Archive: 18 posts

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Hi everyone i was just wondering if you could help with this..... also didn't know if it this went in the help section... http://i440.photobucket.com/albums/qq125/Yozakura14/Bookcoverphotoshopver.jpg All i need to know is whats missing how should i change it if it needs changing... This is just a drawing of me and my friends and some of the things i like..... Thnx in advance.

2010-04-10 08:34:00 Author: Mangarocks14 Posts: 262

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I like iy, that's pretty good m8, the only problem i can see is the background's just too... empty. Just a red wall doesn't really say much, now does it? Maybe try adding distortions or a new background, that might help, maybe even a faint picture of something else too. But other than that, very good drawing m8!

2010-04-10 09:24:00 Author: Silverleon Posts: 6707

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Your so right ok i'll put in another one in it and make it better thnx!

2010-04-10 09:39:00 Author: Mangarocks14 Posts: 262

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lol, Polly looks cute xD Nice drawings

2010-04-10 09:46:00 Author: Yarbone Posts: 3036

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haha thnx she does look very cute I thought coloring the picture would be hard, but thnx to my addiction of youtube i've learned how too!!!!

2010-04-10 10:17:00 Author: Mangarocks14 Posts: 262

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hmm i dont like the font and the bg gradient is too plain :O still the drawings are nice i like your style so yeah its good it just needs a few tweaks

2010-04-10 10:21:00 Author: rseah Posts: 2701

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Relams? You mean Realms, right?

2010-04-10 13:29:00 Author: Unknown User

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Lol this is pretty sweet man i like it, you could perhaps try adding a vortex in the background coming out of the center behind the character who im guessing is you head.

2010-04-10 14:33:00 Author: lbpholic Posts: 1304

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Ok i redid it hows this.... http://i440.photobucket.com/albums/qq125/Yozakura14/Bookcover.jpg I like this one alot better

2010-04-11 02:11:00 Author: Mangarocks14 Posts: 262

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Cool! Yes it's really better like this (background and font) Nice work!

2010-04-11 02:37:00 Author: dajdaj03 Posts: 1486

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It might be cool if Edward, Polly, and Violet were all hanging out one another... maybe shoulder-to-shoulder? (sort of like Pat and Ruby)

2010-04-11 02:57:00 Author: comphermc Posts: 5338

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i was thinking of doing that because they each wanted me to print them the picture. i just put them together cuz they're sisters, twin sisters hahah

2010-04-11 03:41:00 Author: Mangarocks14 Posts: 262

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Looks great actually, I would only suggest you change the font of The Realms of My Mind and maybe add another image directly below you.

2010-04-11 04:53:00 Author: TheFirstAvenger Posts: 787

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ok once again i redid it and im finished what do you think? http://i440.photobucket.com/albums/qq125/Yozakura14/Bookcover-1.jpg I loved how it turned out and its thnx to everyone here for helping me!!!! THANK YOU!!!!!!

2010-04-11 06:38:00 Author: Mangarocks14 Posts: 262

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a lot better the bokeh seems a bit stretched? did you hold shift when resizing it?

2010-04-11 08:40:00 Author: rseah Posts: 2701

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I think you should get rid of the floating torso effect you got on yourself. Also, you can arrange all the objects on the page for a more cohesive composition. Right now it's just a bunch of drawings that happen to be in the same image. I wouldn't bother with text if I were you.

2010-04-11 11:48:00 Author: monstahr Posts: 1361

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I think you should get rid of the floating torso effect you got on yourself. Also, you can arrange all the objects on the page for a more cohesive composition. Right now it's just a bunch of drawings that happen to be in the same image. I wouldn't bother with text if I were you. I actually believe its better them floating around like that, it is after all, "realms of manga's mind" i would imagine not everyone sis super grid-organized in a floating mind realm don't you think? And the floating torso effect is not really that "noticable" unles you really focus on it and keep thinking about it, and bsides, since manga's supposed to be the "center" per-say and its its "mind" its really not a big deal if its like that or not. I liked the new vesion as it is, it looks great!

2010-04-11 19:41:00 Author: Silverleon Posts: 6707

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i don't mean organized like a grid, I mean more... artistically arranged.

2010-04-12 02:34:00 Author: monstahr Posts: 1361

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