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Hindu Head Scratcher

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Hindu Head ScratcherMicGorbachev
Set in India, this is a puzzler style platformer.
Hi all. I have published my first level - Hindu Head Scratcher.
And I am glad its finished. I can start returning to normal sleep patterns.

I enjoyed playing the Myst games and have tried to incorporate that sort of puzzle solving into this. I am still not sure if intense puzzle solving works in a platform game. I suppose it comes down to how it is done. So I have "watered down" the puzzles from what I originally had, just to keep the level moving along at a good pace.

Any feedback is appreciated.
Thanx.
2010-04-07 03:07:00

Author:
MicGorbachev
Posts: 372


- Sensor switch a bit jarring in a temple, perhaps replace with something else (a lever?). I dunno. Visible logic might be a thing in the level..
+ Cool character + no typos + humor = win in my book.
- Decorations/stickers look a bit randomly placed.
+- Cool puzzle thing. I guess it has a limited lifespan if it gets stuck? Would play better if it was infinite, and you just pulled the switch to emit a new one.
- Pistons blocks below your name. Camera shouldn't move half way through. Keep it zoomed out until player reaches the end of the obstacle.
- All that way to push a switch just to walk back from the way you came??
+ Cool how the trunks move as you walk through.
- Would be nice if there was a break in the thin layer fence on the left. I jumped and then had to go back over the elephants.
- The elephants starts moving his truck because you dragged over a box? I would make the box look more like a food. A peanut or something?
- The tree stickering has nice colours, but tidy it up. (tops of branches are green)
- Layer switching after the elevator (you run up the frotn layer wall). Manually changing layers is not fun, breaks the flow imo. But this is a personal preference.
- Layer switching again (jumping from first furnace to second sponge).
+ Nice bubble placement on the sponge elevator after the cart.
- Corner edit the cut out triangles in the rocks/bridge section to make it more natural looking.
+ Nice character/puzzle/platforming (dude with arms).
- Cutscene magic mouth stopping bubble combo.

Another enjoyable level.
Only got 10k in points though (half of top scorers), hope I didn't miss any sections.
Creator heart for you.

EDIT:
Good man.
You should add F4F in the title (edit op, then "go advanced") if you have the time, as your levels deserve more attention.
2010-10-27 07:39:00

Author:
midnight_heist
Posts: 2513


Again, thanks for giving such a detailed review Midnight Heist. I have made most of your recommendations, and once the server is back up and running, I will republish.2010-10-28 07:42:00

Author:
MicGorbachev
Posts: 372


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