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Tunnel Vision - NOW PUBLISHED!
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Hi there! I'm working on a level at the moment called Tunnel Vision. It's about half way through, and I feel a bit stuck on it - in the way that I can't think of what to do next! As well as this, I was also wondering if anyone wanted to test what I've got so far - just check that it's all achievable to others, and whether it's fun or not, etc. I'd be looking for about 2-3 testers, so if anyone's interested, comment here or PM me! Anyways, here are some pics =) http://i601.photobucket.com/albums/tt100/standby250/Tunnel%20Vision/APhoto-4.jpg http://i601.photobucket.com/albums/tt100/standby250/Tunnel%20Vision/APhoto_1-2.jpg http://i601.photobucket.com/albums/tt100/standby250/Tunnel%20Vision/APhoto_2-2.jpg http://i601.photobucket.com/albums/tt100/standby250/Tunnel%20Vision/APhoto_3-2.jpg http://i601.photobucket.com/albums/tt100/standby250/Tunnel%20Vision/APhoto_4-2.jpg http://i601.photobucket.com/albums/tt100/standby250/Tunnel%20Vision/APhoto_5-3.jpg Just a note, if you want to test, then I'd appreciate feedback! Thanks! | 2010-05-16 20:37:00 Author: standby250 ![]() Posts: 1113 |
Wow! Nice visuals. I'll definitely test it if you want me to. | 2010-05-18 02:19:00 Author: Tmjtk ![]() Posts: 258 |
Same here! Loving the style. | 2010-05-18 11:17:00 Author: KablooieKablam ![]() Posts: 364 |
Awesome! I'll send a PM with the details on how to get in shortly! Thanks! | 2010-05-18 16:18:00 Author: standby250 ![]() Posts: 1113 |
HEY! You still doing tests? If so...CAN I PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEZ TEST YOUR LEVEL! IT LOOKS AWESOME! | 2010-05-18 17:48:00 Author: SPONGMONKEY56 ![]() Posts: 209 |
Hey if you wan't i could help ya in a few parts...not so bad at creating myself so...if ya think i lil' help would be good...respond XD | 2010-05-18 18:07:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
Looking good. Don't wanna test, don't really like it. I'd rather play the whole level at once. Oh, and looking good. Yet again. | 2010-05-18 20:45:00 Author: talbot-trembler ![]() Posts: 1114 |
id love to test it! love the look of the level from the pics, so if you want me to test just tell me ![]() | 2010-05-18 20:48:00 Author: Unknown User ![]() |
Thanks guys for all your offers! I'll PM you with the details =) When you test, you'll eventually get to a bit where you are travelling on a kind of moving platform. It then goes through a kind of spiky tunnel - except I think I need to put some kind of contraption or obstacle there. Can anyone think of any ideas? If you can, Comment here or PM me! Thanks ![]() | 2010-05-18 21:06:00 Author: standby250 ![]() Posts: 1113 |
Well, I have tested it, and I think it's thoroughly awesome, so here are my pros and cons: PROS: Awesome style, loving the music. Great intro; not too complex, but still looking good. I particularly enjoyed the bonus area, because it was a gameplay mechanic that I have not seen before; keep it up. I like the switches. They're pretty cool, with the way that you designed them, and didn't use pre-made switches. Thinking outside the box. I like it. The camera works really well on this level, although it could use a little tweaking. ![]() CONS: This is kind of nitpicking, so ignore it if you like: after the thin wood with "Tunnel Vision" on it lifts up, and there is that little alcove with the arrow in, I thought that that was where I had to go, and not down the "ramp". It may be because the wooden "ramp" on the middle plane blends in a bit too well with the wood that's behind it. In the same area, in right end of the little alcove with the arrow, there is some wood that looks a bit "choppy", with a roughly cut sort of look to it. I hope you know what I mean, because I noticed a few other sections with a "choppy" (is that even the right word?) finish. If that is the intended effect, then forgive me for being picky. ![]() On the timed section with the pillars that rise, on the first grab switch, I let go and switched planes backwards automatically; this delayed me a little, and was a bit frustrating when I was shut out, and had to do it again. The moving platform collides slightly with the furnace, disrupting an otherwise smooth ride. A thouroughly enjoyable, relaxing, good-ol-platfomer of a level. :star::star::star::star::star:<3 Yup. That's right. Also, on said spiky-tunnel-with-the-moving-platform-thingamabob, perhaps, instead of making a contraption, the spikes could ripple like waves. This way it could create more eye candy, but without the need for a complicated contraption. Additionally, after the fiery furnace that the platforms go into, perhaps it coud come out again, and you have to get on again, and ride over a seemingly bottomless chasm. The bit of wood that the wheels roll along could suddenly break, and you fall. Then you land in a dark cavern, with only a little flame burning in a torch on the wall. You grab the torch, the whole cavern lights up, and you carry on. ![]() PM me once it's completely finished. I'd love to see the finished article! | 2010-05-19 21:53:00 Author: SPONGMONKEY56 ![]() Posts: 209 |
Wow, thank you so much for the detailed review! I will get straight on with the suggestions you made! I love the end bit you've come up with - I'd definatly like to include that! Thanks ever so much! I'll work on some of that stuff, and would you be up for retesting afterwords? ![]() Oh, and don't worry about nitpicking! I want this to be smooth and polished, so I will iron out whatever creases I can! | 2010-05-19 22:08:00 Author: standby250 ![]() Posts: 1113 |
Interesting. Came inhere expecting something Uncharted-related (Tunnel vision is my favourite chapter) but found something equally awesome! Is the level up? Or can I still test? | 2010-05-21 18:27:00 Author: Arradi ![]() Posts: 183 |
Interesting. Came inhere expecting something Uncharted-related (Tunnel vision is my favourite chapter) but found something equally awesome! Is the level up? Or can I still test?![]() Not up yet... but sure, you can still test! I'll PM you the details ![]() | 2010-05-21 20:21:00 Author: standby250 ![]() Posts: 1113 |
Looks very nice ![]() | 2010-05-21 22:15:00 Author: piggabling ![]() Posts: 2979 |
Just wanted to say, this level is now PUBLISHED! | 2010-05-24 18:58:00 Author: standby250 ![]() Posts: 1113 |
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