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Sackboy Short 3natty_boi The 3rd installment Hi everyone hopefully these levels will continue but they might become a bit less repetetive as i wish to make a rather large level Anyways you are a sackboy lost outside a castle and you must climb to the skygods were the sacred scoreboard sits There is an endless bubble emitter!

2010-05-02 08:49:00 Author: crazy555 Posts: 59

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lol so much for feedback

2010-05-05 18:37:00 Author: crazy555 Posts: 59

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Not to fear crazy555! I am here with some feedback! You know that I enjoy these short levels, so I was excited to give this a try when I got the chance This is another great short level, with fun scenery, and a nice little open-ended story. I felt like this level was a bit longer than the previous 2, but that may just be because I struggled with one part. The only issue I had was with the lightning. The section right after the 2 lightning bolts that are electrified that you have to use to swing across has a series of lightning bolts that you have to climb up, and there are electrified lightning bolts that drop down between then. I had a VERY hard time with this. I finally figured it out, but I really struggled. It just felt a bit out of place since your Shorts Series usually has simple fun challenges, but a guess a difficult challenge isn't a terrible thing to have One other thing that confused me were the grab switches throughout the level. I never really knew what those did? Other than that, all is well. You have an interesting creating style where you have everything visible, so I would normally complain about that, but it is the style of these levels, so I can accept that Great work on another fun Short!

2010-05-06 17:11:00 Author: amazingflyingpoo Posts: 1515

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Thanks Poo well the level was long becuase as i see you have posted on my new level coming out and i made this half way through so i was probably in a long level mood but the lighting bolts went through several stages. 1)You had to climb back and turn them off 2)The were being emitted sideways! 3) there were none but then there was no challenge. As for visibility in this large level i am making it should change.

2010-05-06 17:44:00 Author: crazy555 Posts: 59

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Hey crazy555- You asked me to leave you feedback a while ago - sorry it's taken me this long to get back to you on this. In addition to just being a busy week, I'm also getting ready to leave town on vacation and just haven't had the time for leaving actual reviews. I like the "short" concept of mini levels you've come up with, and it's cool that you're continuing to crank them out. Sackboy Short 3 is better than parts 1 or 2, which is great to see and shows that you are making some great strides as a creator. poo did a good job of covering my general thoughts on the level, and I also had the same problem with the lightning bolt section. The platforming is fun and seems pretty well tested aside from that. There's a good variety of things to do given the length of the level, and I like how you incorporated a simple story to give some purpose to the action. For suggestions, I'd say that you should try to use the corner editor more and make your shapes a little more organic and less blocky. It would also be nice to see a more cohesive theme, and try adding in point bubbles where players have the option for building score chains. VelcroJonze is a master of this, so if you're not sure where to start just play some of VJ's stuff and you will be instantly inspired. My last suggestion is to use F4F! If you want feedback, that's how you go about getting it - simple as that. I gave this 3.5/5 stars, which rounds up to 4 stars in game. I was considering 3 stars, but given your continuation of the series and improving create skills I felt it was worthy of the bump. Definitely keep making these bite-sized levels!

2010-05-07 07:21:00 Author: Taffey Posts: 3187

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HI, crazy555! You create good level! A little bit much corner tool and it will be even better! Right now I gave you 4 stars for it!

2010-05-07 13:04:00 Author: Domik12 Posts: 838

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I played this a few minutes ago, it was a nice short level. I liked the whole sky god type theme, and the lightning concept. I got the top score right now. Overall, this was a fun little short level, and I look forward to the next installements. Keep up the good work. I rated it :star::star::star::star::star:.

2010-05-09 03:50:00 Author: X-FROGBOY-X Posts: 1800

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