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the Fire Cavessupa_nady
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=14855the Fire Caves are a dangerous place. full of puzzles and secrets. can you make it out alive?

this is probably my best level so far. Published today. there are some places that need fixing, so i will get to those some time soon. i really need honest feedback so i can make the level the best i can be. please be honest with what you say. please also keep in mind i am only 13.

+ i have changed some things, fixing stuff etc. so some things are different.

thanks
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2010-04-05 07:04:00

Author:
Supa_Nady
Posts: 420


Oh - look at those lights! I'll have to check this out!2010-04-05 07:49:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


this was absolutely amazing such a wonderful job 5 stars and a heart i love how u did the lighting great work plz play my new Hellfire Tomb 2 level and let me know what u think =)2010-04-05 10:23:00

Author:
RiseOvBaphomet
Posts: 35


Wow Nady, just wow! There is so much I love about this level.

+ Great lights!
+ Decorations are lush and fill the level nicely
+ Eclectic mix of materials and decorations - it's really unique.
+ The score bubble indicator at the end is awesome!
+ It's fun to play!

I found a spot you can sneak past that big wooden door near the scoreboard, Check that sackboys can't squirm around it. Also - the levers were a little hard to see as they blend into the overall yellow of the level - maybe a different color so they're a little easier to see. The camera cuts were a little confusing and the levers hooked up to the cameras would cut every time the switch was thrown. Maybe hook those levers up to permanent switches so it only happens one time. Your mom can show you what those are if you don't know already.

I'm really impressed with this level. You show some real creativity and skill as a creator. Looking forward to more levels from you! I gave it 5 stars and hearted it!
2010-04-06 05:03:00

Author:
Morgana25
Posts: 5983


ok, i went to fix the wooden door, but i'm not too sure what door you meant...so if anyone who plays it and finds it please tell me XD thanks!2010-04-29 10:41:00

Author:
Supa_Nady
Posts: 420


This level was a little dissappointment (from you)
Bad:
-Gameplay: was simliar all along. Just grabbing half stone half sponge balls and using some switches.
-Length: If this level would have been a mini challenge it would have not been this lame.
Good:
+Visuals: You have your great unique style of visuals! Try to make same kind of gameplay too and you'll be great
+Lighting: Really fit into the theme.
Critic: :star::star::star: It was not totally hopeless level and I realy had fun in 5 first minutes!
My newest F4F level is https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=25912-The-Cellar-(Screenshots)
Edit: Oh this wasn't a F4F level. Well if you want to be nice I still leave the link so you could try that out.
2010-05-01 18:32:00

Author:
FreeAim
Posts: 2462


Ah yes i remember this one!

Plus:
-It was pretty good, very nice visuals and lighting.
-The puzzles were pretty good.
-A solid theme which it sticks to throughly.
-I managed to break it.

Cons:
-I managed to break it.
lol, i know i said it in Plus, for me its a plus if i can break a level
But not that good for the level nevertheless.

I fogot where exactly i broke it so i'll play it agin to check.

Still, overall 5/5.
Nicely done m8.
2010-05-01 18:59:00

Author:
Silverleon
Posts: 6707


thanks alot for the feed back!!! i'll go back and fix the gameplay! glad that you were honest with me XD2010-05-02 11:51:00

Author:
Supa_Nady
Posts: 420


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