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Sackboy is rushed into hospital upon a hospital bed - head injury large metal beam from a construction site the ambulance driver says |Flash back| sackboy sitting eating his ham sandwiches sitting on a crate in a bustling city construction site - a scrape of metal and a massive metal beam meets sackboys unfortunate head - sackboys rushed to hospital |Flash back no longer| in sackboys head he has the world to himself, he lays motionless in a coma for 6 months sackboys creativity is all he has left but what goes in in his head filled with stuffing? lets find out shall we? Well - basically thats the cut-scene or something I am planning to make on little big planet for a level series called Oddworld it will be one level for every month he is in a coma Inside sackboys head for the 6 months he is in a coma in his head of his he thinks he lives in a completely bizarre universe that will be known as OddWorld, strange architecture, generally strange characters, outhouses that act as a teleportation device? what next, giant talking carrots (yep) all the strange stuff sackboy would imagine all jumbled into a strange alternate universe. Story A Bizarre Beginning Sackboy is working at a construction site in the middle of town when, while eating his sandwiches and drinking his juice talking to his mate Bill about lunch when all of a sudden - nooo!!! look out - a massive metal beam finds sackboys head, hes rushed to a hospital via ambulance, in hospital he is operated on by a extreamly unqualified surgeon, he used a chainsaw is known to eat while operating - in this case he drops his entire sandwich into sackboys head, trys to steal some of sackboys stuffing to put on ebay and almost forgetting to stitch sackboy back up, hes fired after this operation. sackboys family are worried and wait for him to wake up then all of a sudden - inside sackboys head he's sucked into a thought bubble. This thought bubble will be called Oddworld In this particular level It will be in a small wood in Oddworld just outside of the Village Of Gurglytush here you will learn a little of this strange place called Oddworld The Cosy Village Of Gurglytush: story Special thanks to dragonvarsity for this (however not sure if I will go through with this) Here's my idea of World 1. You arrive in a nice, cozy village called Glurglytush but the villagers are upset. It looks like tomorrow's the Gurglytush Grand Cupcake Eating contest but a mean blonde fat giant by the name of Alfalfa has stolen all their cupcakes. Go through the forest and stop the evil minions with the spells you've learned like summoning trash bags and giant goblin eating meat. After defeating the minions, you find out Alfalfa has eaten every cupcake so you'll just have to get the ones she hasn't digested yet. Go inside Alfalfa's body, and get all the cupcakes you can before they reach her stomach acids. You'll of course come in her nose and out her butt. After retrieving the cupcakes to the villagers, they mention how it tastes even better then last year's cupcakes. Will you tell them why? Of course not! Score board will be inside a medieval style inn Gurlglytush will be kinda medieval style buildings with strange architecture Royal House Of Carrots: Story This Will be The 3rd month in the story The King of Carrots is in a mess. a pesky human called (insert strange name here) is trying to destroy his palace of carroty goodness and turn it into some carrot cake, its up to you to stop (insert strange name here) from destroying the carrots home! start of level: after level one - The Great Gurglytush Cupcake festival you must continue your journey leaving from a inn at Gurglytush after staying there for a night - Were this journey takes you - Your not sure, you just follow the path for a bit and you end up in carrot territory - you get captured by guards and are taken to the King of Carrots - he asks you to stop (insert strange name here) however, you refuse, he sends you to the dungeons... you must break out in order to tell him, in all you do want to help there carrot behinds to not be turned into nice, sweet carrot cake by (insert strange name here) - you must enter (instert strange name here)'s kitchen and sabatoge their oven, break all there plates, bowls cups ect and throw all there knifes forks and spoons away with out being caught. after this you must head back to the Royal House Of Carrots and claim your reward: freedom. Cardboard cit (needs more imaginitive name, i'm coming up with one now After running freely from the kingdom of carrot you continue on to find a city, how ever it is made of only cardboard! cardboard windows, cardboard everything, except for food and clothes, the people of this city are upset and sick of building out of only cardboard they ask you to "borrow" (take with out asking and not give it back) some materials from a near by town, you must get in with out being seen and get out with the sponge, rubber, metal, stone, glass, pink and peach floaty, dissolve, wood and polystyrene with out getting caught, move quickly back to the city and have the city transform into the materials you have brought to it, make sure you get all of them tho, or else you wont be able to finish the level, they throw a party and you leave. Levels In the series: 1: OddWorld: A Bizarre Beginning (In-complete) (1/3rd Complete) 2: OddWorld: Month One: The Cosy Town Of Gurlglytush (In-complete) 3: OddWorld: Month Two: Carrot Cake Catastrophes (In-complete) 4: OddWorld: Month Three: * (In-complete) 5: OddWorld: Month Four: * (In-complete) 6: OddWorld: Mouth Five: * (in-complete) 7: OddWorld: Mouth Six: * (in-complete) 8: OddWorld: Back To The Real World (In-complete) * = needs a name I hope to be finished with these levels within 3-4 months so you should hope to be enjoying at lest the 1st two in 2-3 weeks or so. Please Post Your Ideas

2010-07-01 12:16:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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It sounds pretty cool and I love the story. I know you're probably not even close to done for the project but when you are I'd be happy to be a beta tester for it and good luck with your project. If you run out of ideas for parts of the four levels in Odd World, I'd be happy to give you outrageous ideas!

2010-07-01 15:19:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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actualy - I haven't even started it :O! but i have 2 weeks of free time starting tomorrow (holidays FTW?) so that'll help alot oh, and send me a friend request ideas and testing pl0x

2010-07-01 21:02:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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wow, no posters? Surely not, come on guys post your ideas?

2010-07-04 07:23:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Sorry, I've been really busy with other stuff. I'll try giving a HUGE amount of puzzles. First I have to think of them. I'll edit this post with ideas later today. Edit: Here's my idea of World 1. You arrive in a nice, cozy village called Glurglytush but the villagers are upset. It looks like tomorrow's the Gurglytush Grand Cupcake Eating contest but a mean blonde fat giant by the name of Alfalfa has stolen all their cupcakes. Go through the forest and stop the evil minions with the spells you've learned like summoning trash bags and giant goblin eating meat. After defeating the minions, you find out Gurglytush has eaten every cupcake so you'll just have to get the ones she hasn't digested yet. Go inside Gurglytush's body, and get all the cupcakes you can before they reach her stomach acids. You'll of course come in her nose and out her butt. After retrieving the cupcakes to the villagers, they mention how it tastes even better then last year's cupcakes. Will you tell them why? Of course not! I think this should be in 2 levels. What do you think? Edit 2: Actually, this should be World 2 since the King and Queen are gonna be there.

2010-07-05 01:59:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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oooh thanks a lot - by the way ive built normality and the king carrot, king of carroty goodness land (might name it that that not sure) if you want you could add me and we could work on it together: of course I'll give you credit - what I really need right now is some other peoples ides as well as you'rs and I allso built a cat - dun know if it will help at all but yeah I might up this project to 8 levels - 6 mounths, or weeks or nights or what ever, he could be in a coma for 6 nights, weeks or months I've thought up a lil more of the story and some dialog of the "surgen (super-unqualified-really-goodat-eating-noddles?) I'll post it on the 1st post story mode now.

2010-07-06 03:28:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Okay guys im pleased to say that the 1st Oddworld level: OddWorld: A Bizarre Beginning is up now, its about a 1/4 of a way finished and you can find it by searching : @Huntedstorm $Bizarre It currently has 2 scenes, one on the construction site and one in a ambulance, I have finished the start of the 3rd scene THIS LEVEL IS A CUT SCENE try not to use your controller at all as it might mess up. cheers to all who play, but remember to give feedback on this thread if anything breaks.

2010-07-06 10:20:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Okay, I'll try it out later today and I'm not much of a good creator, sorry. But if you ever need crazy ideas, ask me plus I'd be happy to beta test the levels and I love the idea of the surgen and the king of carroty goodness.

2010-07-06 15:42:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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A chainsaw?? =O Surely you could just unzip him? XD A very cool storyline! Unique, and more than likely, never been done before!!

2010-07-06 17:42:00 Author: Weretigr Posts: 2105

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thanks guys, ive published the 1st level its about a 3rd of a way done, needs major beta testing i'll update today lets hope you guys think its as good as my parents do, if thats a good thing theres a few minor timing errors im not sure how to sort out, this is my 1st cut scene and 1st major level ive ever worked on, construction scene is my favorite at the moment, and on the hospital room you'll get the whole huntedstorm presents OddWorld (yaaaaaayyy?) so yeah thats what ive done so far, lets hope you all like it, i'll probably be done with it by tomography afternoon not including 100's of bug fixes okay ill retell it as it is in the level when you come in you start talking to your mate bill about what you got for lunch, your eating your lunch and some on shouts: Sackboy lookout!!! but you can't get out of the way in time, it pushes you into some invisible gas and it spawns you inside a ambulance your in this ambulance for about 20-30 seconds (can some one test and tell me if its to long or to short?) and then you get killed again and you go to a hospital, little bit of text and you go in a hospital bed and enter the hospital were it says: Huntedstorm presents: Oddworld level series, personally i quite like it but other people can judge that I think theres adequate music changes and sound effects the cut scene in itself at the moment is about 2 or so minutes long so its a horror for me to test every single little change I make so if I could get some testers that would be nice.

2010-07-06 21:50:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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I just played it and I think the cutscene's pretty cool. If you could make the ambulance more detailed I think that would help also when you are in the ambulance I think you should cut to when you're out a little faster. Besides that, I think it's coming along nicely

2010-07-06 22:03:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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oh by the way dragonvarsity, whats your psn, and thanks I will make it faster Edit: made it about 5 seconds faster I think. Edit again: publishing new version now, any one want to help me test this level? Edit again again: building surgery room now.

2010-07-06 22:15:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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I'll test the level and try out the updated version. Also, I think I actually wanna help create to improve my creating skills.

2010-07-06 22:34:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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I'd like to test. But you bring everything to me, I'm not running around looking for a key...

2010-07-06 23:01:00 Author: talbot-trembler Posts: 1114

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dont worry, no keys needed, just head on over to your community moon and search my name up, you'll find it and all so i'll be updating it once again in about 20 or so minutes, built the 1st idea of a surgery room, you enter a room full of gas and then teleport to another room cheers every one for posting.

2010-07-06 23:08:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Hey, I just played the updated version and if you could make it another 3 seconds faster that would be awesome no offense. Also, I love the huntedstorm presents Odd World series. Great job so far. Also, I'm gonna plan out more of my ideas for the series if that's okay

2010-07-06 23:13:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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more than okay: Ive thought up the 3rd month i'll edit this post soon send me a friend request edit for the story of cardboard city: After running freely from the kingdom of carrot you continue on to find a city, how ever it is made of only cardboard! cardboard windows, cardboard everything, except for food and clothes, the people of this city are upset and sick of building out of only cardboard they ask you to "borrow" (take with out asking and not give it back) some materials from a near by town, you must get in with out being seen and get out with the sponge, rubber, metal, stone, glass, pink and peach floaty, dissolve, wood and polystyrene with out getting caught, move quickly back to the city and have the city transform into the materials you have brought to it, make sure you get all of them tho, or else you wont be able to finish the level, they throw a party and you leave.

2010-07-06 23:27:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Hey, I'll try getting on tomorrow to continue creating. I don't have a specific time but whenever I have some free time for creating I'll post here.

2010-07-07 02:03:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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Edited the start of the hospital, now has cooler text again, changed huntedstorm presents into a single block, added sounds of the construction site, given chainsaw more sound, edited some music and are working on the forest outside Gurglytush.

2010-07-07 02:44:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Dragon, I need a story for the 1st level, since were going to change it, try be quick tho I need to start making it now.

2010-07-08 09:28:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Okay, if you mean editing my original idea, you got it. You are going through the dark forests and you light a torch and you see a giant bear about to eat you but then the king of carroty goodness scares it away and then you ask where am I and the king of carroty goodness introduces himself and tells you you're in OddWorld and your journey begins here and he says it seems these villagers are having trouble with their frosted muffins of whatever they're called. You go in the village, meet the people and talk to them and they say about the contest so you go in the forest ahead. You have a lot of swinging, jumping and goblin enemies, (they're gurglytush's servants) and then the king carrot guy shows up saying to get to gurglytush the giant you must climb mount fargloffaga. You clim up the mountain and there's more platforming and you arrive at the top and you see a tiny home for a big giant and there's the scoreboard. In part 2 she wakes up and breaks through the house. She roars loud and you must go in her and retrieve the cupcakes. Go through her nose and travel down her throaht to get to the stomach acids and bring three cupcakes out of her mouth. When you throw out all three, they land on king carrot's royal hovercraft and now Gurglytush is chasing you while you must shoot her down. Once doing so you arrive in the town of cozyville and they complain there's only three cupcakes and they say oh well, they sure are tasty. The End Sorry it took me 6 hours to reply, I just woke up a while ago. By the way, Gurglytush has blonde hair and she's fat. Also, I think she should wear swedish clothes. The carrot can look like whatever you want, you planned him.

2010-07-08 15:41:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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lol! and that was worth the wait, ill build king carrots hover craft, maybe a collectible version that you can fly round, just gota find a way of embeding some logic in it, cheers for the story, I'll get working on it only, the mountain will be called a lil different, now onto the hover craft!

2010-07-09 10:24:00 Author: huntedstorm Posts: 488

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Okay, awesome. Good luck with this and good luck with cardboard city. If you ever update a level or come out with a new one for this project you can always tell me because I'd be happy to beta test it.

2010-07-09 15:23:00 Author: Dragonvarsity Posts: 5208

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I'll test, too. (as soon as my brother gets back from my friends house with the ps3)

2010-07-12 15:54:00 Author: Super_Dork_42 Posts: 1874

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