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World War 3 Series

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World War 3 SeriesAsum41fan
Join the military to fight in World War 3 and go through intense training and help to save Little Big Planet and all who live there!
2010-04-07 01:03:00

Author:
inkie
Posts: 31


Part 3 coming soon!2010-04-07 01:04:00

Author:
inkie
Posts: 31


I would like to see screenshots before I play it2010-04-07 01:36:00

Author:
agrx
Posts: 192


Sure! Ill post some in another thread.2010-04-07 01:50:00

Author:
inkie
Posts: 31


Sure! Ill post some in another thread.
You can just edit the post instead
2010-04-07 01:53:00

Author:
agrx
Posts: 192


I cant get screenshots2010-04-07 01:54:00

Author:
inkie
Posts: 31


Do you have a flash drive or a camera with a usb plug-in?2010-04-07 02:00:00

Author:
agrx
Posts: 192


its really easy to get pictures, take a picture in the game and under its options you can "export to hdd" select it and when you go the XMB bar under photos it will be there, from there all you have to do is upload it to your computer using a usb thumb drive. once the photos are on your computer you can either upload them directly to lbpc, however i recommend using a website like flikr to host the image.2010-04-07 05:16:00

Author:
horwitzer
Posts: 255


Well I just played your level because it seemed you really wanted some feedback. Umm...

Well first I see you did make a tank, and you did put a little effort into other things like some decorations. You also had an interesting idea with the thought bubbles but that is about it for postives on your level.

You level just isn't good. It looks like something that you didn't spend much time on and you didn't finish. You left some of your switches visible, some of the magic mouths visible. I presume you were trying to use invisible material to cover the fire but you could see the dark matter. I mean the list goes on.

I don't want to sound mean but when it comes to making levels you just need to play around with it more. Watch or read some tutorials on how to make levels. If you go to the help section on this site, you can choose tutorials and read through those. I want to be helpful but my suggestion is to take some time and just keep working on your level. Add some more scenery, make it longer. Really play around with the tools you have. Play other levels and see what was in them that you like, then try to recreate it. The best way to learn is to try and copy someone who has already mastered it. If you can make something be just as good as the person who made it, then you will be able to go on and make your own original creations that are just as good or even better.

I'm not trying to be mean, just helpful. I can tell you like creating, you already have published a bunch of levels. I would say that you just need to keep working on building your skills and keep playing other levels, and try to emulate the ones you like or try to make a level from another game you like. People who get good are the people who do what already good people do.
2010-04-07 08:32:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


Well I just played your level because it seemed you really wanted some feedback. Umm...

Well first I see you did make a tank, and you did put a little effort into other things like some decorations. You also had an interesting idea with the thought bubbles but that is about it for postives on your level.

You level just isn't good. It looks like something that you didn't spend much time on and you didn't finish. You left some of your switches visible, some of the magic mouths visible. I presume you were trying to use invisible material to cover the fire but you could see the dark matter. I mean the list goes on.

I don't want to sound mean but when it comes to making levels you just need to play around with it more. Watch or read some tutorials on how to make levels. If you go to the help section on this site, you can choose tutorials and read through those. I want to be helpful but my suggestion is to take some time and just keep working on your level. Add some more scenery, make it longer. Really play around with the tools you have. Play other levels and see what was in them that you like, then try to recreate it. The best way to learn is to try and copy someone who has already mastered it. If you can make something be just as good as the person who made it, then you will be able to go on and make your own original creations that are just as good or even better.

I'm not trying to be mean, just helpful. I can tell you like creating, you already have published a bunch of levels. I would say that you just need to keep working on building your skills and keep playing other levels, and try to emulate the ones you like or try to make a level from another game you like. People who get good are the people who do what already good people do.

Sounds Great!
2010-04-07 12:21:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


Cool, ill try it, the name its self caught my eye and sounds interesting. Ill problably post a review soon. Dont worry im not heart-less lol, so i wont hate on your level or give it a bad review hehe.2010-04-07 12:49:00

Author:
Bloo_boy
Posts: 1019


I'm just about to play so I'll edit with some feedback. But the first thing I noticed, in the description it says Plz HEART. And that's all you wrote, to most people that will just say this level sucks, don't bother playing it. Even if it's amazing. Try and write a little about what the level is about.

Ok, just played it. First of all, the icon, it's a picture of a cows udder. What exactly does a cows udder have to do with world war 3? Spend some time making your own icon that suits the level. I also noticed you used Mm's motorbike, make your own objects, people will like that more.
2010-04-07 15:35:00

Author:
Doopz
Posts: 5592


I am sorry. I tried for ten minutes to find your level and I unfortunately could not--not my fault! After reading above comments was wondering if you took it down? If you ever need a distraction you could give my The MUPPET Level a try. This however is not mandatory. Thanks for posting and you've been given some solid advice. I'm sure I'll see you in future level showcases.2010-04-07 16:20:00

Author:
Gravel
Posts: 1308


Don't post duplicate threads.2010-04-07 18:25:00

Author:
comphermc
Posts: 5338


Ok ill add a description and edit the icon2010-04-07 20:48:00

Author:
inkie
Posts: 31


I changed what had to be changed.

Whoever has played my level could you leave a eview or say what needs to be fixed because that could make levels alot better
2010-04-07 23:30:00

Author:
inkie
Posts: 31


Please leave reviews2010-04-09 02:58:00

Author:
inkie
Posts: 31


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