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Greek Gods - PACmiguelcoma Meet the Greek Gods in the OLYMPUS, they want you for some help! Be careful with Hades. Read the text, it's the most important part!! by miguelcoma Tittle: LBN - Greek Gods - PAC Description: My Entry for LBN PAC Contest. Made in 3 weeks. EDUCATIVE, ENTERTAINING AND ENGAGING!!!!. Meet the Greek Gods in the OLYMPUS, they want you for some help! Be careful with Hades. Read the text, it's the most important part!! by miguelcoma Presentation: Direct Link (bigger size) (http://img717.imageshack.us/img717/6452/cartadepresentacion.jpg) http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/8811/cartadepresentacion300.jpg

2010-07-08 11:21:00 Author: Unknown User

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This looks amazing. I'll give it a try later today.

2010-07-08 16:25:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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The Goods: This level was very good and very informative. I liked how the characters was made and how the level was full of many minigames. My favorite parts was the dear hunting and Hades' lair. I laughed at how Hades was crying and one of the people you save put threats out on him. The flower and air mail tasks were well executed and simple. Also I like how you implimented the test at the end. Improvements: The level was good but I think you can improve it alot. Zeus minigame seemed like cheap kills since you couldn't tell where he was striking next and he was killing me as I was being spawned. Also you can ace that part by grabbing the cloud hes on and hang on til he stops. The water god minigame can be improved, too. You can't really tell where the gas is at and the front thin layer is kinda distracting. One idea I had is to get some "ghost" glass material and imbed some gas in it. That way they would be solid and you know what layer the danger is in. Also the last part (the dancing part) is pretty boring. You could probably improve that somehow. Overall its a nice and informative level and you'll always have something fun to do. I gave it 4 stars.

2010-07-08 18:34:00 Author: L1GhTmArE Posts: 519

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To L1GhTmArE: Thank you for your feedback. It helped me A LOT with the level. I changed it with your recommendations. Really, thanks. oh, and... At the ending dance I put the Gods faces. And Zeus says: Thanks to L1GhTmArE for his feedback wich helped me a lot improving the level.

2010-07-08 23:15:00 Author: Unknown User

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Thanks! Glad I was helpful. You didnt have to do that that feedback was free lol. I think the level has improved alot. Zues area was fun this time since i knew where he was striking next and i couldnt cheat . Poiseidon minigame was greatly improved since i could tell which layer the waves were in. The ending is better because the scorebubbles are dispensed everywhere so theres something to do while your waiting. I gave it 5 stars and a heart this time around because nothing felt like a cheap kill . Improvements: For Hephaestus' area maybe you could add more detail to the bottm floor/wall. it seems empty or you could change the camera. adding more detail would probably be better. In Hades layer I like alot but its missing 1 huge detail i think. Its missing fire. Maybe you could add some down there. If you dont know how: Get a candle and modify the lighting to your liking and put your curser on the fire of the candle and select it. While its selected hit the copy button and you'll have a candle-less candle fire. Maybe just use a little to give it a more sinister look. At the end you need the to move the sticker that says "question" more to the right because the "Q" is blocked. Very good level. Good luck on the contest!

2010-07-09 00:55:00 Author: L1GhTmArE Posts: 519

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Very cool level I was super impressed. The custom background was very well done and the brightness and prettiness of the level was refreshing. Noticed a few depth issues at the Zues mini-game: Falling behind thin material and missing the floor under zues. Re-spawning and falling behind floor due to lightning bolts on floor beneath you. Amazing level, great job! :star::star::star::star:<3 -dTOtheT

2010-07-09 04:15:00 Author: dTOtheTEE Posts: 183

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Here is my review that you requested. Ok, to start off with, this level was very good. I think you have a high chance of winning that crown. The best bits of your level was the very fun and creative mini-games. I thought the, 'Hunting the Deers' one was a simple, yet imaginitive idea. I loved the fact as it was Greek themed as I enjoy God of War and Greek Mythology quite a bit. It had very good information which was put into the characters and that made it far more interesting than a quote from Wikipedia. The information was very short yet detailed and that helps people remember it so definately educational there. Your characters were also created very well and definately looked like Greek Gods. There was some bad points though which can be fixed. There wasn't that much platforming gameplay. Wheels, jumps, races etc... If you added some of those, your level would be a lot more entertaining than the mini-games that are already there. I realise you aren't English or are you? Miguel is Spanish so your Spanish? Anyway if you aren't English, I'll not criticise any spelling mistakes, but there was a few. You spelt 'Attention' at the start wrong and 'which' near the end wrong. Improve these and you'll have a higher chance of winning. You could improve your level by adding maybe a race or some platforming gameplay. Also by fixing those couple of spelling mistakes. There is also a Global Lighting switch you may want to hide at the start of your level. My own thoughts of this level are that it is very good and has quite a bit of information which is easy to remember and set out in an interesting way. I feel you have put a lot of effort into this level and the 3D glitch suits your level quite well. Everything apart from those couple of bad points is excellent. I enjoyed playing it. I think you should actually make your own Greek Gods level series. That would be very good. 4/5 stars. Hearted! <3 Thanks, it's been a pleasure reviewing Greek Gods!

2010-07-09 12:43:00 Author: Barnsy_AKA_ash Posts: 293

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To Barnsy_AKA_ash: Thanks for your huge feedback. (Added your name on the level ) First: Yes, I?m Spanish. Anyway, I improved the level solving those spelling problems. I also made invisble that Global Lighting switch. Unfortunately, it is too late to add a race or more platforms. And my Thermometer... you now, I can?t Really, thanks for your feedback.

2010-07-09 18:08:00 Author: Unknown User

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Hey, I played the level and I thought the story was cool but first of all, the zeus minigame felt more of a luck minigame than a skill minigame. Also, the Poseidon minigame was fun along with meeting other people. The scenery was good and I loved the quiz at the end to see if you were paying attention in your dreams. Overall, I give it four stars, Good job.

2010-07-09 18:11:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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The Zeus minigame has been solved, Now it isn?t a Luck minigame.

2010-07-13 15:45:00 Author: Unknown User

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Fun Level I failed the test hard lol.

2010-07-14 05:13:00 Author: Perfectblaze Posts: 22

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level was very well done, like the bow & arrow part that was fun but here are my opinions Positives: - liked the puzzle - Bow and Arrows - The exam at the end - & the endin with the people who helped Negatives: - 3rd question i kept putting the right answer nothin happened Overall nice level (Satisfying)

2010-07-14 07:07:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653

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