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fear of the dark

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fear of the darknosemomkey
hey guys!
this was my first "good" level(the others were never released, becouse they were really short, ugly and weak) , so i thoke it whould be a great idea to post it out to see if anyone likes it

the story is simple: all the lights vanished in LBP and no one is there to help you finding the source of this blackout, so sackboy must find his way to the thing that creates the problem, and... well, solve the problem.

one of the thing that i wanted this level to include is a crossroad becouse i wanted the people to have freedom of choice, both of the trails (mountains and lake) have their own puzzles or tasks.

tell me what you think, and if you liked rate :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: and <3

2010-06-28 00:18:00

Author:
nosemomkey

Posts: 414

Hi, nosemomkey! WOW! You created very long interesting level. There are so many nice places and adventure has so many interesting parts! I played it with big interest! And crossroad was good idea too! Maybe if you will do more work with corner tool in your next levels they will look even more beautiful. But and right now everything looks and played fine! I gave you 5 stars for story, 4 stars for environments and total is 5 stars and heart for level and heart for you as creator!

And I will look for you next levels!

2010-06-28 14:34:00

Author:
Domik12

Posts: 838

Hidy Ho nosemomkey! Thanks so much for leaving feedback for Here and There :-) I am sorry that it took me a few days to leave feedback here, but I finally had a chance to play the level.

Great work with this level. It had a fun unique plot with trying to return the power back to your town, and I loved the fact that the player had multiple routes. Each route had a fun aspect to it, and I was actually excited to go back and try the other one.

Also, the level looked pretty good! You did a good job with adding scenery where it was needed, but you didn't go overboard.

I experienced one problem when playing the level which required me to restart. In the room with th UFOs, I flipped the switch, and then tried to climb along the tops of the UFO's back to the left to get on top of the UFOs to the left. However, when I got to the left, I was stuck because the electrified UFOs were blocking me from going right again

This isn't a big deal, but I figured I would point it out since it forced me to restart the level. The good news is that you had multiple paths so I was going to play multiple times anyway :-D

Other than that, things went pretty smoothly. It was a very fun level with all sorts of fun gameplay elements (challenges, platforming, VJ-style switch pulling and platform shooting, etc..).

Keep up the awesome work!

2010-06-30 06:58:00

Author:
amazingflyingpoo

Posts: 1515

I experienced one problem when playing the level which required me to restart. In the room with th UFOs, I flipped the switch, and then tried to climb along the tops of the UFO's back to the left to get on top of the UFOs to the left. However, when I got to the left, I was stuck because the electrified UFOs were blocking me from going right again

This isn't a big deal, but I figured I would point it out since it forced me to restart the level.

hey amazingflyingpoo!

you know, the right way to get the score bubbles i left in the first UFO's is: grabbing the second UFO ( wich is made in blue sponge BTW

) jump to the first UFO, then jump to the top part of the second UFO and then (if you want) jump to lars's head...

although... that is a very good idea to get those bubbles too, aslong you dont fall of

thanks for the feedback

2010-06-30 15:58:00

Author:
nosemomkey

Posts: 414

Oooh, this is one good level, and its your first too? Wow, I really need to get better! I like how you added the different paths to go, I personally liked the mountain road better but the lake one was also good. It's also a good incentive to get people to play your level twice! I hearted and five star'd it.

2010-06-30 20:41:00

Author:
CeruleanSky

Posts: 12

Oooh, this is one good level, and its your first too? Wow, I really need to get better! I like how you added the different paths to go, I personally liked the mountain road better but the lake one was also good. It's also a good incentive to get people to play your level twice! I hearted and five star'd it.

thanks ceruleanSky, but this level is not my first level, it is my first BETTER level

I will play your new level (i saw the thread moments ago, but i havent played it yet) and then go to the thread and tell you what i think, i mean, the level cant be that bad

thanks for the :star:'s and for the <3 !

2010-06-30 21:37:00

Author:
nosemomkey

Posts: 414

Wow, this is a really good level! I was kind of surprised, because whenever I see a "dark" level, it usually turns out to be a crappy level with the jaw-dropping effect of a black gassy thin layer. This level, however, was different, in a very good way! The level created a dark environment, but not so dark you couldn't see, which was nice. The real star of the show here was the randomness. "RANDOM ELECTRIFIED GROUND FTW!" Teeth cleaning wizards. UFO experiments that overloaded the town? This level was ridiculous, and I loved every moment of it.

Five stars, a heart, and a creator heart, nice work! Can't wait to see your next!

2010-07-01 13:28:00

Author:
Voltergeist

Posts: 1702

Hey Nosemomkey,

Pretty awesome level you got here. It has a nice story that somehow manages to stay together throughout the level. I say that, because there were some random parts, but it was pretty funny. Two routes = twice the fun. I still have to play it again, so I can go take the lake path. I hear that they were giving out money there.

Platforming was great, it did have some VelcroJonze style to it. It also had Alismuffin's bubble chest from Sackula

I was also reminded of Pirates of the Carob Bean when I had to fix the cables. I had no problems with the level, and I had fun playing it. I gave you :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3.

2010-07-02 01:19:00

Author:
TheNerd

Posts: 840

Hey Nosemomkey,

Pretty awesome level you got here. It has a nice story that somehow manages to stay together throughout the level. I say that, because there were some random parts, but it was pretty funny. Two routes = twice the fun. I still have to play it again, so I can go take the lake path. I hear that they were giving out money there.

Platforming was great, it did have some VelcroJonze style to it. It also had Alismuffin's bubble chest from Sackula

I was also reminded of Pirates of the Carob Bean when I had to fix the cables. I had no problems with the level, and I had fun playing it. I gave you :star::star::star::star::star: and a <3.

OH MY GOD!

how did you managed to find all of the sources of my inspiration

anyways thanks for the heart and for the 5 stars...

2010-07-03 20:14:00

Author:
nosemomkey

Posts: 414

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