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Eyes in the dark/Unfair platformer

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Eyes in the dark/Unfair platformerjohnbonbon
You are somehow in some dark cave that has eyes everywhere. when you get trouhgt it you find your self from the unfair land and you try to get out from there.
This level is platformer level. You have to get trought the dark place and the unfair land. The level has 3 bosses and 2 diferent places. Tell me what you think about it and what i should improve.
2010-05-29 09:58:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


AWESOME!!!!

Unfair platformers ROCK!!!
Will check it out!
2010-05-29 18:30:00

Author:
Spark151
Posts: 801


Downloading this now, expect feedback soon.

I love these levels!!

Edit:

Okay first off, I don't think I have ever seen a level as dark as the first segment. It amazes me how psp creators can make something so dark without lighting control. You totally had me squinting my eyes to see where I was going. Your gameplay was solid, I loved the platforming. The three bosses were very challenging but not impossible. The whole level was difficult but that's what these levels are all about. It's funny, if I would have DLed this under a different level name other than Unfair Platformer, I would have got frustrated and probably not finished it, but again, that's what these levels are all about, you know that going into it, and you stick with it to the scoreboard. I had a great time playing this and was only heard cursing at my psp a couple times.

Visually everything looked very nice. I loved the eyes lighting up the platforms on the first segment. When I made it out of the dark and into the brightness of the second stage and the theme from the gardens started playing I had a genuine sense of accomplishment. Making it to the scoreboard was even more satisfying, and hopefully the hardest thing I have to do on my three day weekend.

You get five stars and a heart and one for creator too!!

Don't worry about a f4f on this, you always leave awesome feedback on my threads and I always appreciate it.

Great job Himoks!!
2010-05-30 19:44:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Time for my feedback.

I liked the whole concept of the level being very dark.
I couldn't see anything at all, but those eyeballs helped guide my way through.
The level was pretty fun at the beginning, but it gets better with the unfair platforming part.
I thought the level was pretty hard, and it made me mad to the point where I almost quit the level.

Although, I managed to beat the level.
I liked the them, but it was kind of too plain, not much work put into it.
I did think the bosses were pretty random. The unfair platform obstacles were humorous and fun.
Not the best work, but you brought my attention.

Anyways, time for your rating.

Length: 3/5 (The level was a challenge, therefore it made the level last long. Although, that made me want to less play it)
Creativity: 5/5 (I like how the level starts out dark, and then it becomes an unfair platformer)
Corner Editing: 3/5 (The corner editing wasn't very good, but at least you took the time to do it, right?)
Theme: 4/5 (The structure of the level was plain, and the mechanics seem pretty basic)
Story: N/A (No story really built into it, no rating here, pass on )

Total: 15/20
Not the best level and not the best score. You did an amazing job, I will say. I gave you 5 star :star::star::star::star::star: (Probably on accident, but at least you got it )
You deserved at least a four star. Anyways, I will look forward to your levels.

Until we meet again,
-Spark
2010-05-31 03:55:00

Author:
Spark151
Posts: 801


Thanks so much for your feedbacks. I am really glad you both liked it. I was thinking that i will get bad feedbacks, but i didint.
I am so happy right now.
2010-05-31 06:31:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


hi, himok! You created good level. Very interesting main idea. I loved it! If you add some story it will be brilliant! But and tight now it is very good level with many cool obstacles. Cave part a little difficult, but very fun, I almost became blind while trying to find my path there And land part is very good too - there many small "bad" things that bring much fun for it. Maybe a little more environments with stickers and corner tool will make this part more better, but it is your level with your design and I loved it.

I gave you five stars for this level and will look for you next level.
2010-05-31 11:27:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


Thanks so much Domik12 for your positive feedback and i am glad you loved it. I was thinking a story for this level, but i am creating super mario bros 3 level and i wanted to publish this level quickly.2010-05-31 13:05:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


Thanks so much famouscustard for playng my level and i am finding your level right now, begouse i havent played my psp for 5 days or 3 i dont remember.2010-06-01 15:02:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


Hi himoks,
I just wanted to give you some feedback.
The overall idea is really great! First i didnt know what "trust the eyes" meant but i found out soon. I had one poblem in thqat section. The obstacle with the 4 one-eye platforms that descent into the gas. I were past it but then the magic mouth got activated when i was right on the edge. After i closed the textbox i died. That was kinda frustrating.
And the unfair land really is unfair! And i think its a little bit empty. More scenery and Background would be nice.

I wanna call out a contest: Anyone ace this level and i will always call you the "Grand Master of avoided Death!" (or Gm of luck )

Anyway i gave you 4 Stars.

greetings!
2010-06-01 15:08:00

Author:
Arrestor
Posts: 363


Thanks so much Arrestor for playng my level.
I will add scenery and background, but first i will finish my level what i am creating.
2010-06-01 16:15:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


This is such a funny and epic level! The first part really freaks me out and is really hard unless you turn the brightness up a lot! the bosses were really well made and fun to defeat the platforming in the dark section was challenging and fun at the same time. The second bit was hilarious and inspires me to make a new level : The psp imbecile test!
:star::star::star::star::star: and a<3!
2010-06-02 17:06:00

Author:
The Forgotten
Posts: 316


Hey just finished playing this level and it was quite good. There were some fun parts but a lot of it was very difficult and sometimes frustrating. I understand the second part was meant to be humourous (and it was) but the first part was just darn difficult.
Despite the difficulty, I completed the level and I like how you've created the visuals, kudos on them because they were difficult to recreate with no lighting tools.

3 stars from me

If you're still doing F4F: In Search of Idols by Coxy224

Thanks <3
2010-06-03 11:33:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


Thank you so much for playng my level The Forgotten and giving it a heart. I am really, really... really happy for the positive feedbacks what you all have given to my level.2010-06-03 11:39:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


Thanks so much Coxy224 for playng my level.2010-06-05 14:54:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


Hello-

I had a lot of fun playing your level. This is the first unfair platformer style level that I've played on the PSP. This level was funny in most places, but there were a few areas that were very frustraring to me. The areas that were dark at the beginning felt like it was just too tough, and the second and last bosses felt really hard also. I liked how you created the dark lighting effects in the first half of the level. Overall, this was a very tough but funny level.

I rated it :star::star::star::star:.
2010-06-06 00:33:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


Thanks so much X-FROGBOY-X for playng my level. I am glad that you had lot of fun playng my level.2010-06-06 11:34:00

Author:
himoks
Posts: 734


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