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Darkrider9's Reviews (Taking Requests)

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Hello, I'll get right to the point, give me the name of your level and I'll review it for you. The format for the review will be

Story: /10
Design: /10
Mood: /10
Likes:
Dislikes:
Additional Notes/ Ways to improve:
What I rated:
Score out of 10:
If I hearted:

Post your level and I'll have the review up ASAP
2010-05-09 23:20:00

Author:
Darkrider9
Posts: 72


Can you review Color Gardens

Thanks!
2010-05-10 01:59:00

Author:
Shhabbazz
Posts: 746


My level is (LBW5)The Insanitarium's Sackboy Breaker
It is a survival level so there is no story.
2010-05-10 02:41:00

Author:
Tomeh999
Posts: 763


Would you please review my level?

Name: Onion Gale.
PSN: NiKfY

It is essentially 8 different stages in one level, each one harder than the previous one.
2010-05-10 09:16:00

Author:
figuer39
Posts: 108


Review: Color Garden By: Shhabbazz

Story: Fairly good, although it doesn't say why or how you got there. the story fits well with the atmosphere of the level but is kind of simple. 6/10
Design: I really liked the way you shaped everything. The lights and colors make it even more special, it has a very unique look to it. The only thing I didn't like was how many things looked alike, not much variation. 7/10
Mood: I think the lighting and colors coupled with the other platfroms in the far distance makes this look very dream-like and unique. Very good job. 10/10
Likes: Like I said, the mood was great with the lighting and platfroms in the distance. It was a very visually appealing level.
Dislikes: Some parts were hard to understand, right at the beginning you get a jetpack and there is a grabbable rainbow rock thing with the gas overhead you, I didn't understand what to do, then I noticed the way out and I wondered why everything was there when you could simply walk out. Some parts were a little too dark, maybe add a tiny bit more lighting in some darker parts of the level. The title block in the beginning with the magic mouth on it is very easy to miss. Also, the platfroming is boring and repetitive. A bit to easy as well.
Notes/ Ways to Improve:Maybe add more lights in some dark parts, add a magic mouth to tell players what to do in the jetpack room, and make the title block magic mouth easier to notice, Increase the range on the moition sensor maybe? Add harder and different platforming to make it less repetitive.
What I Rated::star::star::star::star:
Score:7/10 Great atmosphere but a bit repetitive and kind of short with mediocre platfroming. Seems more of a visual level than an exciting one to play and that gets you 7/10
If I Hearted:Great visuals but the platforming was very tame. Sorry, but no.
2010-05-11 00:00:00

Author:
Darkrider9
Posts: 72


(LBW5)The Insanitarium's Sackboy Breaker By: Tomeh999

Design: Simplistic design, but it works, It could be improved with more detail. I like the characters, but they could be improved. 6/10
Mood: I couldn't understand what you were going for here, creepy, or funny.5/10
Likes: Simple but very fun, its a great idea.
Dislikes: Simple design, As soon as the gas comes, I couldn't tell what platfroms would be safe and I died.
Notes/ Ways to Improve: Add a tiny beginning to the level to show whats happening and to set a mood. Make the gas lower so it only hits maybe 2 of the platforms. Add more detail to the place.
What I Rated: :star::star::star:
Score: 5/10 fun, but its practically over when the gas comes and it lacks detail. 5/10
If I Hearted:If you fix what I told you, then yes, but for now, sorry, but no.
2010-05-11 00:22:00

Author:
Darkrider9
Posts: 72


Hey could you review my level "Interloper"?2010-05-12 09:48:00

Author:
Fertile Decline
Posts: 91


Hey, can you please review my new level, "Attack of the Mole People!!"?2010-05-13 02:26:00

Author:
HackbookPro
Posts: 20


Review: Onion Gale By: NiKfY
Story: Its pretty good knowing tat your level is mostly a challenge level. 8/10
Design: Simplistic with only a few generic materials, could be improved. 5/10
Mood: There really wasn't one becuaee this level is a challenge level. No Rating
Likes: Interesting challenges, it was very fun to play, I like how you could stop or keep going. I also liked the character design.
Dislikes: I quit on the challenge with the mine cart because i almsot got the the end of the second one and my cart died, that part was so boring that I didn't want to retry.
Notes/Ways to Improve: Use more materials and detail it more. Make the mine cart challenge shorter or add spots every so often where the cart can respawn.
What I Rated: :star::star::star:
Score: 6/10 It has potential and I will definatily re-visit and maybe re-review this is you make some changes. 6/10
If I hearted: Like I said, it has great potential, but in the state its in right now, I'm saying no.
2010-05-13 21:02:00

Author:
Darkrider9
Posts: 72


Thanks for the review. Too bad you didn't get past the third hall, because the level gets more flashy after that. Also, if you'd seen the rest of the level, you probably would have hearted it.

The Hall of the Minotaur is going to be the doom of me, ha ha.
2010-05-13 22:31:00

Author:
figuer39
Posts: 108


Can you review my level, Mysterious Planet: Project Fracture? It fairly long and challenging so only review it if you think you're up for it. 2010-05-14 22:15:00

Author:
Camden1
Posts: 83


Would you mind reviewing my level: "HMS Doubtless part 1" ? (the level thread is in my signature)

PSN: michaelhoar
2010-05-20 17:52:00

Author:
The Gentleman
Posts: 360


psn: howMUCHforBOUNTY
level: in search of the Aztec gold

thanks man

.BOUNTY.
2010-05-20 17:55:00

Author:
howMUCHforBOUNTY
Posts: 623


What a stupid review imho... Story shouldn't matter, in the end you just want a few minutes of fun. A level shouldn't be punished for having a dumb N quick story to get to the point, even though super advanced RPGs could maybe be rewarded for having a good story, unless a level focuses on a story mode. NO LEVEL should be punished for having a bad story =(2010-05-23 21:41:00

Author:
Unknown User


Pls. Review my lvl:
Polish Political (true) Story v.1.2
PSNid: radzio222
2010-05-23 23:20:00

Author:
radzio222
Posts: 6


Hello there!
Could I please ask you to review my level "The Treegut Mys-tree" please? It would be great if you did.
It's an easy/medium platform level, and you can find it quickly by searching @countruby. It should be somewhere around North America on the Craft Earth.
Thanks!
2010-06-02 17:22:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hey dude please review 2 of my levels savannah travel and trapped, thanks.2010-06-04 00:16:00

Author:
ferrrch
Posts: 429


I'd like you to review my level called When the bombs DIDN't fall!
Thank you in advance
2010-06-06 18:32:00

Author:
Chump
Posts: 1712


Level: Color Gardens 2
PSN: Shhabbazz

Thanks dude!
2010-06-07 06:17:00

Author:
Shhabbazz
Posts: 746


Sorry I haven't been able to do many reviews, its been crazy with finals week and all, I'll be back with more reviews when my workload decreases.2010-06-08 21:33:00

Author:
Darkrider9
Posts: 72


@ doubletime: You know I only use the Story category to rate it if it seems like it was made to have a story. Please be informed before you bash someone.2010-06-08 21:34:00

Author:
Darkrider9
Posts: 72


I'd love to have a review of my level "Hazy Hills Hiking" made by the PSN of Sonarpaste. Thank you. 2010-06-11 15:47:00

Author:
Phosphorus15
Posts: 463


hey if you can, please review my level! i really had put a lot of work on this level! so review it with love

SN!building

thx a lot!
2010-06-11 15:53:00

Author:
Unknown User


hey can u check my level psn artise1 my levels called jungle run i published it ages ago but since then i improved it but havent published the new version yet so its the old one still but anyway can u review it for me? i give it 3 stars prob as it was my first full level but it be great if u review it thx2010-07-12 02:31:00

Author:
artise
Posts: 353


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