Archive: 21 posts

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OasisAgentBanana Hello! This is my first level, which I published back in the year when lbp was released. Its a gardensy type of level, main inspiration was Spring Time. I tried to make as non-linear as possible and a sort of a easy challange for eveyone. Its updated ALOT so it wont look like it is my first level, but it is. Its just a sort of walk in the park level. Anyway I hope you enjoy it! I promise you its pretty good, if not bad. The main reason im showcasing this is because I might want to make a remake or a sequel, so i'll base the next one on the positives of the thread, but steer clear of the negative ones. Thanks again. I'll post screenshots soon.

2010-04-13 18:23:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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Sounds great, I'll play this later.

2010-04-13 18:45:00 Author: X-FROGBOY-X Posts: 1800

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I think I played this a while ago. It was fun and you should definitely make a sequel. You are a great creator!

2010-04-13 22:42:00 Author: piggabling Posts: 2979

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HI, Banananananana! Methinks you should certainly make a sequel. I had a lot of fun with this level! Nice material/sticker use! Felt like frolicking through a crisp spring day! Fun gameplay, nice humor. I quite enjoyed shoving that pink stick man guy thing into the pit and hearing him scream. xD

2010-04-14 16:39:00 Author: GreyMRP Posts: 588

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That was my brother's idea to push him off the cliff. I have to agree it's a very good idea.

2010-04-14 18:21:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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I played this yesterday, fun level! I must admit too I had endless satisfaction sending our little pink friend off the cliff or rocketing off to god knows where! haha! A sequel would be nice, interested to see what else torture I can put the little pink guy through!

2010-04-14 18:44:00 Author: OneEyedBanshee Posts: 1370

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This sounds awesome! i'll play it later today..i have school soon please play my level 'the Lost Temple of the Last empire' there is a link in my sig...thanks

2010-04-15 22:23:00 Author: Supa_Nady Posts: 420

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Everyone loves the gardens! As usual I'll note stuff as I play then summarise. - That simple donut shaped hill looks cool. I dont know why, it just does. 5 seconds is too long for a camera imo. - Leaves in the wind are nice. - Torchering that pink dude is funny. Especially at the cliff and the end. - Spring clouds are cool. - How did I know that bridge was going to fall. Hmm, maybe because of the giant piece of dissolve?! - The button room with the spider, what's the point of having a spring board and a jetpack? - Point bubbles on the loose bolt thing was interesting. Nice "first" level there. Good use of stickers, solid gameplay and nice secrets. (my f4f link in sig)

2010-04-16 06:48:00 Author: midnight_heist Posts: 2513

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Thanks for your feedback. I actually don't know why I put that button thingy with the jetpack. I didn't really know what I was doing, lol. But thanks.

2010-04-16 18:04:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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well done on the level! very good visuals! i really enjoyed playing it! there were only a few things i picked up on -you should make switches, bolts, music, elastic, string ect. invisible. -there are lots of the same shape. maybe use more round things in the rectangular sections and more rectangular things in the round sections to even it out. other then that very well done XD

2010-04-17 00:05:00 Author: Supa_Nady Posts: 420

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I just got done playing your level. Really well done. I really enjoyed the exploration aspect of the level, the design was really LittleBigPlanet-y, and the platforming itself was really fun. I also probed around your level as best I could to look for ways to "break" it, but couldn't find anything, so nice work. I would actually suggest you make another like this if you haven't, and definitely include even more exploration in the process. I was a really cool level. F4F - If you could play my level (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=20362-The-Gauntlet%21), I'd be very grateful. I've had bad luck in the past with F4F with people who don't reciprocate, but I still want more plays and more advice and feedback. My level's like yours in that it's a very simple, clever level with no story and some solid platforming. It's not like your level in that it's wicked hard at some parts. Thanks in advance!

2010-04-17 03:14:00 Author: Unknown User

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Thanks again for the feedback. I'll get round to the F4Fs tonight, so hang on to your socks for just a moment.

2010-04-17 10:12:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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Hey I played your level yesterday. I haven't tried your newer levels, but this one was pretty good. It had some fun platforming and a humouristic twist. It was fun how you messed with the pink man. Really fun. It was great how the level wasn't too linear. I want to make a level like this someday. The end was nice too. Cool spaceship. Great choose of music. I rated it 3 stars, because some places could be improved a lot. Too many regular shapes at some parts. But was this really your first level? You have republished it a lot of time haven't you? I think you should make a sequel. In the space. Would you play my level: F4F? https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=24798-Dragon-Ball-First-Book/page2

2010-04-17 11:27:00 Author: ghik16 Posts: 311

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Wow, this was really fun, especially for your first level. This is really reminiscent of the beta/early levels, which I guess it should since you said it came out last year. I had a lot of fun. The platforming was solid and just plain fun and you put a lot of secrets throughout the level which added a very complimentary sense of exploration. There are some very obvious, early LBP mistakes here, though, like visible dark matter and a lack of the corner editing tool, but I'll let that slide because it's from early LBP. Anyway, I loved this. I gave it 4 stars, a fun tag, and a heart. I'm looking forward to more from you. (Oh, and I'm looking forward to going back to play your later levels, just noticed your levels have been spotlighted.) When you get the time, could you check out my level? The link is in my sig.

2010-04-20 05:31:00 Author: qrtda235566 Posts: 3664

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Thanks for a good old fun platforming level! The gameplay was fun but fun and varied. The visuals weren't all that great but this was your first level and it's quite old. Some dark matter showing and lots of unnecessary corners but it was only your first. The humour in the level was a nice touch with the pink guy being thrown around! I gave the level :star::star::star: and a heart. I'd appreciate it if you could give my level some feedback! (The link is in my sig)

2010-04-20 17:26:00 Author: Rhys125 Posts: 841

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I'll check it out near the weekend. Sorry if I'm late replying I just have exams coming up.

2010-04-20 17:46:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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Hey! This level was fun, and really great for being your first level. I think the most things already been said

2010-04-20 17:54:00 Author: Alec Posts: 3871

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I'll check it out near the weekend. Sorry if I'm late replying I just have exams coming up. No problem dude! Good luck with your exams!

2010-04-20 18:00:00 Author: Rhys125 Posts: 841

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This level reminded me a lot of when I first started LBP and playing the gardens. Only this time we got the pink guys! Like everyone else I also enjoyed shoving that guy down the cliff, especially since I allready shoved the first guy from the far left down there as well. I decided to join them for a party, only realised the star to take me up was still stuck at the top... That's probably the only negative thing I got to say about this level. It really put a smile on my face and reminded me of my first days in LBP

2010-04-20 19:57:00 Author: Serph Posts: 53

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I played this earlier, and it was a very good first level. The visuals were good, and so was the gameplay. The length of the level was just right too. I liked the little pink guy through-out the level, he was cute. In conclusion, this was a very good start for a creator. I look forward to your creations in the future. :star::star::star::star::star:

2010-04-21 12:36:00 Author: X-FROGBOY-X Posts: 1800

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Thanks for all your feedback! I am now going to make a remake soon. It'll be fun to see how much better peoples levels have got since the beta.

2010-04-23 17:53:00 Author: AgentBanana Posts: 511

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