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Digestive Mayhem

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Digestive MayhemPshorley
Become a sackboy snack and travel through the human digestive system and jet around the lungs.
this is a level I was posting about in the ideas bit. I'm sure there's room for improvement so comments are welcome
2010-04-04 21:11:00

Author:
shorepete
Posts: 17


made some improvements so it's easier to complete the level. also I added more points, enjoy 2010-04-06 12:20:00

Author:
shorepete
Posts: 17


Just played your level and here some of our thoughts:

Things we liked:
- Nice concept, and where you have used labels for different body parts it helped pull it together so we knew where we were.
- You placed life points in good places so we didn't have to repeat tricky sections
- There was a variety to things to do (move keys, avoid gas, cling on etc) which made it interesting

A few suggestions:
- Visually it could use a bit more interest, for example stickering. If you haven't already check out Poms level 'Miracle of Life' for an example of a body level which has loads of detail.
- Perhaps include a bit more variety of texture

Good luck!
2010-04-09 23:50:00

Author:
TheAdipose
Posts: 533


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