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Polish Political (True) Story

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Polish Political (True) Story v 1.2radzio222
This is very funny platformer that tells us ( in a very sarcastic way) about Polish politics. If you don't know anything about Poland - don't be scare - the message is obvious and it's rather for fun ;-)
2010-05-20 22:40:00

Author:
radzio222
Posts: 6


This sounds very interesting! I'll check it out!2010-05-21 06:42:00

Author:
Devonushka
Posts: 95


I made some corrections and added a little surprise 2010-05-21 21:19:00

Author:
radzio222
Posts: 6


This was basically a generic noob level...
Things that you should fix:
1) Boss kills you way to randomly, took me about 10 minutes to kill him, and this was extremely boring
2) Very little decoration, looked bad, plus you were just climbing up a pyramid, going back and forth between obstacles... very boring.
3) Everything was too square...
4) Ski jump didn't work at all.
5) Characters dissolve after 10 seconds...
6) Characters should be made out of dissolve material so that they don't look so bad...

This level wasn't very satisfying, and I have no idea where Poland comes in....
3 Stars

F4F: Please leave some feedback on my level "StormWaves: Turret Defense" (Link Below)
2010-05-25 18:02:00

Author:
Devonushka
Posts: 95


This was basically a generic noob level...
Things that you should fix:
1) Boss kills you way to randomly, took me about 10 minutes to kill him, and this was extremely boring
2) Very little decoration, looked bad, plus you were just climbing up a pyramid, going back and forth between obstacles... very boring.
3) Everything was too square...
4) Ski jump didn't work at all.
5) Characters dissolve after 10 seconds...
6) Characters should be made out of dissolve material so that they don't look so bad...

This level wasn't very satisfying, and I have no idea where Poland comes in....
3 Stars

F4F: Please leave some feedback on my level "StormWaves: Turret Defense" (Link Below)

Sorry to chime in here, but it wouldn't really hurt to be polite would it?
2010-05-25 23:36:00

Author:
standby250
Posts: 1113


Wow,
Very critical feedback.
But It's OK.
Could you extend some of yours points ???
3. Everything was too square... - what do you mean by that ???
Generic noob level - ??? Could you write so more...

As the boss, it isn't very random - from th right side he shoots one time down and one time up. It isn't easy to kill hi, but you need no more than 2-3 minutes...

Ski jump works fine if you slide through whole ramp, and jump at the end (you will jump at the tree with bubbles)

What is wrong with disappearing characters ???
2010-05-26 19:11:00

Author:
radzio222
Posts: 6


Good level, worth a play.
-I didn't know what was going on - maybe you could enlighten the player as to what you mean by donald, the ducks, mher special forces, the plain crash etc. It seemed very random.
-There are minor mistakes in the grammar - i wouldn't worry about it
-you should make it so that the guys that appear don't dissolve, or at least give a reasonable time to read what they say. It didnt matter forme because i didn't really know what they were talking about anyway.
-Overall visuals were very ordinary, they lack any real substance ("square" objects are fine)
- skijump should be longer, as in a longer curve at the end.
- platforming and obstacles were good, but nothing special
- the boss who shoots electricity can easily fall over and not be defeated - i had to restart because it happened. On my second attempt he fell over again, but luckily i had already burst the bubble that you can't get if he falls over (he fell to his left making the shoulder bubble impossible to get). This is the biggest problem
- the randomness and imperfect grammer was mildly funny (sorry).
- at the very start i got stuck between the vases and the pyramid and it was difficult to escape- just a small point.

if i think of anything else i'll let you know.

if you feedback my spelunking level (in level showcase now) that would be great
2010-05-26 21:24:00

Author:
MegaBlob
Posts: 291


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