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Atomic Bomb

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Atomic Bombblckhwksfan
Can you escape the war-torn city before the bomb is dropped? Save civilians and defeat the invaders and their boss, while aiming for the highest score. You have 6 minutes.
2010-03-29 01:10:00

Author:
blckhwksfan
Posts: 16


Whoa whoa WHOA! First off, welcome to the site. Second, slow down (wo)man, you just got here. Give us time to play your levels one at a time. Spamming us with three levels in one day is overhelming enouhg.

Anyways, I'll get to you with feedback on ALL your three levels, okay?
2010-03-29 01:13:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Sorry, I'm just trying to get people to play my levels because I tried promoting in Community Levels but it has not worked out for me.2010-03-29 01:18:00

Author:
blckhwksfan
Posts: 16


That's why we have this part of the site. Oh, and 6 levels, really? You must have a lot of time on your hands. 2010-03-29 01:20:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


Well, you kind of just filled up the boards with these threads.
Your new to this site, right?
Anyways, I hope you enjoy the forums and try not to get on the bad side of anyone. Good luck!
2010-03-29 01:20:00

Author:
Spark151
Posts: 801


Yea I'm new, sorry about that, and I'm a guy just to let you know.2010-03-29 01:29:00

Author:
blckhwksfan
Posts: 16


Well, you kind of just filled up the boards with these threads.
Your new to this site, right?
Anyways, I hope you enjoy the forums and try not to get on the bad side of anyone. Good luck!

Thanks, I'm sorry about all of the threads, guess I'm trying to hard to get people to play my levels.
2010-03-29 01:33:00

Author:
blckhwksfan
Posts: 16


Thanks, I'm sorry about all of the threads, guess I'm trying to hard to get people to play my levels.

yes, a little bit too hard.
2010-03-29 01:36:00

Author:
Spark151
Posts: 801


First off, welcome to these parts of the forums. Wow, that's a lot of threads!!

I liked this level, a frantic jaunt through a ravaged city. It's hard to go wrong with the concept and you got it right. Your sticker work was nice too. I had no idea it was a survival mode until the big tank killed me.

Overall a good level, I gave you five stars.
2010-03-29 02:04:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Hey blckhwks! I finished the level, so bare with me on this short feedback.

First off, the concept was awesome! I liked the whole platformer theme going around here. Not too difficult, but it was quite fun! The only thing I thoght was wierd was the sudden appearance of ninjas. Wierd enough, I died.

Overall, I gave it :star::star::star::star: and a ♥. Great job!

Peace
2010-03-29 02:41:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


I haven't played this one yet. I'll check it out later and leave feedback. Oops I forgot, Welcome to the site!

EDIT: Never mind -_- I played this one too, but I'll download all your levels again and leave some feedback for each one.
2010-03-29 07:05:00

Author:
TheNerd
Posts: 840


Just got my PSP connected to the internet again, so I'll try your level.

Alright, I played your level, and here's some quick feedback.

Story

+ Original idea. I haven't seen a level with this structure until now
? Inclusion of ninjas was somewhat random...though it is quite fun to bounce off their heads in a combo for extra points
- No magic mouths, if a player doesn't read the description there's no story


Gameplay

+ Fun to play
+ Having to rescue the survivors was an interesting idea
+ Interesting boss at the end, though lining up the cannon just right can be quite a pain
? Not very difficult
- You don't actually have to rescue the survivors. If you keep holding on to one it'll skyrocket you upwards, over the building wall. This means you only have to save one survivor in each building to continue, and this takes away from the gameplay.


Final Thoughts
Overall, a good level. I only have a few suggestions.

Make the survivors disappear (dissolve material or grab-switch-activated creature brain) so that you can't fly past the buildings
Include some magic mouths to flesh out the story
Make the boss not shoot for such long periods of time


Well done. My score of 19130 placed 4th.

Final Score: :star::star::star::star:
2010-03-29 07:11:00

Author:
xero
Posts: 2419


Hi, blckhwks! Good level with fun gameplay. Design is simple but anyway looked good. I gave you 4 stars for this level.2010-03-29 11:32:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


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