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Tundra agility,course 1. V2

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Tundra agility,course 1. V2IOP330
This map is one big race in which you have to travel through the icy waste on the south pole.Contains 'Real water' suitable for 2 players.
It is my first proper level and i hope you enjoy it

P.S: How do you upload pictures
2010-06-19 15:41:00

Author:
Iop330
Posts: 40


Hi lop330, thanks for playing Escape Little Big City!

I just finished playing your Tundra Agility Course level and I really enjoyed it. It had an excellent range of diverse obstacles and dangers. And I was very impressed by your intro, especially the large floating text that looked great!

Some Notes:

-It is really cool when the amphibious vehicle splashes down into the water during the intro, but this is interrupted by the camera going down to your name. I would change the timing so that the player still feels the excitement of splashing into the water.

- During the first big climb upwards there are many times when falling means you have to start allll over again. Many players do not have the patience for this and will leave the level. I recommend using smoke to prevent the player from being able to fall back down to previously completed areas.

- Enclose the entire area with the spinning sponge circles in order to prevent the player from flying out of the level. Also recommend zooming out the camera and angeling it upwards.

- During the part where you repel down avoiding the obstacles the camera zone is off kilter. Make sure the zone is only as wide as the obstacle so it stays centered. Also I would zoom waaaayyyy out on that one.

-The main Boss can not hit you if you are standing on the very edge closest to him, i was able to stand there and light him up without being in danger. Also I could not see the boulders come down or the roof at all.

-i would go through and check out all your cameras, they all seem a little too close.

-General Cleanup, lots of seems and gaps between shapes.


Sorry I know that was a lot of comments but I felt like they were all things that would greatly improve this level. I think a little more polish work would really tidy up this adventure. :star::star::star: and Heart. Cheers!!
2010-06-23 02:12:00

Author:
dTOtheTEE
Posts: 183


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