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Phantomizer's Obstacle Course Race (v1.6)

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Phantomizer's Obstacle Course Race (v1.6)Sgt_Phantomizer
Run, jump and avoid traps all in an effort to get to the finish line on time.
This was my very first level on LBP and has gone through several phases. Basically what i have here is a level that focuses on running, jumping and avoiding traps all in an effort to get to the finish line as fast as you can. It wasn't perfect and the initial product left quite alot to be desired, however i've put many hours into it and have perfected just about everything that has been reported and/or requested by the players that have played my level. The level is HARD and thats how it was meant to be, it's not a walk in the park, but it's not impossible, i've play-tested it several times and it's perfectly possible to go from start to finish without dying once and thus acing the level (for which there is a prize BTW), just don't expect to go in and ace it right from the get-go, even if your a confident platformer player.
2010-05-19 17:48:00

Author:
Unknown User


I'll take a look through it - remember ameliorate1234 from LittleBigWorkshop? That's me. 2010-05-19 18:25:00

Author:
Richasackboy
Posts: 619


I'll take a look through it - remember ameliorate1234 from LittleBigWorkshop? That's me.

Heya, sure do and thanks
2010-05-19 19:14:00

Author:
Unknown User


I played this level and it was really fun. Overall I liked it, but I feel that you could add a few decorations in some places. A few things that you can do are make the bottoms of the stairs smooth to make them look more like real stairs, and put the checkpoint after the part where you run under the spiked crusher thing at the top of the stairs.
:star: :star: :star: :star: Good Job

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2010-05-20 04:53:00

Author:
Devonushka
Posts: 95


Thanks for the feedback 2010-05-20 16:53:00

Author:
Unknown User


Pretty okay level. I hated the fact that you can see allot of the LBP floor itself, thats just makes the level look more lazy. It was kind of fun though, but the visuals were very yucky, and same with the icon. However, that's just nowaday speak, if you made this level in LBP's first days, I guarantee you this would of been an amazing level at the time. But LBP matured as time went on, levels are looking way more beautiful then they did back then, so your level compared to now wouldn't be so good.

It was pretty fun though, funner then I expected.

I gave it :star::star::star:

Can you leave feedback on Farewell Ruins of the Moon: Chapter One (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=26787-Farewell-Ruins-of-the-Moon-Chapter-One) by AbstractSam? Thanks.
2010-05-20 23:09:00

Author:
AbstractSam
Posts: 332


Pretty okay level. I hated the fact that you can see allot of the LBP floor itself, thats just makes the level look more lazy. It was kind of fun though, but the visuals were very yucky, and same with the icon. However, that's just nowaday speak, if you made this level in LBP's first days, I guarantee you this would of been an amazing level at the time. But LBP matured as time went on, levels are looking way more beautiful then they did back then, so your level compared to now wouldn't be so good.

It was pretty fun though, funner then I expected.

I gave it :star::star::star:

Can you leave feedback on Farewell Ruins of the Moon: Chapter One (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=26787-Farewell-Ruins-of-the-Moon-Chapter-One) by AbstractSam? Thanks.

It's my first level, so yes....it has it's faults and i honestly wasn't concentrating very hard on "prettifying" it when i started work on it, i've done some work on it recently, but i honestly don't feel like it's worth returning to it and giving it a "major overhaul". I may choose to return and release a "re-imagining" at some later point in time, but i'ld rather focus on something new.

Don't get me wrong, the feedback is greatly appreciated as i'm trying to get a sense of what worked and what didn't, on both this and my other level. All the suggestions i get, feedback and comments are going towards the next project i'm currently working on.

Thanks alot for the feedback and i'll take a peek at your level tomorrow.
2010-05-20 23:41:00

Author:
Unknown User


as soon as i get back from vaca i will check out your level!2010-05-26 01:21:00

Author:
MaxFromLi
Posts: 30


Overall both your obstacle courses are pretty good. The first one (presumably what this thread is for) is much more difficult and lacks the same replayability factor that the second has. Also, I feel that the visuals in the 2nd are much better, which is good. Such visual change from one level to the next shows that you are improving as a creator. Both levels have good gameplay and fun obstacles, so keep up the good work. Both are good levels to check out, and both provide a decent challenge!2010-05-28 00:01:00

Author:
obsoleteXeo
Posts: 134


Not bad that a level, it's decently hard but not as hard as I expected actually, the visuals weren't that bad, not the most astounding but my first level was lacking too. I'm not sure if it was issue for some but infinite checkpoints are better to have for levels like this, I was able to clear through it no problem but maybe for younger groups put at least a double life. This is a preference so you don't have to do it. All in all it's a decent level, I wish you good luck with the success of your level.2010-05-28 01:29:00

Author:
ElementalPenguin
Posts: 83


Hey-

First off, I always enjoy a race level like this, it always, no matter what, appeaks to me. I wasn't to keen on the visuals, some areas looked like they could be touched up on by stickered or using the corner editing tool, but the gameplay totaly made up for that. I also didn't feel that the music really matched the levek, but that's just my opinion. I played a few times with myself trying to get a nice score,and I think that I made out prety well.

I rated it :star::star::star::star::star:
2010-05-28 17:57:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


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