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The Creation Of Our World

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"Imagination is such a strange thing in this world. Is it the core of LittleBigPlanet or is it the life in it?No one knows if there is a God in LittleBigPlanet. They say that The sack kind and their planet was made by the imagination of the Orb Of Dreamers. Is their a God in LittleBigPlanet that watches over us or do we control the world that we live? No one knows the answer to this question but a group of travelers will try to find out the answer and try to see the truth and answer to the question of how the sack people were born.

"Once upon a time there was a time when our galaxy was darkness, no light to be found,no life existed in this dark,cold, lonely place,but there was hope to be found. In the darkest most coldness place in the galaxy there was a big bright light filed with all kinds of life. in the center of this huge light there was a core powered by something so rare that we fail to recognize and understand. It was love; the power that lives within all things. This power was expanding slowly until it exploded with life so beautiful and beyond imagination that it's impossible to understand. There was little vortex's called universes and in them where spheres called planets and within some of these planet there was life. There was one extraordinaire planet called Earth. In this planet there was a race called humans a violent but sometimes a understandable kind of species. They have something called emotions that gives them the ability to feel. They also have the ability of creation and love the thing that created and lives within all of us. When they sleep they go into a trance and their imagination lets them create a dream a perfect imaginary world they can go in within their conscience. All of them do this so the the universe gave them the name of The Orb Of Dreamers. Their dreams was so great and in powered that they made a new world filled with love and imagination. This world was given the name Craft Earth or because of the resemblance with Earth the home of the humans. Now its called LittleBigPlanet the home of the sack people. In the begging there was no life on this planet but in the sky there was an egg with white wings attached to it flying in the sky. The environment became one with the egg giving it love then it hatched. A brown sack creature appeared with the power of creation. She was called Star. Star created kind living creatures and made the Craft Earth beautiful just like her but their was a limit to how much her power can be used. With the last of her power she created a machine called Core. When Star created Core she made 1 rule to make life and see it how she did. She powered Core and went to sleep for her power to come back. Core had awaken and looked at the world Star had made but their was one area where she forgot to create. It was a wasteland with no life only pain. Core had wondered if this is what Star wanted so he created monsters and a place called Latern, a place where machines and creatures where born. The creatures that star had made where scared so they ran to the place where they will be safe, the birth of Star Egg City. Core destroyed craft earth for 100 thousand years and finally he was at Egg City. He was going to destroy it with his army of machines and mechs. Then a miracle happened. Star had been awaken. She was shocked at what she have seen and so she destroyed the machines with the power she was born with;love. She sealed Core in the middle of Craft Earth there he will be asleep powering LittleBigPlanets hope with the one thing Star built him with Peace. Until this day no one knows what happened to star and or if Core is still in sealed away but we live in peace . The End"His Father finished reading the story. Chris said "Wow can You read another one father"He responded"No you have to go to sleep after all you will be 5 tomorrow"He went to sleep.

9 years later Chris finds himself walking in a Egg City.

Chapter 2 coming out soon also I need more characters so if anyone in LBPC that wants to be in the story message me and you will be part of the story and adventure. Thank you
2010-05-07 02:40:00

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Unknown User


W....wow dude, that was awesome, tho, ur grammer is off a bit.... Exelent work my good friend2010-05-07 02:46:00

Author:
Joshofsouls
Posts: 1569


Interesting story!...may I be in it? 2010-05-07 02:50:00

Author:
AbstractFlesh
Posts: 837


Very deep and philosophical, if ya ask me. I love the prologue.

If you'd be interested, I'd love to appear somewhere in the story.
2010-05-07 02:59:00

Author:
Outlaw-Jack
Posts: 5757


Yes you may be in it and josh its just the intro so imagine the stoy2010-05-07 03:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


You can be in it
to lolz
2010-05-07 03:00:00

Author:
Unknown User


Sweet, i can't believe it's this popular, i need to update mine a bit2010-05-08 11:58:00

Author:
Joshofsouls
Posts: 1569


Need more people in story also when LBP2 comes out im making severl levels on this story but I want add people from the comuunity of LBPC so please if you want to be in it notify me or I will have to make up characters which I hate to do so once agian if you want to join just ask2010-05-13 01:17:00

Author:
Unknown User


Ill join if you want. Also, can you read my story? I havent updated it in a while due to inactivity on the thread 2010-05-15 04:47:00

Author:
Testudini
Posts: 3262


:star:Very very deep friend. That was well-said and put. Awesomeness!2010-05-15 07:13:00

Author:
LittleBigBoss
Posts: 13


Hehe you can all be in it but still I need more people so spread the word2010-05-15 15:34:00

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Unknown User


I'd love to be in it... but I really haven't done anything big in the community. Only two levels...2010-05-15 21:14:00

Author:
gamerC0LA64
Posts: 274


Yay! Awesome story time!2010-05-15 21:18:00

Author:
JspOt
Posts: 3607


Nice work the only problem was the grammer was abit odd but apart from that it was awsome!
BTW Can I be in chapter 2 pleeeeeeeese!!!
2010-05-16 12:51:00

Author:
Jovuto
Posts: 2345


Yea my spelling is off a bit ill fix it in chapter 2 and yes you will be in it2010-05-16 21:56:00

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Unknown User


YAY! :3 <3:star:2010-05-18 15:38:00

Author:
Jovuto
Posts: 2345


Wow man need more people like 2 or 3 more so spread the word2010-05-25 01:01:00

Author:
Unknown User


Am I in? Please?2010-05-25 01:02:00

Author:
JspOt
Posts: 3607


yes 2 more to go now and part 1 is out2010-05-25 13:03:00

Author:
Unknown User


Well hello fellow sack people the wait is finally over this is the official part 1 of "The Creation Of Our World." Despite of how many people joined I have to move on with the story even though I don't want to make fake characters but oh well . Brief summary on part 1 Chris finds himself walking out of The Spot that Luis owns (Jsp0t) for a pickup of dragon tails. Chris walks over to his friends house Josh to see if he wants to join him in getting the order.He says yes which later on the story he regrets that answer. After they retrieve the dragon tails for Luis they run off to the big ceremony of Egg City 20th Ball. All sounds good and well until Black horse riders cloaked in black hoods with the left side of there arms glowing red with the sign of a machine type creature.I will not give out so much detail but when you read the story you will be begging for part 2 lolz.



Chris finds himself waking up in his apartment looking at the clock knowing that he's late for work. Chris begins to talk "Oh no Im going to be late for work not only that Luis is gonna kill me if I don't get there on time to get his special order. Ugh I have 10 minuets to spare so I can get ready." Chris starts to look for his favorite uniform to wear." Where in the world is my black jeans ugh...." He enters the shower for 6 minuets and changes. His uniform is black jeans,white t-shirt,black under shirt,and a black sweater with a white hood." Where are my sneakers....?There they are...!" He puts his white high-top sneakers on and runs out the door with a rush to get to work.I wonder if Josh is ready for the ceremony?


He runs out the door then he jumps over the railing and lands perfectly on his feet then he runs to work. He passes the Bread and wine owner and he waves hi to Chris "Hey Chris you look so old." Chris replies "You look so young old man." He laughs "Ill cya around." Old man replies "Hey respect your elders" His wife giggles cleaning the floor. Once Chris reaches the door he swallows his spit inside his mouth and preys that Luis gives him another chance.He tries to find the courage to open the door. Once he does he opens the door and looks around for Luis. "Hmmm it seems like he's not here......." He looks left and right then he looks straight and sees Luis's baby dragon flying towards him to attack "Ahhhh are you out of you mind Drako you could have hurt me man jeez.. anyway where's Luis?" Luis replies "Im right here you dummy your late and fired but lucky cause I need you now" Chris answers "What didn't you just fire me for being late but just gave me a job that doesn't seem logical to me..." Luis screams at Chris "Who cares just go get my dragon tail at the bakery and get here on time or else!!!" Chris runs out the door scared to know what "or else"means....


Chris starts to walk to Josh's house to see if he's ready. "If he's not ready Im so leaving him or ill get killed by Luis." Chris knocks on Josh's household waiting for an answer. Josh comes at the door and answers wearing a black and red uniform. "Are you ready to go yet?" Josh answer "Yea just let me get my money." After Josh gets his money they start to walk and begin a conversation. "So Josh what's going on with Tia is she going to the ceremony or what?" Josh replies "Yea she has to come she is the 3rd princess,and daughter of the Great King so obviously she is going to be there." Chris then say's "What's the point in having these balls anyway its just a big room filled with people who dance and spin around if you ask me" Josh laughs "Thats cause your just a kid you don't understand. Anyway this ball is going to be great because there going to read the Book of Dreamers..... should be interesting."They reach the bakery and get the dragon tail for Luis. Then they run back to the shop. Josh opens the door and Chris enters giving Luis the dragon tail. "Here you are now Im leaving to go to the ball I don't want to be late" Chris and Josh laugh. "Haha very funny just get out."


Josh and Chris start to walk towards the great white kingdom. As they do they notice how nice the city looks at night it glows and if feels like your one with nature then they come across a poster."hmm what's this here.... notice Outlaw wanted named Jack" Chris throws it on the floor "Oh well." They reach the kingdom and go inside to see everyone dancing. "See I told you nothing more but people dancing around and spinning" Josh laughs "Come on lets take a seat at that table." They take a seat and Chris notices Tia walking over to say hi to josh since they haven't seen each other from over two years. "Hey Tia how have you been?" She replies "Im fine its that Im just tired of all this royalty stuff know what I mean?" Josh answers "No not really but Im sure it tough being you" He laughs."Any whom this is my friend Chris short for Christian" Tia responds "Nice to meet you Chris" Chris replies "Nice to meet you to princess Tia." Josh says Im gonna get something to drink okay." They both said okay. Chris asked Tia if she wanted to dance one song. "Tia you would you care to dance even though Im not much of a good one?" She replied "Sure." He grabbed her hand and made there way pass the crowd. A slow song started to play so they dance slowly at a face distance. People cleared the floor for the princess and Chris as they continued to dance. Chris embraced Tia as they continued to dance then the song stopped for the king arrived with the Book Of Dreamers in his hands. Tia and chris stopped dancing for the story was about to begin.


As everyone sat back at their table the king opened the book and started to read the intro. The King said
"Once upon a time there was a time when our galaxy was darkness, no light to be found,no life existed in this dark,cold, lonely place,but there was hope to be found. In the darkest most coldness place in the galaxy there was a big bright light filed with all kinds of life. In the center of this huge light there was a core powered by something so rare that we fail to recognize and understand. It was love; the power that lives within all things. Then he was cut off by a big bang and a huge hole blasted threw the wall. The guards protected the king and the book. Nine horsemen cloaked in black hoods with the left side of there arms glowing red with the sign of a machine type creature. The Horsemen said "Our master shall return and all of you will parish from this world. Long live the machines!! Chris said "What's going on? Josh where are you?" Then suddenly a big burst of flames from one of the horsemen's horse killed the king but not the book. Tia and all his son's and daughter's were crying. The horsemen too the book and left leaving the kingdom in ruin with flames and machines running and destroying everything also with no king. Chris and Josh got out alive so did Tia but everyone on the 3rd and 4th floors didn't make it out.


The next morning there was a funeral for everyone that died including the king. Everyone fell down crying for their city had been destroyed and there book gone. Scientists try to figure out what the horsemen had meant when they said "our master shall return." Josh and Chris woke up at The Spot where Luis packed their bags. Chris woke up and asked Luis "Why are my stuff here and why did I wake up here as well?" Luis replied "Who cares now you and Josh are meeting someone at the entrance gate then you will know what to do. Wake Josh up and go the west gate." After they both wake up they went to the west gate where Tia waited with 3 horses. Tia said " Come on boys were going to go get us our book back!"







Part 2 coming out soon also don't forget if you want to join just ask okay (btw sorry for the people I didn't use in the story but you will be in Part 2 trust me) Thanks for reading and come back for updates
2010-05-27 01:15:00

Author:
Unknown User


Luis?
Luis?
LUIS?
Really...
2010-05-27 01:20:00

Author:
JspOt
Posts: 3607


Lolz you should have told me what you wanted your name to be dont worry ill mix it up eventually and you will be mark lolz 2010-05-27 01:29:00

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Unknown User


Erm ok can my name be joe?2010-05-30 10:31:00

Author:
Jovuto
Posts: 2345


Yes it can be joe2010-05-30 11:22:00

Author:
Unknown User


can i be in? lol! please make part 2!!!!2010-07-09 16:27:00

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lightningbug1
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