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Mystery Castle

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Mystery CastlePuffi1182
Mystery Castle is the final chapter of my Sackboys Adventure Series
Hey guys, my new Level is finally done and I will be appreciate if you could it play and leave some feedback.

Story:

After the Sackboy conquered "The Evil Pyramid" he went for 13 days through the desert...he can see his hometown allready but a mysteriouse castle is on his way...No matter what?s in there, our little Sackboy will go on cause he will see his wife Sack'lina finally and tell her his unbeliveble Story....

Facts:

- Slow Motion Action
- Boss
- Two secret rooms with many bubbles
- degree of dificulty: middle-hard
- Last level for LBP 1.....

18911189101890618905189141891318907189091890418908 1891518912		2010-06-26 10:10:00

Author:
Unknown User

GOOD
The lightning/rain effect was pretty neat!
The bridge lowering looked AWESOME!
Cool checkpoints!
Sweet dragon eyes!
Time ability = awesome! The lighting effect you do with it, having to find it, WOW! LOVE IT!
Nice idea with the light matching under water. it might take some thinking, but that's the point of an adventure level, right? But maybe add a 2 input AND logic to show what they do when both made.
The twist at the end =
I like how when the dragon dies he becomes stairs haha!
The theme was extremely well-done. It felt right for the level.

Needs Work
I don't know what it is, but even playing by myself this level was laggy/slow.
I think the area wit the two saws, the camera angle makes it more difficult than it is.
Very difficult to get down from the bell tower area.
You can go right past the dragon, not beat him and finish the level. Put up a wall (or something) that is brought down when he's destroyed.
You can get right under the dragon, he can do nothing and you can kill him
When you bring the dragon down, he continues to shoot fire (gas) and bombs. Maybe disable them when he's down because it is very tough to tell that you can walk in there and I kept shooting him thinking there was more to do.

As a courtesy I also make a grammar check for people. I found the following:

In the first speech bubble, you misspelled "through."

Also in that bubble it should be "He know that something's wrong here" also totally exhausted, he finally reaches a mysterious place."

Cloud bubbles: Litttle Sackboy, you've done it so far. I've observed you.." and should it be this in there as well? "your survival at forgotten cave AND the great battle with the beast." ? I didn't play your earlier levels so I'm not positive. Looking at the second bubble, you probably need a comma instead, though. Second cloud bubble you misspelled "begins."

Overall
It was a fun, not too tough level but with some things thrown in that needed brain power to solve.
It was a disappointment that the end boss doesn't seem quite finished.
Numerous grammatical errors irked me.
It's an adventure level with a great theme you stuck with thruout! I enjoyed it.

:star::star::star::star:

SCORE
7/10!

F4F, please play and review my Dark Water chapter 1 level in my signature. 		2010-06-26 18:50:00

Author:
RSQViper
Posts: 302

Needs Work
I don't know what it is, but even playing by myself this level was laggy/slow.
I think the area wit the two saws, the camera angle makes it more difficult than it is.
Very difficult to get down from the bell tower area.
You can go right past the dragon, not beat him and finish the level. Put up a wall (or something) that is brought down when he's destroyed.
You can get right under the dragon, he can do nothing and you can kill him
When you bring the dragon down, he continues to shoot fire (gas) and bombs. Maybe disable them when he's down because it is very tough to tell that you can walk in there and I kept shooting him thinking there was more to do.

As a courtesy I also make a grammar check for people. I found the following:

In the first speech bubble, you misspelled "through."

Also in that bubble it should be "He know that something's wrong here" also totally exhausted, he finally reaches a mysterious place."

Cloud bubbles: Litttle Sackboy, you've done it so far. I've observed you.." and should it be this in there as well? "your survival at forgotten cave AND the great battle with the beast." ? I didn't play your earlier levels so I'm not positive. Looking at the second bubble, you probably need a comma instead, though. Second cloud bubble you misspelled "begins."



WOW, thanks for the big review

I?m glad that you like it, 7/10 is a good rating.
First of all, if I have any time I will play your level and give a feedback.

1. I think this slowness is there because I used many effects/lights...the rain...and the slow motion effect together. So I know the performance is under 25 fps, but I think for one player is it playable
2. Was this area hard to play? hmmm...maybe I`ll change the camera position,when there are more people there who have problems with that....
3. Yes, you?re right. Some people told me that allready but I haven`t the time to change it, yet....
4. Here?s the same, ....unfortunately, the whole boss-fight don`t reach the quality of the level...I know, this area must be rebuild...

Grammer-check

Thanks I will rectify the bad sentences. The problem is, I?m not the best English-talker, so I?ll do my best when I translate the whole sentences from German into English

Oh, if you have any time, please play my level "The Evil Pyramid" you can find it here: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=28176-The-Evil-Pyramid		2010-06-27 07:45:00

Author:
Unknown User

UPDATE: Now with pictures2010-07-06 16:35:00

Author:
Unknown User

Look cool i'll give it a try soon.2010-07-06 16:46:00

Author:
ferrrch
Posts: 429

Ok, I played it...but I got stuck after shooting down the dragon. One part of him is blocking my path, and there's no way that I can see to get past. That huge light brown rectangular part of him ended up slanted on an angle that makes it impossible for me to go up. That aside, there doesn't seem to be anything wrong with the rest of the level, it's all good. I like the rain and lightning in the beginning. The look of the level is nice. It's a little hard to play with the constant lag too but I guess it's cause of all the stuff you put in or something. I just can't get past that one part. Unless I overlooked something.

:star::star::star: for now. It's a good level but that one mess up is keeping me from really enjoying the level.

If you want to leave feedback on my level, https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=29656-Red-Sector-S-(Part-1-of-Extermination)		2010-07-06 18:09:00

Author:
Force Ten
Posts: 60

Ok, I played it...but I got stuck after shooting down the dragon. One part of him is blocking my path, and there's no way that I can see to get past.

Thanks.
I?ll check it out what?s wrong there. I?ll try to fix it. Thanks for feedback, I?ll check your level too :-)

Edit:

Bossfight is fixed, now there should be no problems any more.		2010-07-06 19:12:00

Author:
Unknown User

Ok. I got to finish your level. lol

The funny thing is, I got stuck again on my 2nd try when one of the dragon's wings landed on the paint gun and started bouncing in a weird way. It looked like it was humping the paint gun. o_O Anyway, I expected a bit more to come out of the level. I certainly didn't expect "to be continued on LBP2" >_> Whatever.

:star::star::star: I'm keeping that. Don't get me wrong, it was good but it was a tad short and the lag kept me from enjoying it a lot.		2010-07-07 03:58:00

Author:
Force Ten
Posts: 60

Bossfight and some other little mistakes are fixed.2010-08-08 22:47:00

Author:
Unknown User

This level was fun & here is my opinions..

Positives:
+ Dragons Eyes
+ Boss Fight
+ level design
+ lightning effect
+ platforming
+ Dialogue

Negatives:
-Pretty much what was said with the one guy.."I don't know what it is, but even playing by myself this level was laggy/slow.I think the area wit the two saws, the camera angle makes it more difficult than it is.Very difficult to get down from the bell tower area.You can go right past the dragon, not beat him and finish the level. Put up a wall (or something) that is brought down when he's destroyed.You can get right under the dragon, he can do nothing and you can kill himWhen you bring the dragon down, he continues to shoot fire (gas) and bombs. Maybe disable them when he's down because it is very tough to tell that you can walk in there and I kept shooting him thinking there was more to do."

couldn't reply back as quote

Overall Nice Job: :star::star::star:

F4F MY LEVEL Comix Zone: Night of The Mutants		2010-08-09 03:58:00

Author:
Sabre_
Posts: 653


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