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A Walk in the ParkCerulean_Sky My first level, Sackboy decides to take a refreshing stroll in the local park, but there's a few dangers lurking about... Um, so this is my first level, and it's quite short and simple, and it took me a little more than a week to finish it, but I would really love feedback to know if it's okay or not. So if you have the time, be sure to check out my level!

2010-06-30 01:58:00 Author: CeruleanSky Posts: 12

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I'll leave feedback soon ^^. I'd love to see your first creation.

2010-06-30 02:05:00 Author: TheNerd Posts: 840

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Hello Cerulean_Sky!! Thanks for telling us about your new level, and it's your first too? Sweet!! Okay I gave your creation a test drive and I was impressed. As far as first levels go this was very good. Right away I noticed the bright colors you chose and the sticker work was very well implemented. I liked the trees you made too. The obstacles were not too challenging, but I don't think it was your intent on making a difficult level. However, if it was your intent, to make a fun and pretty level that anyone could enjoy I think you hit a home run. You even managed to use both planes and most new creators only stick to one so you get cool points for that. Overall I say you have a lot of talent and I hope you keep making levels so I hearted you as creator, aw heck, I even hearted the level too. <3 Great job!!

2010-06-30 03:18:00 Author: VelcroJonze Posts: 1305

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Hello Cerulean, Your level was pretty good for a firsty. I see that you know how to work the corner edit tool, but you should corner edit in some other parts of your level. The visuals were nice, some trees here and there, and great sticker work. It wasn't a hard level, but I see you have some talent in platforming elements. One thing you should do is make your own creatures. The game creatures in your level was a let down. Especially the robots. I hearted the level because I know you have have talent

2010-06-30 05:38:00 Author: TheNerd Posts: 840

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Aww shucks, thanks a lot you guys! I'll try to make some of my own enemies for the next level I make, and I'll probably make it a bit harder too, I was pretty much trying to get the basics right with this one.

2010-06-30 19:42:00 Author: CeruleanSky Posts: 12

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hey cerulean! i liked this level a lot, becouse of lots o' stuff, and as i will not say every single one i will spotlight the few who are more important: 1- i like green levels (i dont really know why but i even created an old level to tribute all of the green levels, wich you can check out, although it is one of those i've said that were weak). 2- i love secret ways with hidden prize bubbles and, although yours was not big, it was already satisfying... 3- to a firsty, this level was pretty great and a lot better than any of my 5 firsts. but there are "not so cool stuff" aswell in the level, and to help you i will tell them... 1- you did'nt hide the pistons, emitors, mouths, etc... and it gave the level a little bit uglyness... 2-the level was small, i wanted more walking in the park, and when i saw the scoreboard i felt like crying (and thinking about it, you will think that this "not so cool advise" is good ) 3- you did'nt use your own characters, instead you used simple stickers... but i liked the level so i gave you 5:star: and 1<3 .

2010-07-05 21:07:00 Author: nosemomkey Posts: 414

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Hi ,Cerulean! I love you level. It is very well done and have very nice gameplay and environments. For the first try it is wonderful result! I gave you 5 stars for this level and will look for next levels from you!

2010-07-08 08:55:00 Author: Domik12 Posts: 838

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