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First Day at Sack Elementry

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First Day at Sack ElementryKody59527
Remake from the leel made by my sister, Teddy5991. Also my first level!
The gist of the level is that Sackboy goes to his first day at Elementry School. Don't be fooled by the kiddish idea though, this level features quite humorous dialouge. I made it so the kiddies can be entertained by the level portion, but the more mature (13 and up) can enjoy the humor in the level. Feedback is greatly appricated!
2010-06-01 00:35:00

Author:
Kody59527
Posts: 121


Really enjoyed the sense of humor in this one.

+ Big boy slide - Awesome!
+ View of Earth - hillarious
+ Gym teacher is funny.

Really cool dialogue that actually made me lol. Nice work.
2010-06-05 07:05:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


funny level! I gave a five star because its very "schooly", original and funny!
some of the design was great such as the lockers, the class room, the house, space, cafeeria and the bus, but the rest of the visuals were so-so. the effects such stars and snow were cool. i thought the slide from space ould have been longer or better and i would have liked to see more PE challenges. loved the characters. if you felt like making it more advanced you could put a small puzzle in the classroom as a test or something (a suggestion).
also when you get home, the mom should say something other than "get your lunchbox"

if i think of anything else i'll let you know.
if you're up for F4F could you play my spelunking level? i've recently updated it and need feedback (Its in my signature). any problems, let me know.
2010-06-06 03:02:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


Very funny! The build up to the slide had me chuckling. Though, the slide itself was sort of a let down. I understand that to make it long, you had to break it into opposite sections, but the abrupt stops took away from the experience.

I'm a stickler for this, but working on spelling and grammar couldn't hurt

Elementary*

The color scheme really added to the childish effect. 4/5.

If you wouldn't mind giving some feedback on my level: Feral Tech: 90% (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=27419-Feral-Tech-90)
2010-06-06 09:34:00

Author:
Valgee
Posts: 105


I didn't expect to like this, but I have to say, it was pretty awesome!
Not the most complex of levels, but the humour was great. The PE challenges were pretty good too, I have to admit, I fell for the red swing! xD
Overall, 4 stars
Could I have feedback on my level S.A.C.K: Introduction (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=28058-S.A.C.K-Introduction)?
2010-06-06 21:14:00

Author:
Fish94
Posts: 554


Hey Im New To This,do i add you and donwload your level or what???2010-06-22 19:46:00

Author:
Jamesta
Posts: 39


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