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Detective Sack [DEMO]natty_boi Old Mike's house is mysterious and has traps and detective sack will stop it anyways this level is quite short about 1 minute and half but the full version should be massive. I am making the demo short so poeple don't get bored and get lured in to the level and want more I hope the visuals look good i am going to make a forrest bit.

2010-05-05 18:47:00 Author: crazy555 Posts: 59

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Hidy Ho crazy555! I expected the level to be short since it is a demo, but man, this was really short But no worries, it is a demo, so it doesn't matter, and the plot actually intrigued me! I think that it would be good to decorate the beginning of the level. You may already be planning to do that, but if not, it would probably be a good thing to consider. It doesn't leave a good impression to start a level and see almost no scenery. Once you get into the house, things get much better. I love the dialog that leads into the story Is there a reason that you have 2 winches to take you up to the button? It just seemed a bit cluttered once you got up there. Also, it would be good if the camera zoomed down to the door when you push the button just so the player knows exactly what the just did with the button. That would not only clarify, but it would also give the level even more class Except for that, there really isn't much to say... Maybe see if you could add some more stickers to the inside of the house if you are looking for more decoration, though I thought it looked good! Awesome little preview! I will be looking forward to more

2010-05-06 16:32:00 Author: amazingflyingpoo Posts: 1515

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Thanks Poo sorry if this was dissapointing but the level should be done in a week and i am decorating the beggining I was just excited about releasing it thanks it will be much better i am taking ur advise to hopefully make it to the featured creators list Natty_boi

2010-05-06 17:49:00 Author: crazy555 Posts: 59

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Hi, crazy555! It was really short! I just begin it and BOOM - here is finish... Poo already gave you good advices, so I will not repeat it. Good Luck with this level, it can be very interesting! I will look for it!

2010-05-07 13:39:00 Author: Domik12 Posts: 838

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