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The Sugary Mines

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One day while enjoying a chilled beverage, a talking tree dares you to investigate some dangerous mines. What sweet and sugary suprises await for you inside? Go find out, kids!!!

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It starts out all pretty and lovely!

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The sign speaks of danger. Ignore it.

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One of the first tasks is to get rid of the spider webs.

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Whoa! It's Papa Spider! Kill it!

This is easily my best level. It was also my first!
2010-04-27 17:59:00

Author:
Turbo_Egg_Salad
Posts: 57


Wow, great first level.

Pro:
-I really liked the diversity of the gameplay and the way the level design keeps changing.
-The puzzle with the bouncy cart was very good.
-I liked the look of the carts.
-Also your attention to detail pays of. Sound effects like the elevator music (first elevator), the sounds when you light up a grabable light, the way the loose crates fall off when a platform is set in motion. Nice touches.
-There's also a lot of humour in your game, from the origins of the sugary treats to the myriad ways of killing spiders. Pointing fingers setting platforms in motion etc.

Room for improvement:
-The design of the cave structures could use some refinement. (There are good tutorials by TheAdipose and Luos-desruc online.)

It's cool to have a level of this length that keeps grabbing your attention. Very well done.

It would be great if you could check out my newest level, link in sig below.
2010-04-28 09:45:00

Author:
pickled-punk
Posts: 598


"Room for improvement:
-The design of the cave structures could use some refinement. (There are good tutorials by TheAdipose and Luos-desruc online.)"

Do you mean tutorial levels within the game? If so, what are they called?
2010-05-01 18:04:00

Author:
Turbo_Egg_Salad
Posts: 57


TheAdipose and Luos_Desruc published a level that describes how to create good caves.
And yes, that does look quite good for a first level!
2010-05-01 18:20:00

Author:
piggabling
Posts: 2979


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