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Trouble at the Floating Zoo

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Trouble at the Floating ZooOneEyedBanshee
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/Almwitch05/APhoto_15.jpgIs it a bird? Is it a plane? NO! It's a flying zoo! Well anyhow, a dragon has landed atop this floating zoo and it's eating other animals food. It's up to you to slay the beast and stop the animals from starving.
Hey this is another level I decided to make for a community contest, Woflgod's floating castle/farm/village etc one. I decided to go with a flying zoo. So my focus was on getting some nice looking animals in there. Admittedly they eat a bit of thermo but I wasn't going for a long level so I thought I could get away with it. I think it's fairly easy, platforming and a boss, easy peasy, pudding and pie. Not too long, so give it a go if your looking for a little bit of fun.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/Almwitch05/APhoto_15.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/Almwitch05/APhoto_14.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v239/Almwitch05/APhoto_16.jpg
2010-05-15 19:30:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


Oh no. I lose.

Haha, this looks awesome. I'll check this out soon.
2010-05-15 19:41:00

Author:
qrtda235566
Posts: 3664


lol I don't think so! I think it's still completely up in the air.. no pun intended Cheers I'd appreciate it, I ought to give some feedback on Secrets of the Sky seen as I played it a while back. I'll give it another go anyhow and let you know what I think.2010-05-15 20:06:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


This looks really cool, I played your level, Malevolence unfolds in the gardens and loved it, so I can't wait to play this.2010-05-15 20:07:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


hey I was waiting for a level with a such funny and light-hearted story
I'll play it ASAP and with comments
2010-05-15 20:10:00

Author:
Chump
Posts: 1712


I have reviewed your level and we love to my wife and me, how good you did something so original, creative, fun and very entertaining, I liked you to do all the animals you who certainly very good creation heee! details of the bamboo, bear, playful tiger, giraffes and monkeys are really good you made us laugh a lot no doubt, has very good performance the game, the use of 3D fault is very good congratulations on not always are unable to do something as well done as you, all hold the idea is very imaginative balloon too. We've uploaded some photos to your level, the only problem we had is that we could not finish, because when you get to score no soil, then you go down, die and come back out and score again in the fall so that was a failure we had.

Yet because we have given you is phenomenal

I have given :star::star::star::star::star:

F4F: https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=26126-Enchanted-adventure
2010-05-15 20:27:00

Author:
psyntens
Posts: 562


Thanks for the feedback psyntens! But I don't understand your problem and I definitely want to fix it! You got to the scoreboard?

I see you have a picture at the dragon so that is pretty much the end. Did you bounce bananas into it's mouth? You have to do that 3 times then it dies and the scoreboard raises from the ground. Can be tricky and there is a bit of buggyness at times but it should work. I did get an odd glitch the first time I played though that caused everything to delete at one point.

Yeah i think I get you now, the bug that causes everything to delete is because the dragon bites a banana the wrong way or something.. Guess the big guy really does hate bananas! very frustrating but I'm in the process of trying to fix. Hopefully it will work as that's not a bug I am willing to accept!
2010-05-15 20:35:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


WOW i have to play this later I like the animals you put in the pics2010-05-15 23:02:00

Author:
Arnald23
Posts: 1843


haha!
Nice level you go there!

I'll start with the bad news so the good ones can only be better

Cons:
-There is one part where I missed jumping on clouds. It's near the boss, where you have to jump from little floating island to another. They are fairly small, which is not so eye friendly, my eyes were always looking at the vast blue background instead of the actual action of my sackboy jumping. I don't think your thermo is overheating, so maybe adding some clouds like in the beginning would be pretty good. But that's my observation though
-The Boss, I wanted more, it wasn't, how could I say? It lacked of some epicness I was so hyped of killing this dragon, why not giving me a reward for a such heroic action. By reward, I dont mean a prize bubble, not at all, maybe an ASPLOSION (?) or seeing the dragon in pain, i don't know... All the animals standing on him?
-The panda was IMO too thin for being a panda

Pros:
-It was cute
-It was beautiful
-The dragon standing on the house is the best part!
-The tiger was amazing! So feline-like, so cuddly
-I loled at the giraffe expression when all the animals are together XD
-The monkeys grab things were clever

Overall, a wonderful (light-hearted) level with cute animals and a naughty dragon. What do you want more?
:star::star::star::star::star: and a lovely <3
2010-05-16 02:16:00

Author:
Chump
Posts: 1712


Alright, first thing I like to point out is that I love the icon! Pandas are my favorite! With that said however, the actual panda in the level looked more ugly then cute. :o It looked like it was annorexic D: (gave me bad memories <_<). Hmm, I did like the other animals though, and the dragon looked amazing. I thought the boss was fun but it could have been longer. DX I also came across a problem with the hippobottomous. It's butt wasn't working probably, it took me forever to get up to the monkeys. D: The visuals were nice, but the gameplay was a little lacking. It seemed like all you were doing was jumping. Anyway, I definitely don't think this level deserves the 3 :star:'s that it has, so I gave it 4. With a few improvements, you can really make this an amazing level.

Can you leave feedback on Farewell Ruins of the Moon: Chapter One (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=26787-Farewell-Ruins-of-the-Moon-Chapter-One) by AbstractSam? Thanks.
2010-05-16 03:01:00

Author:
AbstractSam
Posts: 332


This level was REALLY good looking, but it did lack some gameplay...

The whole time you were just jumping from platform to platform and swinging from monkeys, and then the boss was really simple and easy. That's just my opinion, I like levels that have you doing a bunch of things, not just looking at stuff...

Anyway, 4 stars, good job.
2010-05-16 03:44:00

Author:
Devonushka
Posts: 95


OK, first, I agree with AbstractSam, I really love the level badge. The characters in the level were totally awesome, especially the dragon-boss. One of my favorite things about your levels are the characters, they are always colorful and cute. The part where you agreed to help the animals was funny, I liked the perspective of the smiling giraffe. The platforming was great too, and I liked your bubble placement. One thing that I think you should change is perhaps make the panda a little bit rounder, since pandas are usually fat.

I rated it :star::star::star::star::star: and gave the level one <3.
2010-05-16 03:55:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


lol guys, it seems slender pandas are REALLY and I mean REALLY disturbing! I will definitely look into making it a bit more plump. As for the boss I will look into it, although curious how one adds epicness. Not sure I can make major changes until it's been judged but after that I will gladly try reworking areas. Chuck the little platforms near the boss I think I added a cloud after you played becuase I remember thinking the exact same thing. Also curious about ugly panda comment lol, the badge is the pandas face so is that ok? I will change the face too though if it adds to the ugliness factor. I get that pandas are the embodiment of cute so I have to capture that. I want to have something at the end too like panda and stuff falling down on zip wires or something lol. I will see but yeah whatever thermo allows I will try tweaking these things. I will be sure to check out your level AbstractSam tomorrow, I am off to bed! Thanks for the feedback everyone!2010-05-16 04:30:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


lol guys, it seems slender pandas are REALLY and I mean REALLY disturbing! I will definitely look into making it a bit more plump. As for the boss I will look into it, although curious how one adds epicness. Not sure I can make major changes until it's been judged but after that I will gladly try reworking areas. Chuck the little platforms near the boss I think I added a cloud after you played becuase I remember thinking the exact same thing. Also curious about ugly panda comment lol, the badge is the pandas face so is that ok? I will change the face too though if it adds to the ugliness factor. I get that pandas are the embodiment of cute so I have to capture that. I want to have something at the end too like panda and stuff falling down on zip wires or something lol. I will see but yeah whatever thermo allows I will try tweaking these things. I will be sure to check out your level AbstractSam tomorrow, I am off to bed! Thanks for the feedback everyone!

Thanks, lol. Don't change the icon! It's not ugly. DX
2010-05-16 04:46:00

Author:
AbstractSam
Posts: 332


This has got to be one of the cutest levels I played in a while.
The animals are all beautifully made (won't go in the subject on the starving panda, since it's been mentioned allready).
This level really put a smile on my face. I found the platforming nicely done, although a bit dull at certain points, jumping from island to island / cloud gets boring after a while. But the look of the enviroment made me forget this most of the time.

At the boss fight I think it bugged a bit one me as well, I only had to shoot 1 banana in his mouth, after this everything just disapeared and I fell down on a floating scoredboard
At least I got to finish the level.

4 :star: and a <3 from me.

If you got the time can you check out the level in my sig? thanks
2010-05-16 17:21:00

Author:
Serph
Posts: 53


Thanks serph. I have updated to make panda a bit fatter so I presume you missed that update. argh that bug at the end will be the end of me, I dunno why it happens but it's a bug I must get rid of. Your supposed to shoot 3 bananas into it's mouth then it dies and scoreboard comes up from ground, in the event of that odd glitch it acts as if a brain died when it bites a banana the wrong way and everything falls apart. There is no brain though.. really frustrating. I will tweak some more and see if I can fix that somehow As for the game play issues I will try mixing it up some more in future updates but I will wait until contest is judged. I'll check out your level now 2010-05-16 17:34:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


No, seriously, I lost.

Haha, I think it's just between you and bonner on this one. This level was great, but I think I missed a chunk because I fell of something and skipped right to the turning gears part, and then I got stuck at the Hippo. What am I supposed to do? I feel like my brain's not working today, I also couldn't find the lighter in on of Delirium's levels.
2010-05-16 17:36:00

Author:
qrtda235566
Posts: 3664


Oh yeah that's the right way.. I think! lol you can fall, there is a balloon to descend slowly but yeah. You go across gears and over to hippo. Then you have to bounce on it's bum and it will bounce you higher, but gotta time a jump so you get enough height. Then grab monkeys and that's near the end.2010-05-16 17:38:00

Author:
OneEyedBanshee
Posts: 1370


This looks like a lot of fun. I'll give it a play tomorrow and tell yo what I think. 2010-07-11 04:53:00

Author:
Dragonvarsity
Posts: 5208


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