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Atomic Bomb (version 2.1)

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Atomic Bombblckhwksfan
A city is near destruction after an invasion, but is being targeted by an atomic bomb. Travel through the war-torn city as you rescue survivors. In the end, defeat the invaders and their boss (when you get to this part, wait until the guy pops out of the tank to shoot). You have 2 1/2 minutes and only one life. Try to get the highest score. Please leave any comments and suggestions, I will try to use your suggestions and apply them to my levels.
2010-03-29 23:59:00

Author:
blckhwksfan
Posts: 16


Ummm... didn't you already have a thread on this?2010-03-30 00:18:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


This level was on the new levels first page 45 min. ago.2010-03-30 01:09:00

Author:
ConverseFox
Posts: 2333


Well done! I see you've uploaded an updated version of your level. This calls for a re-review!

Story

+ Original level structure
+ Interesting and fun concept
+ Magic mouths help flesh out the story
- Doesn't mention the bomb in-game


Gameplay

+ Fun and original gameplay
+ Rescuing survivors was a neat idea
? Inclusion of ninjas seemed somewhat random, but interesting nevertheless
? Not overly difficult, but that's not a terrible thing
- Somewhat short


Final Thoughts
A well designed level with a great concept behind it. I'm not sure if you made the boss easier or if it was just because I knew what I was doing this time, but I beat the boss relatively quickly this time around.

My high score of 8123 points is currently in first place. Can anyone dethrone me?


Final Score::star::star::star::star::star:
2010-03-30 01:31:00

Author:
xero
Posts: 2419


Well done! I see you've uploaded an updated version of your level. This calls for a re-review!

Story

+ Original level structure
+ Interesting and fun concept
+ Magic mouths help flesh out the story
- Doesn't mention the bomb in-game


Gameplay

+ Fun and original gameplay
+ Rescuing survivors was a neat idea
? Inclusion of ninjas seemed somewhat random, but interesting nevertheless
? Not overly difficult, but that's not a terrible thing
- Somewhat short


Final Thoughts
A well designed level with a great concept behind it. I'm not sure if you made the boss easier or if it was just because I knew what I was doing this time, but I beat the boss relatively quickly this time around.

My high score of 8123 points is currently in first place. Can anyone dethrone me?


Final Score::star::star::star::star::star:

Thanks for the feedback. I tried to include what you suggested before. I can not make it any longer, or it is just extremely difficult to, because the meter is already near the top, but thanks anyway, I'll keep trying to improve this level and my others. Is there a way where I can just republish my threads?
2010-03-30 03:34:00

Author:
blckhwksfan
Posts: 16


Ummm... didn't you already have a thread on this?

Yes I did, but i made improvements to my level.
2010-03-30 03:35:00

Author:
blckhwksfan
Posts: 16


Thanks for the feedback. I tried to include what you suggested before. I can not make it any longer, or it is just extremely difficult to, because the meter is already near the top, but thanks anyway, I'll keep trying to improve this level and my others. Is there a way where I can just republish my threads?
No problem.

Yes, you can edit existing threads with the edit button. You can also do this to your posts, to prevent double posting, or "bumping".
2010-03-30 03:40:00

Author:
xero
Posts: 2419


Yes I did, but i made improvements to my level.

Well, take it away xero!


No problem.

Yes, you can edit existing threads with the edit button. You can also do this to your posts, to prevent double posting, or "bumping".

Exactly. It's better than making a new thread, because:


You don't lose views/posts/ratings.
You get to keep the feedback people made.
It helps keep the forums more organized.


It's also better if you add "Updated" or " Version 2 (V1.1, V2.0, etc.)". It let's people know you listened to them and went to o edit your level again. This can result in more plays and maybe even some more hearts.

I hope that helps.

EDIT:


This level was on the new levels first page 45 min. ago.

It still is. Oh, and on the quote, it says you used [B][/B*], [I][/I*], and [U][U/*] a lot. I don't know what's up with that, but that must be an EPIC UNDERLINED-BOLDED-ITALIC WORD!
2010-03-30 04:15:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Hey blckhwksfan,

I loved the changes you made. Now that you made the people dissolvable when you save them it makes the gameplay greater than before when you made the fly up and I just used them to fly high into the sky. The tank is still pretty hard but you just have to aim right. So that was not a problem. You should inform the players to wait until the guy controlling the tank gets out before trying to shoot it. That's all I can say. Great level :star::star::star::star::star:
2010-03-30 08:21:00

Author:
TheNerd
Posts: 840


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