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Jack McHan and Etlentos - Part 1 **Spotlighted**

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Jack McHan and Etlentos - Part 1HonzaM25
Hello!
I published my new level "Jack McHan and Etlentos - Part 1". It is set in space and I am going to make two more parts.

Story:
Legends tell about an ancient race and about their unique city Etlentos. Everybody in universe wants to find it. But nobody was successful.
One day met Jack McHan with an old space pirate. They talked about Etlentos and the pirate said, that on planet Lyctanianus is some key to find Etlentos.
So Jack flew with his spaceship Aithra to the planet Lyctanianus?


Pictures:
http://img17.imageshack.us/img17/6734/01072010105.jpg

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/6752/01072010107.jpg

http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/6568/01072010115.jpg

http://img257.imageshack.us/img257/8345/01072010117.jpg

http://img718.imageshack.us/img718/1182/01072010119.jpg

http://img441.imageshack.us/img441/6462/01072010120.jpg

http://img22.imageshack.us/img22/6187/01072010123.jpg

http://img52.imageshack.us/img52/4416/01072010124.jpg
2010-07-01 14:35:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Wow, this looks to be a fun level, feedback soon!2010-07-01 14:37:00

Author:
Voltergeist
Posts: 1702


Wow. Just wow. The community has been lucky lately with receiving great new creators, and you're no exception! This level has some very exciting gameplay, beautiful scenery, and a fresh take on level mechanics. What is there not to love? The planetary environment looked stunning, especially in the crystal environment, where I just loved the contrast of the crystal and the clean white backdrop. The platforming was fun and unobstructed, and the environment perfectly shaped. I think I might go play this again back to back, it was that good.

Five stars, a heart, and a creator heart! Excellent work!
2010-07-01 16:20:00

Author:
Voltergeist
Posts: 1702


BlueBulletBill:
Thank you for the compliment. I am happy, that you liked it.
2010-07-01 18:07:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Wow! This level is amazing! It reminds me of spark's levels, as the platforming in this is immense! The visuals are perfect and the mechanisms are great! Welcome to lbpc! Is this your first level, cause it's awesome! I can't wait for the next part! ( If you need any advice, just pm me!) I'm a bit busy right now, so I will give better feedback later)2010-07-01 19:23:00

Author:
The Forgotten
Posts: 316


The Forgotten :
Thank you and no, it isn't my first level. And I have started work on part 2, so maybe i will publish it next month.
2010-07-01 20:03:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Hey there Homza,

The one thing I loved about your level was the visuals. Everywhere I went, there was awesome scenery and environment. You did a great job with using all the layers and putting them to good use. All the materials looked great. You did a great job with corner editing as well. There was absolutely a fair amount of platforming. The story is very great and it seems to follow through. I did get confused at some parts of the story, but it's probably because the story has yet to unfold. Not much I can say, except that I loved the level. So I gave you :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3. Forgot to heart you as a creator as well. Don't worry I'll get on that.
2010-07-02 01:28:00

Author:
TheNerd
Posts: 840


TheNerd:
I am happy, that you loved the level. The Story is weak point, because my english is weak. So thank you for stars and heart.
2010-07-02 08:59:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Hi, HonzaM25! I tried your level yesterday evening and absolutely loved it! There are so many cool things - nice introduction, beautiful environments and planet foregrounds, very cool puzzles, obstacles and level mechanics. I loved rolling disks as star system, moving huge level part, crystal puzzle, rocket sled and may other cool things. I had only one difficult place - with electric crystals, but after few tries I found right way. I love your level. Brilliant work! Thanks for this excellent level! I gave you 5 stars and heart for it and creator's heart for you!

And I will look for second part!
2010-07-02 12:49:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


Hidy Ho HonzA! I just had a chance to play your level so here I am with some feedback :-)

I had a great time playing this level. Reading the description I was curious to see if it would be an RPG/Adventure style level or a Platformer, and it turned out being a straight up Platformer (which I bet made B3 happy ).

The story behind the level is very good and one of the best I have seen on PSP. I am really looking forward to seeing what happens in the future parts.

The scenery was also well done. The environments looked great, and you did an excellent job with the camera work to capture epic landscapes!

You proved that you have a good handle on the teleportation technique using save points. You had some very good transitions to different areas. On the topic of teleportation, I loved the device at the start of the level with the sounds and emitting lights!

That's about all I have. You did an excellent job with this level! Keep up the great work :-)

BTW, I noticed that you have your PSN as Honyam25 on your profile, which had me confused, but I figured that you must have meant to write Honza since it is your LBPC screen name.
2010-07-02 13:23:00

Author:
amazingflyingpoo
Posts: 1515


Domik12, amazingflyingpoo:
Thank you for the compliment. It is good to hear, that you liked it.

PS: Poo - I wrote PSN name with changed language on keyboard. Czech keyboard has interchanged Z with Y.
2010-07-02 15:15:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Hey! I don't remember how I found out about this level, all I remember is playing it! It was great fun and had great scenery and everything! The only thing that I got a little frustrated at was the part where you had to grab the sponge and the winch would pull you up through the electric crystal things. I got hit by one of the crystals and the sponge accidentally got stuck on it. So I then had to restart the level to move on.

Other than that it was a great level! Five stars! :star::star::star::star::star:

Keep up the good work!
2010-07-05 00:34:00

Author:
eagerneph
Posts: 1536


Great level Honza, I really enjoyed it. I love the sci-fi world you've put together here and the excellent story to go along with it. Your transporter mechanism is fantastic.

I liked the platforming and the environments, and it was fun to discover more about the story. Some of the areas seemed a little empty but that's a very small thing to complain about.

I'd leave more feedback but I need to hit some of the other threads in the showcase as well - busy busy!

Thanks for a great level and a very fun little adventure - 5 stars and a heart. I'm looking forward to part 2!
2010-07-05 00:51:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


eagerneph, Taffey:
Thank you. I am pleased, that you both liked it.
2010-07-05 11:01:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Hi Honza!
This level is really awesome!
i really love the Story and am excited about the next parts.
I like the visuals, too! At some places i thought it was a little bit empty but in some ways this fits the theme of the level.
You did a great job with using all the layers.

I gave it 4 stars!

Good job!
2010-07-05 12:07:00

Author:
Arrestor
Posts: 363


Thank you, Arrestor.2010-07-05 13:02:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


The level was just AMAZING! I enjoyed alot playing it. I gave it 5 stars and heart.
GOOD JOB. One last thing "I GOT THE HIGHSCORE!"
2010-07-05 17:19:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


himoks:
Thank you and I congratulate to the highscore.
2010-07-05 18:05:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


I loved your level Honza!!

The layout of the level was very well done. I liked the snakeskin material you used for the cave system. It had a very nice and unique look to it. The trees looked amazing with that material you used. The whole level looked great. I like how you did not use many stickers for the landscape and let the materials speak for them selves. I don't use many stickers either, but for some reason I own all the DLC packs.... strange huh? Anyway back to your great level. The obstacle you made with the rotating planets was very cool, it took a minute to get the hang of it but I made it over no problems. I liked the change of scenery with all the crystals too. I liked the ending in the spacecraft too. Great stuff!!

I had a very good time playing your level so I gave you a heart and also one for creator because I like your other levels too. I will look forward to many great levels from you in the future. <3

-VJ
2010-07-05 21:50:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Thank you VJ. I am pleased that you like this level and other my levels too.2010-07-06 07:31:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Congrats to you for such a great level and its Spotlighted!2010-07-11 00:04:00

Author:
SketchNZ
Posts: 1668


Congrats on the Spotlight Honza! 2010-07-11 02:01:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


Hey HonzaM25,

Congratulations on the Community Spotlight! I love the world you created: the textures, the color, the shapes. I was totally immersed in the atmosphere of the level, and I can't wait for the rest of the series.

Here's a video of your level:



http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lABVfn5fxKI


Blissfully lost,
jeffcu28
2010-07-11 06:56:00

Author:
jeffcu28
Posts: 648


SketchNZ, Taffey, jeffcu28:
Thank you for compliment. I am very happy, that my level is spotlighted.
2010-07-11 08:40:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Congrats on the spotlight!2010-07-11 23:53:00

Author:
eagerneph
Posts: 1536


Hey Honza!!

Big congratulations on getting your level spotlighted.

I hope to see more levels from you soon!!
2010-07-12 02:21:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


eagerneph, VJ:
Thank you.
2010-07-12 08:36:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Hiya Honza-

Congraulations on getting spotlighted, I watched the video and it seems that you deserved it, very nice atmoshpere.

2010-07-12 21:40:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


Thank you X-FROGBOY-X. I am pleased, that you think, I deserved it.2010-07-13 05:17:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Hey Honza! I played your level, and I slapped myself across the face for not seeing this level before! I can't believe I skipped out on the fun. Now I can't go into details, because everybody else covered them.

*Slaps self again.*

Ouch. Anyways, I'll just give you my :star:'s and <3's stats now.

:star::star::star::star::star: and a <3 for both the level and the Creator. Excellent job my friend!

Peace
2010-07-13 05:42:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Thank you for compliment, CyberSora. I am happy, that you found my level, and that you liked it.2010-07-13 12:54:00

Author:
HonzaM25
Posts: 64


Wow, Shinto shrine are wonderful.
And I like this worldview.
It would be uploaded soon, well, I'm looking forward to the level of you.
5stars and <3
2010-07-15 10:16:00

Author:
hphzq966
Posts: 76


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