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The Janice Planet

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The Janice PlanetMelted_Gummybear
An exact replica of the European TV spot on Youtube!
I am not going to post any pictures because it is literally an exact replica of this video:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JOI8E5B9pz8
I hope you guys like it and would love to hear your opinions!
2010-06-04 22:41:00

Author:
Melted_Gummybear
Posts: 162


wow.... um... wow. I lol'd. Sorry about your breakup.2010-06-10 03:08:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


Morg, hes not the one talking
Anyway, I love this trailer! it inspired me to do my famous heart object.
I'll check it out soon
2010-06-10 03:16:00

Author:
Chump
Posts: 1712


Haha I remember that trailer thing and a few others. I'll definitely check this out when I'm on LBP again.2010-06-10 03:51:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


I'll check it out later, if its anything like that video it'll be awesome.2010-06-10 23:45:00

Author:
Livewire410
Posts: 44


Hey I played it and there's a few inaccuracies I think should be fixed, it's a short level so getting it nailed visually is ideal. The heart area is not that close to the vid. Needs the blue pulsating lights at back, 4 instead of 3 shards at the back. And more jagged glass around the edges of heart, not to mention cam zoom, I think you can do that by emitting a cam maybe. So have an emitter emit the zoomed out cam attached to invisible dark matter with infinite life max 1 at a time. Then put a new zoomed one into the emitter and emit just above the old cam and have a delay switch trigger it so it emits the new one exactly when you get electrified. Theoretically that works in my head, let's see if it actually does the trick. The molly area is not night time. You should keep it bright but add the back thin and try figuring out what stickers they used in vid. Dunno why the mouth is attached by rod or something in vid, I think it would be much nicer on piston set to invisible that bobs up and down. I think this ad was from when you couldn't hide connectors and bolts but I think now you can it would be a good move in most areas. You have mollys leg connectors hidden, I don't think they should be. Also her left foot appeared to not move. Her hair could be more accurate, in the vid it looks almost exactly like MM clouds, try those. If that fails make thin versions and hopefully you will get closer to the look in video. I think it would be nicer to end if you run to the left of where you blow molly up. Gas deaths aren't my fave. Also heart area is animated in vid, try getting that down as it looks great in vid. The zoomed out cam would really help too. Missing stone spikes near molly. Also the fists should be smaller and attached to very thin cardoard.

But the biggest thing missing is sfx. They are part of what makes the video funny like when molly explodes she makes a noise. And a chattering one when she is just there. A gust of wind sound plays when you first drop into heart. Also if you have the heartbeat sound from monster kit I think that would go well. There's twinkle from misc right at beginning area. As for music they use Wilderness in vid. Mechanism engage on entrance. I think wind in heart, pretty obscure. And another mechanism engage when you pull the switch to explode molly.

I really like it and the idea but needs a bit more polish and accuracy I think. I gave it :star::star::star::star: for now, please improve it with my suggestions and it would definitely get another star and probably a heart too, I really like that trailer lol

When LBP2 comes out seriously should get someone who can do deans voice perfectly and add that instead of speech bubbles.

Also transition from heart to molly I think you can fade to white quickly with a super massive white spotlight set to foggy above the scene, maybe in other directions too. Have a speed mag key fade it on the off very quickly before dissolving the mag key that way light has no danger of coming back on. Or an on/off whatever suits. I just think the way it looks now is too untidy and you can see things as the cam flies to other checkpoint. I know the trailer cheats because its just a separate level, but I believe it can be done with trickery.
2010-06-11 00:39:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


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