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Sky Temple
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| Sky TempledTOtheTEE http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto_6.jpgSol has let you into the sacred Sky Temple, but his brother Luna is opposed to this and has summoned his worst storm to cast you out. Will you earn Luna's respect and survive the storm? Or fall to your doom? Full Preview Here (http://dtothetee.blogspot.com/p/sky-temple.html) http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/ICON0.png Welcome to Sky Temple Home of Sol and Luna, birthplace of morning and night. YouTube Recording (http://youtu.be/7qs8u-7Zgbo?hd=1) by Memodrix (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?4780-Memodrix) Full Preview Here (http://dtothetee.blogspot.com/p/sky-temple.html) http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto_7-1.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto_5.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto_4.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto_68.jpg http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto_12.jpg | 2010-06-19 23:54:00 Author: dTOtheTEE  Posts: 183 |
| Fun level, I had a nice time playing it. | 2010-06-20 01:21:00 Author: ApeCheese  Posts: 369 |
| Fun level, I had a nice time playing it. Thanks Dude! I am about to play your swim club level, and I WILL make it to the pool!!!!!! | 2010-06-20 21:01:00 Author: dTOtheTEE Posts: 183 |
I've played you're other level and I'll be sure to review this one too. I just have to post my review on your other level thread first  p.s. there's a thanks button right below the posters comment at the bottom left, you can thank them with that because they might not see your comment telling them thanks lol  | 2010-06-20 21:11:00 Author: wolverine_2008  Posts: 304 |
| Update: -New Lighting and Music -Finished Plot -New Ending -More Multiplayer Friendly | 2010-06-21 07:32:00 Author: dTOtheTEE Posts: 183 |
| Good updates, they definitely improved the level. Thanks Dude! I am about to play your swim club level, and I WILL make it to the pool!!!!!! There's no pool at the Clubhouse you just have to be a really good swimmer to get to it. But that doesn't matter, only four people out of around 4,700 plays got to the Clubhouse without using the secret boat. You'd think I'd be disappointed but, no, this makes me oh so happy, this is now my favorite of my levels because it just has so many secrets/features that I doubt anyone will ever discover them all on their own. | 2010-06-21 09:21:00 Author: ApeCheese Posts: 369 |
| awesome level,good work | 2010-06-21 15:21:00 Author: Iop330  Posts: 40 |
| Went ahead and played your level, as I love temples! Anyways, heres a review! The Good: - The visuals were top notch. - Cloud jumping was fun. The Bad: - During the first cloud jumping section, I saw a Mag Key switch on an electric cloud that was very visible  - During the second cloud jumping section I saw a Sensor switch on a cloud that seemed out of place and didnt do anything. - The level was very short. Just as I started to have fun, it ended. You have a lot going on in this level that I like. The story and usage of the sun and moon is well thought, and provides prime chances for interesting puzzles and platforming. The level looks very pretty, as well. However, the level was very short, and ended abruptly. I really wanted to play more. What little there was, was a fun romp however I gave you a :star::star::star:. This level has a lot of potential. I would love to see more from it. Until then, I just cant heart it :/ Please check out my level: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=30124-The-Shining-Clock-tower-of-Dreams Thanks!! | 2010-07-12 06:11:00 Author: Laharl  Posts: 152 |
| I checked your level out... 5... 6... 7... 8! seconds ago the camera angles I found were a 'lil quirky some times, the level was short bit the visuals were rather good and I had a nice time playing it :star::star::star::star:'s great job. | 2010-07-12 10:19:00 Author: huntedstorm  Posts: 488 |
| Tried out your level last night. I liked it, but felt that the temple itself was rather short in comparison to the cloud jumping. The second section of cloud jumping also seemed to not add much of anything new other than the timer, so it felt like filler. Maybe adding in additional obstacles like lightning or wind or even moving clouds might make that part more interesting. The temple was pretty. | 2010-07-12 20:53:00 Author: Spoony_Bard4  Posts: 3 |
| Hey man I just played your level and it was impressive. I love the why you represent the character that they are the sun and the moon thats is really cool. The obstacle were really nice but a little repeated also the level was king of shout. Also I think you should go to comphermc level Font Central and get some fonts because the sticker for a title doesn't look good. Overallscore. Visualization: :star::star::star::star: Gameplay/Puzzle: :star::star::star: originality: :star::star::star::star::star: Music/Sounds: :star::star::star::star: I gave this level a :star::star::star::star: it was good but I wish it was longer also thanks for helping me with my level  | 2010-07-12 22:57:00 Author: Arnald23  Posts: 1843 |
| In response to everyone's feedback the following update has been made: -Added new intro. -Extended platforming distance. -Added another slide. -Added springboard obstacles. -More sounds and lights. Please give the new and Improved Sky Temple a try! | 2010-07-14 07:31:00 Author: dTOtheTEE Posts: 183 |
| The level was pretty alright Positives: - Cloud Jumping - level design Negatives: - Short Sugguestions: - The level was fun till it ended kinda short just for future reference when you make a level have few friends test it 1st & get there honest opinions so you can fix everything beforehand then publish & hear others feedback. Overall Good Level | 2010-07-14 09:24:00 Author: Sabre_  Posts: 653 |
| The level was fun till it ended kinda short just Hm this makes me wonder if you snuck in before the recent update. I added a few more platform elements as well as a huge pompous intro that should make the level a bit longer. I also have a about 1/4 of thermo left and could easily tack on more before the level end gate. But I think this level is good enough to chill for a while as I finish up LBJ BETA. If you saw the lame sticker-ed intro Sabre then you must play again!! | 2010-07-14 19:29:00 Author: dTOtheTEE Posts: 183 |
| alright man no doubt ill replay it again and let you know wats up | 2010-07-14 19:57:00 Author: Sabre_ Posts: 653 |
| Twas a lot of fun. It was very well made and I enjoyed playing it. For me it was a little short but length of a level doesnt really bother me if its a fun level, it just makes me want to play a sequel! | 2010-07-14 21:33:00 Author: Meta-Armor  Posts: 80 |
| Since you fixed things, I went ahead and played through it again. Here are my thoughts. The Good: ------------- + The new intro worked much better + Was a bit more challenging. The singing platforms gave your level character, too! + It was a bit longer. The Bad: --------------- - It was still short. Though, this isnt anything big since you did make a great effort in making it last longer. - There were a few places in the beginning where I didnt know where to jump and had to make leaps of faith to get to the next platform. Consider making the platform easier to see, or using the camera tool. - The second cloud section felt added on. And I just kinda ran right past Luna...xD It was like, "Oh hai..." Zoom. Perhaps give the clouds here something unique? Like a constant forward-backward movement, to make things feel windy, so the play has to have proper timing to jump across cloud to cloud? Your level has DEFINITELY improved. It was fun, and I had a good time playing it. This time around, the added part at the beginning was good, and the platforming still remains fun but a bit challenging. This time, I gave you :star::star::star::star: and a <3 Nice work!! | 2010-07-15 01:34:00 Author: Laharl Posts: 152 |
| Hey, I've taken it upon myself to review some levels lately since I'm a new creator as well and, well, people have done the same for me! You were at the top of the list, so here goes: The atmosphere of the level was great, big blue sky, clouds, and the sun and the moon... it definately made me feel like I was in the Sky Temple! It wasn't the most amazing design, but it was good and it not lacking in any major way. The initial platforming sequence was a bit slow, but this was helpful once your name dropped from the ceiling. The temple areas made good use of the "wire-frame" material (can't recall which one that was, actually) and it's one of my favorites. The cloud sequences were fun and bouncy and just dangerous enough for me to jump carefully but not lose my mind in the process. The overall level design was clean, and there weren't many nooks and crannies I could find myself stuck or squeezed to death in, which is one of my biggest pet peeves. The only thing I could see using improvement is maybe some more decorations here or there... go wild with some stickers or objects. The level itself didn't have too many challenging parts, either, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Maybe you could throw in an extra 2x player section for fun? (Good way to double the plays you get, too!) Also, the emitted sun-slides tended to pile up near the end. I wasn't sure if that was intentional or not, but I like to time a live run and try to match my emitted objects up with the end of whatever is being emitted. Does that make sense? Anywho, not sure if this is by design or not, so mostly just a comment. Feel free to jump into my level this evening (check my sig) if you feel up for a bit of F4F! Good work! | 2010-07-15 02:50:00 Author: schm0  Posts: 1239 |
| This level is pretty good. I would recommend it to friends. 1 thing though, I think you should build a level based on the beginning where it was all dark. That whole area was sweet. That material and the lights worked very well together. I still gave it 4 stars and a heart though | 2010-07-15 18:19:00 Author: L1GhTmArE  Posts: 519 |
| Thanks for the feedback of "The Hero Chronicles LV4 The Lost Lagoon". Anyways it's a fun level despite the lack of visuals. The lighting looks fantastic and the racing part is remarkable and the rain effect is really cool. My suggestion is to try adding more visuals and make some tools visible. I gave it 5 stars. | 2010-07-16 03:35:00 Author: JustinArt  Posts: 1314 |
| You know... I could have sworn I've played this already. I'll have to check and get back to you | 2010-07-16 03:51:00 Author: Mrgenji  Posts: 803 |
| Everyone who left feedback and supported me with this level, this update is for you! Thank you for making Sky Temple my very first "cool level"! Music Update Prize bubble update Enhanced Temple Design Increased Visuals Diversity of platforming and its LOOOOOONGGGEEEEERRRRR!!!! This was the biggest issue for most testers so I have added another couple minutes of rich platforming for your X button mashing pleasure. http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v498/upfull0ne/Sky%20Temple/APhoto_67.jpg -DT | 2010-07-17 05:05:00 Author: dTOtheTEE Posts: 183 |
| Very nice level. The atmosphere is wonderful, and aside from me constantly falling to my death due to my lack of skills the first couple of playthroughs no big issues. :star::star::star::star: In multiplayer, however, if someone dies and then someone else gets to the finish, the scoreboard will crush them as they respawn. over and over and over again. I think the area that you pop out of the scoreboard is covered or something, so a little creative editing would fix that. and here is your vid, as ordered. fresh out of the oven. If its a little blurry, it might still need to cool...give it time. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7qs8u-7Zgbo | 2010-07-17 22:58:00 Author: Memodrix  Posts: 879 |
| Hey, I just played it and here's what I thought. First of all, I love the temples o Sol and Luna. They were fantastic and had a great theme plus I love all the room you put in Luna's temple, reminds me of one of the parts in the trailer for LBP2. I also liked the part in that building with the gears, it was a nice style plus great work with music and sound effects. I thought it was a kinda short, but still fun. Maybe this is just me but I've never fully liked the lbp clouds as platforms. I think that area could've been better. It felt a little random but not too hard to get through. Overall, this is a great level with potential and great music and lighting. It might be short but most of the areas have a great theme plus one other thing. I loved walking on the logo. :star::star::star::star: Is it okay if you give feedback on my level, platformia? The thread's located in my sig. | 2010-07-18 00:24:00 Author: Dragonvarsity  Posts: 5208 |
| Hey, thanks for the feedback on my level TRINE Theme (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=30735-TRINE-Theme). This is my F4F: It's a great level, with good platforms and very fun. I liked the cloud jumps, and the bouncing jumps too. Good: Platforms Cloud Jumps Bouncing jumps Walk on the tittle Lighting Visuals Ice ramps Improvements: First time you meet SOL, there is a Magnetic Key on the right. Longer ?Change level name? Because when I searched Sky Temple I didn?t find it. A cool level that deserves the http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/images/smilies/new/star.png http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/images/smilies/new/star.png http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/images/smilies/new/star.png http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/images/smilies/new/star.png http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/images/smilies/new/star.png http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/images/smilies/new/heart.png That I gived it. | 2010-07-19 09:20:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| First time you meet SOL, there is a Magnetic Key on the right. ?Change level name? Because when I searched Sky Temple I didn?t find it. GAH! Does this happen to anyone else? Once in a while a switch goes visible its so annoying. And I did accidentally leave the 3.o in the title of my recent publish. So it is Sky Temple 3.0 but this is a temp mistake I will fix tom. | 2010-07-19 11:57:00 Author: dTOtheTEE Posts: 183 |
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