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Boot Campwap_3 This is my first level. Make your way through a Boot Camp. avoid the swords and bombs. this is my first level and first time to post on lbp central, but i have been observing and it looks great. i am currently making an update and adding a lot of stuff (more stickers and objects) and makeing it longer. please feel free to leave suggestions

2010-04-06 21:09:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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i am unofficially making this f4f, i didn't understand it earlier

2010-04-07 19:24:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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im checking it out now

2010-04-07 20:18:00 Author: Alismuffin Posts: 1328

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You could advanced edit your first post-one introducing level and one of the options is f4f... then people will see it as f4f on level page...

2010-04-07 20:35:00 Author: trianglepigsquar Posts: 144

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ok now first off this level is fun to play. its fun swinging, jumping and getting propelled to new places. Though its missing an important aspect. Visuals. Its basically just made of wood. You should corner edit and change materials and attempt an authentic boot camp look now as for the car, i think u couldve taken thd time to make it urself and make it an army realated vehicle the rocket was ur own though and that was good you should try experiment w/ floaty materials on air vehicles good first level tho

2010-04-07 20:41:00 Author: Alismuffin Posts: 1328

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You could advanced edit your first post-one introducing level and one of the options is f4f... then people will see it as f4f on level page... Thank you i did not know that

2010-04-07 21:01:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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thanks for the advice i am currently making an update, but i ran out of space so i am going to add better visuals then post it, maybe i will try a hover tank using floaty materials. i am also adding weapon and vehicle training. i am going to make a sequel were you start fighting the enemy. i hope you try it P.S are there any levels of yours you want me to try.

2010-04-07 21:07:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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It was a very challenging yet annoying boot-camp!

2010-04-07 22:08:00 Author: MTVirux Posts: 69

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Hey wap3- Thanks for checking out The Empire's Striped Snack and leaving me feedback! Here's your F4F. I gave this a play and it's a pretty good first level. It's fun and there's a good variety of things to do, from swinging to getting shot through the air to riding a skateboard to driving a car. Most of the stuff you've put together works pretty well, especially the sack launcher. It didn't look like it would work at all, but I was surprised not only to get effectively flung straight up in the air, but I landed exactly at the ceiling of the level right where the grab wheels were. Good aim! As for things to fix, I'm not going to lie to you - there's a lot of things you can improve here. The plain and blocky wood shapes don't look all that great, so try using the corner editor to make them look more interesting. The basic blank level background is also very plain, so choose something that fits the theme of your level. In the case of a boot camp like you have set up here, I'd go for maybe the desert or snow backgrounds - anywhere you think you'd have military training. The bomb emitter challenge is very difficult because it's hard to see where the bombs are going to hit until it's too late. You just have to sit and watch and die a few times before you can easily get through that section. Gameplay wise the sword-dodging section is probably the best, although that is very tricky to figure out the timing. The swords themselves are also a little plain, so try adding some stickers to make them look more interesting. The last thing I'd change is your text boxes. Right now they are ALL CAPS WHICH MAKES IT FEEL LIKE SOMEONE IS YELLING AT YOU. Ok, so I know this is boot camp and that's what they do there, but mix in a few lower case words here and there for good measure. This is a good start but does need a little work, so I gave you two stars which means exactly that. It's not totally broken but could still be improved. Thanks for publishing the level and keep creating!

2010-04-08 06:42:00 Author: Taffey Posts: 3187

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thanks for the advice i will take that to mind when i am making my update. hopefully you will try that too

2010-04-08 13:00:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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People have allready posted a lot of feedback, so I'm going to make this short. Hey you had some basic elements in your level. Jumping, evading and swinging. This is great, but you really need to work with the look of the level. You should really use the Corner Editor. It would really help the parts, where you have to drive or roll on the Skateboard. And just using basic wood makes the level look amateurish. Use different materials and use stickers. What about also adding a background? I'm looking forward to see how you improve. Keep creating. Hey would you like to try my level now? It's also F4F, so I would be glad if you would try it. https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=25123-The-Gardens-PSP

2010-04-08 15:54:00 Author: ghik16 Posts: 311

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hey wat3 i tried your level and i thought it was fun. i have a couple seggestions though. i think you should use more viariety of materials, and use some corner edit. seeing the normal paint brush blocks are boring. and maybe you should use some more mechanics. i know im not a professional creator but this is some of the stuff i used inn creating my fist level. other than that it was good, i hope to see you create more levels

2010-04-08 16:34:00 Author: Unknown User

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wow i got a lot of feed back thank you everybody i will work on the things you mentioned and re-release the level hopefully it will be better. i also have plans for other levels to i hope you all will play them.

2010-04-08 21:29:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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Yes. Make a totally new level too.

2010-04-08 21:45:00 Author: ghik16 Posts: 311

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I liked your level, it was fun, it wasn't pretty but that's because you didn't use the corner editor that much. I agree with what Taffey said about the bomb section, most people will die a lot there, but if you wanted it to be difficult that's fine too. I liked the emitted sword section, that was a nice piece. I would give this maybe three stars if I got this off new releases, but I know you, and I know you want to make good levels, and this level is better than most new releases so I gave you four stars. If you do a republish, PM me and I'll give it another go.

2010-04-08 22:31:00 Author: VelcroJonze Posts: 1305

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I liked your level, it was fun, it wasn't pretty but that's because you didn't use the corner editor that much. I agree with what Taffey said about the bomb section, most people will die a lot there, but if you wanted it to be difficult that's fine too. I liked the emitted sword section, that was a nice piece. I would give this maybe three stars if I got this off new releases, but I know you, and I know you want to make good levels, and this level is better than most new releases so I gave you four stars. If you do a republish, PM me and I'll give it another go. thank you a lot. i will

2010-04-08 22:57:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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Hi wap3!! Ok I think that I not have much to say due to you have already received excellent tips, well I can highlight some aspects that I believe are important, I believe that it is necessary to add music to your level, would be great if you made a good environment, either by changing the background or making it yourself, and I think that if you made your own objects gives more identity to your level, as in the case of the cart, also I think you have interesting ideas as the Catapult was amazing to jump so high. I gave you 3 stars. I would like to see the end version.

2010-04-09 04:42:00 Author: memorex Posts: 91

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Hi wap3!! Ok I think that I not have much to say due to you have already received excellent tips, well I can highlight some aspects that I believe are important, I believe that it is necessary to add music to your level, would be great if you made a good environment, either by changing the background or making it yourself, and I think that if you made your own objects gives more identity to your level, as in the case of the cart, also I think you have interesting ideas as the Catapult was amazing to jump so high. I gave you 3 stars. I would like to see the end version. thank you i will PM you when it is finished

2010-04-09 13:47:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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my save file was corrupted so i have to start over but i have some great new ideas for a new boot camp level so i guess it is not that bad but it will take longer for me to finish but i will let you all now when it is finished and i will back up my data from now on

2010-04-12 21:09:00 Author: wap3 Posts: 30

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