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

Zhaha, sure then friend thats fine,
you can talk about what kind of sidequest
you'd find your character in though i can work on
it all my self but its nice to know what the kind
of things your character be doing and would need help with,
even though could be something like have to go
hunt a monster upsetting a poor town and he joins
to help you for the quest, *mew

to be honest i really cant see what a shadowcreature would need help with sidequest wise....so beats me...maybe you can think up of something since this world is yours and so are the creatures/beings that inhabit it so im sure you can come up with something really interesting to do as a sidequest		2010-08-02 09:29:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

to be honest i really cant see what a shadowcreature would need help with sidequest wise....so beats me...maybe you can think up of something since this world is yours and so are the creatures/beings that inhabit it so im sure you can come up with something really interesting to do as a sidequest

yeah it won't be a problem and i got more then enough
time to write that anyways :3		2010-08-02 09:37:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

cool i cant wait to see what you come up with



so when can we expect to see more concept art of your game and its landscapes and characters and my sidequest? lol cuz you know im lovin your art		2010-08-02 09:41:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

cool i cant wait to see what you come up with



so when can we expect to see more concept art of your game and its landscapes and characters and my sidequest? lol cuz you know im lovin your art

haha im pretty random and really im only good at
backgrounds on LBP i have no clue outside of that o.o
and character art im guessing about 1 with a profile a week?
depends on if i get time on the PC as my mom is on
PC a lot, and drawing takes me hours so yeah we'll see *mew		2010-08-02 09:47:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

1 a week? wow thats long dude lol2010-08-02 09:54:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

1 a week? wow thats long dude lol

Well then Good news! im unhappy with Axkus's profile art
so i'll be making another one, And Bubble gum fox! later most
likely this week *mew		2010-08-02 11:43:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261

lol well cant wait2010-08-02 11:48:00

Author:
Shadowcrazy
Posts: 3365

Looks great! Can't wait to see it in action!

And please update the profiles!

2010-08-19 15:43:00

Author:
gamerC0LA64
Posts: 274

Looks great! Can't wait to see it in action!

And please update the profiles!



YoHohoo... believe me i will, but i need to rework the story
somewhat and i got some special pics to draw first
and a preview video i'll fake to look like its useing LBP2
new stuff so yes im holding art, profiles back
for a big boom of epicness i hope,
so it may be 2 weeks or so more im
busy also working on my LBP1 level project. *mew		2010-08-20 09:14:00

Author:
Lord-Dreamerz
Posts: 4261


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