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Time Travel: The Beginning of the End

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Time Travel: The Beginning of the Endpokemainiac
http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee181/pokemainiac/APhoto-1.jpgIn the year 1683, Sackboy discovers a letter, and goes to investigate a mysterious house. What will he find?
This level is the 2nd in my Time Travel series, and it's without a doubt my best level yet.

The basic plot goes that, after finding a strange letter, Sackboy, in the year 1683, goes to investigate a mysterious house. What will he find?

Anyone who's played the 1st level, Time Travel, will immediately notice the difference. I have a proper intro this time which helps set the scene. I've also tried much harder with the scenery, which is most evident when Sackboy is outside.

I hope you check out this and my other levels, and maybe leave a few hearts!

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee181/pokemainiac/APhoto_4-1.jpg

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee181/pokemainiac/APhoto_3-1.jpg

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee181/pokemainiac/APhoto_2-1.jpg

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee181/pokemainiac/APhoto_1-1.jpg

http://i234.photobucket.com/albums/ee181/pokemainiac/APhoto-1.jpg

Thanks to Stonecreek1 for the awesome horse and carriage!
2010-04-12 16:01:00

Author:
Unknown User


Come on guys, this level realy needs your help and it's not doing as well as it should.2010-04-13 14:57:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hmmm, I'll play this soon.2010-04-13 18:49:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


Sounds interesting... I may play it when i get on Little Big Planet next...2010-04-13 19:35:00

Author:
Weretigr
Posts: 2105


Thanks guys. Just so you know, I've started on the next one, Time Travel: The Curse of Tut's Tomb.2010-04-13 21:27:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hey Pokemon Maniac

I played your level and it is a good starting level design but you could do even better. First of all, the level certainly needs a lot more visuals by adding even more stickers, decorations, objects, and materials. Second of all, the level feels completely empty [Don't worry, I didn't tag the level "empty"] in certain areas so you should add even more obstacles. You also need a small hint on how you could enter the house by adding something to a tree like a lighting. Also in the spinning wheel part, you could have add a speech to let us know where is the key to activate and/or add something to the key. If you want to know how you could make a level even better, try playing anyone else's levels you see in this site, look up special hints, and use the F4F [feedback for feedback] to give yourself a better advantage. For now I gave your level 3 stars [worth playing] and a tag "Swingy" for good use of swingy objects. Hope my advice could help you.

I also see that the progress at the beginning is quite enjoyable and the lightning effects is great. I noticed you just joined LBPcentral this month so welcome to the site. It'll be a lot more helpful if you look at my levels, play them, and give me feedbacks on what do you think of my levels. Keep it up.
2010-04-15 02:05:00

Author:
JustinArt
Posts: 1314


I played it earlier, it was pretty good. The beginning intro would have to be my favorite part of it. The gameplay was decent and consistent throughout the entire level. the story was good too, I look forward to the next installement. Keep up the good work friend.

:star::star::star::star::star: and I tagged it great.
2010-04-22 01:55:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


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