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Dark Skies: Chapter 1 UPDATED
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| Dark Skies: Chapter 1Masumi_Tsukino This is the beginning story of Dark Skies. It starts off with a boy named Jack.... Okay! Updated! I published my level and for some reason bugs got into it and glitches started to appear. I have edited out most of the glitches and will continue to play it until I stop the bugs from happening. This level was made for my story so it's purely the purpose of understand the environment and listening to the narrator. (though it sounds a great deal better on paper.) So it's not that great of a level because it was setting the story. I think the next two levels will be more fun. So here are the new pictures! Beginning starts out in the lovely town of Skydon: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto.jpg And Gramma's house: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/GrammaapossHouse.jpg Then the forest: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_1.jpg And a monster: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_2.jpg Up the mountain: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_3.jpg To the Tree House: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_5.jpg The Tree House: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_4.jpg Down the mountain: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_6.jpg Undeathness: XD http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_7.jpg Ice Slide: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_8.jpg 2x Players: http://i80.photobucket.com/albums/j191/tgainsbrough/Little%20Big%20Planet/APhoto_9.jpg I am editing the level as much as I can when problems arise for some reason it keeps doing it. So I will keep trying until it works. Thanks for your support! | 2010-05-22 22:29:00 Author: tgainsbrough  Posts: 7 |
If I were you add some pics from your level to this thread it would look a lot better  | 2010-05-23 15:25:00 Author: Arnald23  Posts: 1843 |
| 1) I usually post things i found odd or that need fixing in numbered lists, but this deserves attention, pretty neat how you got the water show at the very front edge of the screen, i don't know how you did that, i'm dumbfounded, but kudos, lol. 2) The tree near the second enemy you encounter needs to be glued  Edit: Actually most do, now i'm not sure if this was intentional or not? 3) If for some reason (like trying to get the score bubbles, lmao) you push both blocks at the base of Skydon Mountain towards the far left and than jump off into the front layer, you get stuck with no way back out. 4) You should make the music radios invisible, they kinda detract from the immersion factor. 5) The journey down the mountain is "i want to kill the author who made this" at best. Seriously, the balloons didn't go down, so the only way was to jump down and hope to land on one of the sponges on the bottom and from there, jump off to the side. And i just got to the next village, put the tools in the air balloon and it seems the level ends here, but a scoreboard is missing or your switch ain't working. You have some cool ideas in there, but this needs some more work. 3 Stars/Not Hearted. 4 Stars/Hearted (both Level and Author) after a second playthrough when everything (or at least the most serious shortcomings) were fixed. If you would check out either of my levels (check my sig or side bar), it'ld be greatly appreciated | 2010-05-23 15:49:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| 1) I usually post things i found odd or that need fixing in numbered lists, but this deserves attention, pretty neat how you got the water show at the very front edge of the screen, i don't know how you did that, i'm dumbfounded, but kudos, lol. 2) The tree near the second enemy you encounter needs to be glued Edit: Actually most do, now i'm not sure if this was intentional or not? 3) If for some reason (like trying to get the score bubbles, lmao) you push both blocks at the base of Skydon Mountain towards the far left and than jump off into the front layer, you get stuck with no way back out. 4) You should make the music radios invisible, they kinda detract from the immersion factor. 5) The journey down the mountain is "i want to kill the author who made this" at best. Seriously, the balloons didn't go down, so the only way was to jump down and hope to land on one of the sponges on the bottom and from there, jump off to the side. And i just got to the next village, put the tools in the air balloon and it seems the level ends here, but a scoreboard is missing or your switch ain't working. You have some cool ideas in there, but this needs some more work. 3 Stars/Not Hearted. If you would check out either of my levels (check my sig or side bar), it'ld be greatly appreciated 1) In the story the village is surrounded by water. So it worked out well. (use the stick not the dpad.) 2) I have glued those tree 10 times and they won't stay glued. 3) There is a hole in the side of the mountain you are supposed to fall in to get to bubble not use the block. I will check on the getting stuck though. 4) Which one is visible? they were supposed to be invisible. 5) Yes the balloons got attached to the top I detached them. 6) I had someone else accidentally turn off the switch should be fixed now. NOTE: I noticed when I published my level a lot of stuff fell apart when it worked perfectly playing it in My Moon. The elevator broke and the balloons attached. Water levels didn't rise. It was really strange. I keep editing whatever I find wrong. But it has to be a glitch because I know I edited them. THANK YOU FOR PLAYING ^^ | 2010-05-23 16:02:00 Author: tgainsbrough Posts: 7 |
| I dunno, i have a friend claiming that stuff gets detached randomly on his level, so....yeah Pretty much all your music radios, except maybe the first, are visible. Rating fixed to reflect my opinion about the level after the major glitches/bugs were ironed out. | 2010-05-23 16:09:00 Author: Unknown User |
| Thanks that's weird cause when I play it the music isn't there XD I will go check anyways! Thanks so much! It helps a lot when I cant see things that others can. | 2010-05-23 16:25:00 Author: tgainsbrough Posts: 7 |
| I'll play it later, seeing that I'm on lol. Just make some invisible dark matter to glue the trees to, or get some new flooring for the beginning of the level. That's all I can say from looking at the pictures. | 2010-05-23 18:08:00 Author: GreatWhite000  Posts: 673 |
| I checked all the music boxes and they were all invisible except for one. So that is very strange. | 2010-05-23 18:42:00 Author: tgainsbrough Posts: 7 |
| nvm i found them ^^ | 2010-05-23 21:05:00 Author: tgainsbrough Posts: 7 |
| Dunno, sometimes the creator acts a bit wierd, like the sound of something "breaking" going on in my current level which i can't find the source of | 2010-05-23 23:29:00 Author: Unknown User |
| definitely happened to me too XD | 2010-05-24 01:25:00 Author: tgainsbrough Posts: 7 |
| Okay! So everyone let me know my lvl is not that great, in fact its mediocre. So I am going to remake the whole level. If anyone wants an update when I will be publishing it just reply and I will make sure to update you. The most chosen were beautiful, annoying and boring. So obviously it wasn't too good. But it was my first lvl so I will improve it. Thanks guys for your help! If you have any input that could help me make the level better please reply. I need all the help I can get. | 2010-05-31 01:17:00 Author: tgainsbrough Posts: 7 |
| Hmm, not that bad, seems rather simple, needs a bit of patching up but all in all you put work into it, I'd say not bad. I'll gladly play again when you revise your level ^.^ | 2010-05-31 02:24:00 Author: ElementalPenguin  Posts: 83 |
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