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The Summit WDSD

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The Summit WDSDJysgdcv
Brand new level for the WDSD competition at www.littlebigworkshop.com. One of the five winners! Set in down under,sackboy is on a plane destined for home from the carnival, when the engines fail and crashesinto the sea.sackboy finds himself down under, but everything has changed. What lies at the Summit?
This is my entry for the level contest. It took me ages to make and I completely filled up my thermo so that it exploded all over my level (not really) It feels quite short to me, but I made it the longest length possible with thermo and space. Hope you guys enjoy it and I would love some feedback.
2010-04-04 13:05:00

Author:
The Forgotten
Posts: 316


Hidy Ho The Forgotten!

I am taking a trip tomorrow and not coming back until Wednesday (I had two 5-hour train rides in 3 days so I will get some good LBP Create time ), and I had my PSP all charged and packed, and then you had to go posting a WDSD entry :-P And I just had to download it since I am excited about anyone from LBPC entering this.

I gave your level a play and it looks pretty darn good :-D There are plenty of things in the level that hearken back to the days when Shade_Seeker was creating on PSP and making his INCREDIBLE looking levels.

Something else impressive was that you implemented a pretty serious story into the level. I was actually pretty surprised by the climax!

Not too much else to say actually. There isn't much point to me nit-picking anything since the competition ends in the next 36 (or less) hours. The only issue that I encountered was with the surf board, but I managed to work that out just fine :-) I just had issue with it rocking and not being able to figure out what I was doing wrong. I think it was more of an issue of me being stupid :-P

One last SUPER IMPORTANT point: I went over to the official competition thread at LittleBigWorkshop, and this is what you had posted:


I have finally published my level. I hope it is good enough I completely maxed out my thermo and reached the maximum length!

I don't think that you are giving them enough information. In the original post, Mnimmo says that you NEED to at least give the NAME of your level and YOUR PSN. Perhaps you already did this in an earlier post on the thread (I didn't go fishing through the >100 posts to check for you, sorry), but I just wanted to give you a heads up in case you hadn't.

Great job Jysgdcv!
2010-04-04 15:18:00

Author:
amazingflyingpoo
Posts: 1515


I played it and it's amazing. I loved the plane ride, but the crash could have been better. I also had the same problem with the surfboard, it kept rocking, but it was funner like that. I love the plague story, it was pretty original. The design and look of every thing is amazing especially town. I don't get why the moon came crashing down, what was that all about? Your character design was awesome by the way. Well, the level was pretty epic and fun. I gave it a 4 stars and a heart.2010-04-07 09:51:00

Author:
TheNerd
Posts: 840


I'll this level out later seeing as though you are my competition. 2010-04-07 09:55:00

Author:
Fastbro
Posts: 1277


hey just a couple of tips. firstly the thing u go through to get to the plane, make it a ramp on the inside so the player can just keep walking
secondly, make the dissolve material dissolve wen it hits the ground. (i accidently dissolved it mid flight!
and lastly, to stop the surfboard rocking, use two pistons

other than that, great level!
2010-04-07 10:50:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


Hi, The Forgotten! I loved you level! you created very nice characters and environment based on original level. Level story is nice and interesting, several parts looked too empty, maybe a little more objects and stickers will be better. But anyway I gave you 4 stars for this level and heart and also heart for you as creator.2010-04-07 12:41:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


Thanks for all the brilliant feedback guys! i have been away since mon so have'nt been able to replly.


The only issue that I encountered was with the surf board, but I managed to work that out just fine :-) I just had issue with it rocking and not being able to figure out what I was doing wrong. I think it was more of an issue of me being stupid :-P

with the surf board i tried quite a few different methods of doing it and i had finally settled with a stiff piston and two rods connecting the board to a bit of glass. After a while the piston went chaotic so i had to make it not stiff, which consequently made it rock about a bit too much and sometimes made it fly into the air but i thought it was good enough.


I don't get why the moon came crashing down, what was that all about?

originally there were going to be all the creator curators against ytou but i was running out of space and thermo to fit
them all in when the thermo was completely full i couldnt put any stickers or objects in so i had to leave that bit.


several parts looked too empty, maybe a little more objects and stickers will be better.

as i said the thermo got too full fr me to add any major scenery or objects so i did try to add stuff but it lagged loads and i ended up just leaving it

unfortunately mycopy of lbp psp has broken and keeps saying "save data load failed because save data file could not be located" ive checked my memory syick but the lbp files are still there. Does anyone know a way to get past this? or i might have to delete my data and start again, in doing so probably losing all my created levels! please help somebody!!
2010-04-09 09:28:00

Author:
The Forgotten
Posts: 316


that happened to me a couple of times i started again2010-04-09 09:39:00

Author:
Alismuffin
Posts: 1328


Congratulations on the win! It's exciting to see that 3 of the 5 winners were LBPC members :-)2010-04-12 01:47:00

Author:
amazingflyingpoo
Posts: 1515


Congratulations on the win Forgotten!!

This is a great level!!
2010-04-12 03:17:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Congratulations!!! 2010-04-12 04:19:00

Author:
memorex
Posts: 91


Congrats on winning the contest!2010-04-12 14:50:00

Author:
Fastbro
Posts: 1277


Congratulations on winning the contest, by the way, I'll play this later.2010-04-24 03:36:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


Hi there, The Forgotten. Okay, I recently played this, it was a nice level and I can definitely see how you won the contest. The beginning would have to be my favorite part, like how you made the liitle PSP, the awesomely detailed characters, and how you timed it before you could leave the airport. The plane crash was nice also, and I also liked the story, and gameplay.

I rated it :star::star::star::star::star:.
2010-05-01 02:14:00

Author:
X-FROGBOY-X
Posts: 1800


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