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f4fI've changed the name to Crystal Forest Chapter 4: The misteries of few.Second--Smile-- Story driven adventure with platform and puzzle elements. Hey people I've been away from lbp for a while but i'm back with the 4th chapter in my Crystal forest series. This chapter takes sackboy to the ancient village of Proncipia. http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/flinnoy/APhoto.jpg http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/flinnoy/APhoto_1-2.jpg http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/flinnoy/APhoto_2-1.jpg http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/flinnoy/APhoto_3-1.jpg http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/flinnoy/APhoto_4-1.jpg http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/flinnoy/APhoto_5.jpg http://i617.photobucket.com/albums/tt252/flinnoy/APhoto_6.jpg As the level progresses you will encounter several boss fights, puzzles, platforming sections and story characters. Constructed with a high attention to detail. I hope you enjoy playing it as much as i enjoyed making it.

2010-06-05 19:19:00 Author: second--smile-- Posts: 57

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I'll play this as soon as i play the other 3! They all look great

2010-06-06 00:44:00 Author: Nuffles Posts: 132

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looks amazing! I'll play it asap andI'l lbe back with comments

2010-06-06 01:53:00 Author: Chump Posts: 1712

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Played through the whole series. Some playtesting needs to be done on chapter 4. There were visible switches, pistons and strings throughout the stage. Could not complete it because the switches in the 4 color wheel room would not move to spin the wheels. You probably set the visible strings on the switches too tight. Gave it a :star::star::star: and will play through it again once that room is fixed.

2010-06-06 03:54:00 Author: Unknown User

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Played through the whole series. Some playtesting needs to be done on chapter 4. There were visible switches, pistons and strings throughout the stage. Could not complete it because the switches in the 4 color wheel room would not move to spin the wheels. You probably set the visible strings on the switches too tight. Gave it a :star::star::star: and will play through it again once that room is fixed. Thanks for the heads up. It was some kind of glitch were the switch's have completing glued togeither, not just the base to the floor. It's all fixed now though and you should be able to finish the level.

2010-06-06 16:31:00 Author: second--smile-- Posts: 57

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I've fixed, what i think to be all the bugs and visible switchs and pistons. Also change some of the music a little. It's a bit of a shame that the cool pages are so cluttered with survival challenges these days, makes it hard to really get any play's.

2010-06-06 22:34:00 Author: second--smile-- Posts: 57

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Just got finished playing it. I liked the visuals, but some areas looked duller then others. I think you should work on your grammar, you tend to say "your" instead of "you're" as well as other ridiculous typos. I also thought that the oldman looked creepy with the big ol' eye lights. The gameplay was pretty fun-ish, but I couldn't complete the level because the switch at the end didn't work. I gave the level :star::star: Can you leave feedback on Farewell Ruins of the Moon: Chapter One (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=26787-Farewell-Ruins-of-the-Moon-Chapter-One) by AbstractSam? Thanks.

2010-06-09 04:48:00 Author: AbstractSam Posts: 332

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Just got finished playing it. I liked the visuals, but some areas looked duller then others. I think you should work on your grammar, you tend to say "your" instead of "you're" as well as other ridiculous typos. I also thought that the oldman looked creepy with the big ol' eye lights. The gameplay was pretty fun-ish, but I couldn't complete the level because the switch at the end didn't work. I gave the level :star::star: Can you leave feedback on Farewell Ruins of the Moon: Chapter One (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=26787-Farewell-Ruins-of-the-Moon-Chapter-One) by AbstractSam? Thanks. I'll fix the grammer later on today and there is no switch at the end of the level? not sure what your getting stuck on. i'll give your level a play later as well.

2010-06-09 11:44:00 Author: second--smile-- Posts: 57

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Just played all four. I noticed a few issues with spelling and grammar too. Mainly just errors with homophones (words that sound the same but have different meanings and are often spelled differently) such as mixing 'meat' and 'meet' (meat is a noun and you eat it, meet is a verb you use when you wanna hang out with someone ) Really, though, spelling and grammar aren't a big deal, so I wouldn't sweat it too much. Just keep in mind that many players aren't native speakers of English so it could be helpful to keep speech short and to the point? Not that it ruins the enjoyment of the game, at least for me. Visually, your levels are stunning and I love all the creatures you've created. Nice story too and I really enjoyed the obstacles and bosses. Unfortunately, I also got stuck like AbstractSam (chapter 4 of course). It was after I went to that erm... the dark world, after I used my 'spells' on the statue. The bridges fall and your sack is left stuck on an island with seemingly no way off. My eyes are terrible so maybe there's a switch or something I can't see? Jumping definitely doesn't work because the wheel in the background kills you as you jump past it (for some reason??). I tried covering everything with stickers but it doesn't seem to be a switch (it COULD be what AbstactSam is talking about because the little blue light on the tree makes it look a little like a switch). If it's just me who's stuck, I wouldn't worry, but if there are other people reporting this problem, you could consider making it slightly more obvious what is expected of the player at this point? Just I think frustration can stop some people giving a level a good rating! Hope this feedback was useful.

2010-06-09 14:44:00 Author: Jembru Posts: 16

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Thanks Jembru, i've fixed the last part now, after the 3 bridge's there should be a cut scene. Not sure why it stopped working but all should be fine now. In regards to the grammer i always make mistakes like that, i'm slighty dyslexic and have always had trouble with spelling and grammer. I wish i could keep the speech bubbles simple and to the point but i have a story to tell with this chapter. I wish there was an option to highlight key words like they do in the story levels, that would solve the problem. Thanks for the feedback, you've been quite helpfull.

2010-06-09 16:34:00 Author: second--smile-- Posts: 57

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I don't believe it!! Just tried to play your level again and the network is down. Typical. I'll play again as soon as I am able. I wouldn't worry too much about the spelling and stuff, because what you may lack in writing skills, you more than make up for with your great imagination and impressive creativity! There's no way I could do it, so well done!! -J

2010-06-09 18:30:00 Author: Jembru Posts: 16

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