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The Gardens: Attack On The KingdomMelted_Gummybear The King's Kingdom is under attack by crazy scruffles! Defeat them and save the King and his crown This level is basically a sequel to The Gardens levels! I spent a lot of time and hard work.. And blood.. On this level. Joking about the blood xD Enjoi! Here are some pictures! http://i913.photobucket.com/albums/ac333/MeltedGummy/BANNER-1.png] Sorry for double-post. I meant to past it as F4F. If the mods could please delete that last post x) I'm kind of new here.

2010-05-15 21:56:00 Author: Melted_Gummybear Posts: 162

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WOW this looks like a really cool level from just looking at the pics ps: how you created that kind of pic it looks really cool I want to create that too

2010-05-15 22:46:00 Author: Arnald23 Posts: 1843

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Lol, why thank you! The level had a BUNCH of errors, but they are all fixed now! So please tell me what you think!

2010-05-15 23:21:00 Author: Melted_Gummybear Posts: 162

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Hey I played this earlier, nice level. I thought visually it was great. The only things I jotted down were that I thought the boss was too easy and that you could use searchlights in some of the bounce pads to keep them popping up only when you are in the same layer. Other than that very enjoyable! :star::star::star::star:

2010-05-16 04:35:00 Author: OneEyedBanshee Posts: 1370

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I have reviewed your level, and found it fun, I think you could have given more to this building, the area of puzzles is fine, peroen Personally I do not like to see levels at the edge of the original soil from the bottom, I think this could be improved more were to put stickers or objects because at first seems empty, the part where you get to the cave I like most, you made the background of wood and recreation and more good this game, I'm glad to see levels where they have created themselves characters and that's a great point Is generally good, i gave u 4:star: F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=26126-Enchanted-adventure

2010-05-19 16:53:00 Author: psyntens Posts: 562

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I always like MM remake levels, so I gave yours a try, and thought it was pretty good. Pros -The beginning looked great, the houses and the castles looked a lot like the MM gardens. -I liked the King's son -The ghosts reminded me of the Gardens, but I saw you put your on twist on them. -The button jump pads were fun, but I would have like to see more Cons -The castle at the end is just mostly made up of the two woods, and looks really plain -The whole water section feels just thrown in there for the sake of having a water section -The whole ending needs work, I'm not sure if the boss is supposed to have an attack, but I just stood under it and killed it. Also, the music needs to be changed after you rescue the King to a more fitting theme. And the whole rescue didn't make sense, he fell in the pit I was supposed to be saving him from but he was ok? Not trying to sound too harsh, I still liked the level. I gave it four stars. Could you F4F the top one in my sig? Thanks.

2010-05-20 16:22:00 Author: thekevinexpress Posts: 256

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Okay! I will be sure to check it out! And I know my level isn't the best, I honestly wasn't really expecting any good feedback. More or less some constructive criticism! Thanks for that!! I am going to fix all of that in the future, but I am busy working on a Boss Fight at the moment, if you would like to check it out, it has some pictures and is in the Ideas and Projects section!

2010-05-24 10:02:00 Author: Melted_Gummybear Posts: 162

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Hey, just played your level. I think you did a nice job on the visuals. Felt like the gardens all over again Your characters looked really good, especially the son at the start. Simple platforming, but balanced all through the level. Only thing I didn't like so much was the watrer section. Maybe if you add a little challenge on that part? All you do is swim from point A to B with only 1 lever to pull. I thought the boss was fun to kill, admited he didn't do much, but was fun to see him drop down. I couldn't finish your level though. After I "killed" the boss nothing happened? I was just stuck in that room with no visible way to exit. Over all, fun level I enjoyed playing. 4:star: from me. If you got time could you leave feedback on my F4F level? it's in my sig. thanks. (oh, and a plasma ball between those scorebubbles...that was just cheap )

2010-05-24 11:20:00 Author: Serph Posts: 53

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I enjoyed the level. The Evil Mr Scruffle could put up more of a fight though. Nice job overall mate.

2010-05-24 11:35:00 Author: DrSanchez50 Posts: 9

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Alright Serph! I will get right to it! And by the way guys, I didn't make Mr Scruffle fight because if you think about it, it's hilarious that he took over the kingdom because he is so tiny and defenseless And I WILL fix that at the end. Sorry >_< I will also spiff up the water section! Again guys, thanks for feedback!

2010-05-24 12:25:00 Author: Melted_Gummybear Posts: 162

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looks tighhhtttt, Il update my comment here with a full review when Im through with your level. In the mean time you could play me level? xDD -The Dunes of Time

2010-05-25 07:49:00 Author: drei Posts: 158

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Melted_Gummybear (depressing name, btw), you have some unique gameplay and interesting visuals, but if there is one criticism to point out, it's that the camera zones destroyed me in this level. For instance, when Sackboy plunges into the water, the camera zone doesn't show the water or the electrified spinning fish that killed me many times. Luckily, when I was down on my last life, I managed to get through the water area. I'd also suggest using some sound effects when certain events happen (this is minor, but in general adding sound effects in various places could make this level really awesome) and maybe changing up the music a bit more. The music actually took away from the atmosphere of the level (for me) a bit because I didn't feel that it portrayed the mood very well. Still, great level with nice, simple visuals and good gameplay. Check it out, everyone!

2010-05-27 23:51:00 Author: obsoleteXeo Posts: 134

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Thanks much! I am getting better internet tomorrow! So hopefully I can get it done then

2010-05-29 04:15:00 Author: Melted_Gummybear Posts: 162

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Hey, Asteroyd! I decided to give your new level a shot and review it. Anyways, the beginning was a shock to me. I really didn't think the music fit, and that was kind of ruining some of the gameplay. The obstacles - Some of them were original! I really liked the curator at the beginning. The castle at the end looked very bland, and I didn't enjoy it much. The water section is way to difficult and unnecessary, and feels thrown on, like kevin said. The boss battle was hilarious, I guess! I was expecting more, though. Finally, I'll talk about the end. I didn't get to it. O was hanging on to that green fabric sponge after teh boss is beaten, but I fell down and got out of the level (Where I saw a vote for pedro sign. O.o) And thus, that greatly reduces your score. For not finishing, the level went down a star, and with the music choices, It went down another. :star::star::star: and no heart. As an F4F, please review my survival challenge, Flipper Frenzy!. Thanks.

2010-05-29 05:01:00 Author: Unknown User

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I have fixed that several times, and thanks to my friend Solid_Sage for that sign xD Ah well! THanks!

2010-05-29 05:57:00 Author: Melted_Gummybear Posts: 162

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