Archive: 25 posts

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On A RollSketchNZ Solve puzzles, Pull levers, Grab switch's and roll the key to the exit! inspired by B3's Chomp to it. Tell me what you guys think of my level Screens by Domick12 http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/1.jpg http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/2.jpg http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/3.jpg http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/4.jpg http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/5.jpg http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/6.jpg

2010-06-23 22:46:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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WOOOT! After Water Works, I'm crazy excited to play this.

2010-06-24 00:49:00 Author: Voltergeist Posts: 1702

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Hiya SketchNZ- I loved this level, it was crafted just the way I like it. The factory theme was very well executed, with great stickering and nifty platfroming. I knew right off that this level was going to be really cool just by completing the obstacle at the very beginning. I love the bubble placement too. You are great with puzzles. The level was short but sweet. In fact, I enjoyed playing this enough to where I just downloaded Water Works. I look forward to playing that. I rated the level :star::star::star::star::star: and gave the level a <3.

2010-06-24 02:08:00 Author: X-FROGBOY-X Posts: 1800

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Thanks alot FrogBoy. Im glad you liked my levels i got the name for this one when i saw Valcro jonze's coment on my water works level forum "your on a roll". And thanks to you too B3 i hope you enjoy the level.

2010-06-24 02:47:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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Hi, SketchNZ! I tried your level right now. Very interesting creation. I love main idea and level mechanics. You choose good materials and made good level's environments. Level is not big, but all it's parts look very nice. Puzzles not difficult but interesting. You did great level! I gave you 5 stars and heart for it.

2010-06-24 09:40:00 Author: Domik12 Posts: 838

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cool screenshots domik hmm now i need to figure out how to get them on my post.

2010-06-24 22:06:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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Remove the asterisks from this text and put it at the bottom of your original post. Screens by Domick12 [*img]http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/1.jpg[/img] [*img]http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/2.jpg[/img] [*img]http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/3.jpg[/img] [*img]http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/4.jpg[/img] [*img]http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/5.jpg[/img] [*img]http://lbprussia.ucoz.ru/images/SketchNZ/6.jpg[/img]

2010-06-24 22:59:00 Author: Voltergeist Posts: 1702

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Hey there SketchNZ, I've tried to get to your feedback when I can. Now is the time I get to it. First off, I want to say, I only seen one level attempting this. That is BlueBulletBill, and seeing as you did it too made the level fun. The theme of your level was in a construction like area. Anyways, I enjoyed your mechanics and it looks like you're very good at some logic switches. Your level was nice, but the fun didn't last long. Everything is a job well done, but it could have been a job done better. You are not faraway from being a great creator. Just a few more steps and you're there. One thing some great creators have is creator's block. People tend to make a good level. Everyone can do that. Although, the challenge is, can you create a good level that takes up all of the thermo? It's very hard to get through a creator's block, but it'll be worth it at the end. Last thing before I rate, I have to say your level is magnificent. I'm very glad to see new creators like you. So now that I'm done, I'll rate you. Length: 3/5 (OH NOEZ A BAD RATING!? Come on, I know you got enough thermo ) Creativy: 5/5 (I liked the stickers and materials chosen) Corner Editing: 5/5 (I like your corner, you've become better since I last saw Water Works) Theme: 5/5 (It looks like you're good with switchs, as for terrain too!) Story: N/A (Nothing here ) Total: 18/20 I liked the level a lot, and therefore you got 5 stars :star::star::star::star::star: and a heart <3 I can't wait to see what you build next. Until we meet again, -Spark

2010-06-24 23:05:00 Author: Spark151 Posts: 801

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Wait, what? That's why it's called on a roll? ZOMG! I inspired this, didn't I? Wow, I have to stop delaying and play this NOW. Rushing to my PSP, B3

2010-06-24 23:17:00 Author: Voltergeist Posts: 1702

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oh did i forget to say it was inspired by B3? yes i did sorry bro ill put it in the top post. Thanks sparks! Its sorta a little demo i am going to make a full thermo level next, its going to be tricky though im thinking puzzles... hard puzzles.

2010-06-24 23:53:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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I am honored to have inspired this. You made a great level, yet again! I'm not great at leaving feedback, so I'll just say... what Spark said.

2010-06-25 00:36:00 Author: Voltergeist Posts: 1702

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Hey SchetchNZ! This is a pretty awsome level that you have made here i would say. The idea for the cool contraption and puzzles and everything was pretty fun to play through! Thanks for the fun level to play. I gave you five stars :star::star::star::star::star: and hearted you as an author <3 to see what great stuff your going to make in the future. Keep up the good work!

2010-06-25 00:39:00 Author: eagerneph Posts: 1536

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Dude!! This was another fantastic level!! Very well done with the level design and mechanics. You are becoming one of my new favorite creators. This level reminded me of a Jackofcourse level and that is good. Very good. Your choice of materials and brilliant gameplay just put me to mind of one of his fun levels. Great job Buddy!! Five stars and another heart from me!! <3

2010-06-25 04:04:00 Author: VelcroJonze Posts: 1305

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Hey Sketch! sorry i took a while to give feedback but thanks for leaving me a mssg saying u had a new level i played it right away! anyways a brilliant level, though short. the environment was well done and i managed to find a secret area w/ bubbles! great job bro and keep it up!! 5stars and a heart!

2010-06-25 06:33:00 Author: Alismuffin Posts: 1328

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Thanks Vj and ali The next level i make will not be short i promiss! im already working on another level and im trying to full thermo so it will be a week or two for me to publish Thanks again everyone!!

2010-06-25 22:19:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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Hidy Ho SketchNZ! I'm sorry that it took so long for me to reply. This was the last week of actual school (before exams) at the school I am working at in China, so that has kept me busy, plus I have had a cold, so I have been heading to bed pretty soon after I get home (normally I would stay up for hours doing LBP stuff). Anyway, enough excuses. I finally got a chance to play your level and now I am here to give feedback :-) This was an excellent level. Everything about it was well executed. First and foremost, this is a sort of an escort level. Though the object being escorted isn't alive Anyway, I have played many levels like this on PSP and PS3, and while they always seem fun, the idea has gotten a bit old. HOWEVER: You have executed it better than anyone! I have never played an "escort" level that is this good. Some of the things you do with the switches to move the cylinder around are just plain awesome. Massive kudos to you for taking the escort level concept and adding your own layer of awesomeness to it to make it feel fresh and fun again. As for scenery, the level looked awesome as well! You did an excellent job with stickers and material choices. I stopped to check out new areas as I came to them because they looked so good. Scenery-wise, I think that this is a step up from Water Works. My only complaint for the level is that it is a bit short. You said that it is a demo, but it feels too long for a demo. I think that it would have been great to have just held off on publishing for a few weeks and made the level use all of the thermo. I can't get inside that brilliant head of yours and figure out why you decided it would be a good idea to publish this as short as it is, but I can beg you not to do this again. I really think that an author cripples themself when they do a thing like this. The issue is that if you make a level based off of the same concept later on, it will not feel as fresh, and if you don't make another level then we are left with a half-length level. I really think that it would be a good idea for you to hold off on publishing next time and just give us a full length level. This would seriously be one of the best levels on PSP if it just wasn't so darn short. I was blown away by how good it was getting, and I was getting hooked and I couldn't believe it when I fell down and the finish line was there! I thought that I was just getting to the 1/3 mark in the level :-( Don't get me wrong, if you had obviously used up all of your thermo by making ridiculously awesome custom scenery (i.e.: Salieri's Curses!), then I would let the level pass as being this short. I have no problem with a level being short if the thermo is being used for tech or scenery (heck, Here and There could be considered short, but the thermo is maxed out). But when there is obviously a lot of thermo to spare and the level ends up this short it makes a poo sad. I don't say all of that to make you feel like you did a bad job! I really think that this level is excellent (hence me saying that it could have been one of the best levels on PSP). I just wanted to really push the point that any time an author publishes a level this short they are seriously crippling themself for absolutely no reason other than a rush to get the level published. I sent B3 this same long message (with different words) on his Big Blue Behemoth level because it was also fabulous but ridiculously short. So, awesome work Sketch! You have proven you can be a top tier creator on the PSP! I am seriously looking forward to your next level!

2010-06-26 06:52:00 Author: amazingflyingpoo Posts: 1515

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Thanks poo! I realy was not thinking when i published this level, i was running out of ideas that day so i just went and published it, Then the next day i got alot of cool ideas for the level that i should have added but i already published it so everyone would have seen the first part of the level already. this level looks alot longer on my drawing. The next level i make will be full thermo And hopefully have a boss at the end or somthing. I will learn from my mistakes and be a great creator very soon

2010-06-26 07:08:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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The level was AMAZING! It was bit short, but still good.I gave it 5 stars and heart. Good job!

2010-06-26 15:38:00 Author: himoks Posts: 734

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Hey Sketch Love the level, was very very well made, and as others have mentioned, short. I liked how you made the level puzzle literally "start" simultaneously with the player. That is, the ball started rolling along, as the player moved to get going, was a very cool cue. I usually don't mind if a level of this sort is short as sometimes I feel they are too drawn out with what all the switch pulling and lever turning kinda getting old by the last act, but as Poo mentioned, I was just getting into the zone, and bama, thats when you ended it. I think one more puzzle room would have at least made the level feel complete. Look forward to your next!

2010-06-27 00:53:00 Author: kaiju_kid Posts: 329

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Yes i agree with you and poo it did not feal like a complete level. Water works would probly seem real short too if it was not for going back to turn the valve anyway i just drew another level on my pad and it is looking good! NO MORE SHORT LEVELS haha

2010-06-27 01:18:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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Yea,it was fun but short lived

2010-06-27 02:48:00 Author: Hypnotic7 Posts: 28

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You're unstoppable! Nice job on the Spotlight mention for this one - you made it to the Spotlight twice!

2010-06-27 07:15:00 Author: Taffey Posts: 3187

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thanks Taffy dose that mean this level is spotlighted too?

2010-06-27 07:32:00 Author: SketchNZ Posts: 1668

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The level was great! It was short, so the level was good. I gave it 5 stars. Anyway that device was wonderful.

2010-06-27 09:43:00 Author: hphzq966 Posts: 76

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Hey again SketchNZ, Congratulations on the Spotlight nod! I was really amazed with interactivity of the gameplay, and I hope you can extend it to a full level in the future. Great job, and please keep those awesome levels coming! Basking under a rising star, jeffcu28

2010-06-27 18:55:00 Author: jeffcu28 Posts: 648

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