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The Portentous Paean of Peter Picaroonmonstahr http://i39.tinypic.com/rsx9vn.jpgPrepare, plush pirates! A profusion of pelagic playfulness. My first level, gee whiz! It doesn't feel done yet. It's rather short, my decoration skillz are deffo subpar, but it has a beginning, middle and end sooo I guess it constitutes as a level. This is intended as an intro to a series of story levels. So I guess, since it is still somewhat beta, I have limited access to it. Not much though. You can get the key from a lockbox level I have up. So, what I want to hear: What sucks What's okay How to make it look better Gameplay ideas Did you get stuck/where What I don't want to hear: lies Lighting might be awful because my TV's contrast is messed up, I have gamma turned all the way up just so i can see anything. If anyone's willing to help me with that, or anything else for that matter, add me and we can get busaaay. you can also get a chance to laugh at my hilariously primitive logic! I'll be putting point bubbles in soon enough. There are 3 prizes kindasorta hidden. Lastly, listen to the magic mouth at the beginning. pleeassse don't jump out of the boat. PEACE. oh yeah, this is meant for 1 player atm, though you may try it with more... dunno if youll get stuck http://i42.tinypic.com/33z69i1.jpg http://i44.tinypic.com/2dt41g1.jpg UNLOCKED NOW BUT NOT COMPLETE. WELL IT HAS LIKE A SCOREBOARD SO I GUESS IT IS COMPLETE IN A SENSE. BUT YEAH NO PLANS TO REVISIT THIS UNTIL............ THE FUUUTUUUUUURE

2010-03-28 19:31:00 Author: monstahr Posts: 1361

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I just played it, congrats on your first level! Ill give you feedback in your format you requested. What not good- The design, i dont want to say it sucks, and im not talking visually, but the actual lay out. Its confusing where to go almost everywhere. What's okay- Ill be honest, i didnt find anything particularly good in the level up to the point i got except the lightning that strikes your boat down. How to make it look better- More detail! Less blocky fire all over the place. Use corner editor to make things not squares. Did you get stuck/where- I did get stuck, on multiple occasions, with the second stopping me from finishing. The first is close to the start when you swim through the sunk ship and see a sign that says go left. I went left to see what looked like a dead end. I did not know you could grab the hanging sail, took me awhile. The second is after the first, i used the elevator to get to where theres a cart that rolls down a railing, it rolls to the ends and stops......and you cant do anything but jump out. I jumped out to swing back up and try again and the elevator i had used never came back down. Good attempt, i can tell you made an effort, 3 stars for now. Can you checkout my Gangsta life of detroit level and leave some feedback? Thanks!

2010-03-29 00:38:00 Author: Jrange378 Posts: 573

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okay, so i finally made it to my HDTV, so now I can actually see what the hell i was doing. this is actually kind of embarassing haha. locked again untillll further notice. thanks for the feedback! i'll get back to you on your level tomorrow. if i dont, bug me about it. if anyone for some reason still wishes to see this, or help me on it, just ask and I can send you a key..

2010-03-29 03:57:00 Author: monstahr Posts: 1361

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oh, i forgot, i unlocked this a while ago. still doesn't have score bubbles, or a whole lot of decoration but it ought to be completable now. i'm gonna revisit this level when i get decent at creation, and THEN i will continue the story. i have a good one in mind.

2010-04-08 02:10:00 Author: monstahr Posts: 1361

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over 150 views and one response? even if it's terrible i would like to hear what you think..

2010-04-12 03:58:00 Author: monstahr Posts: 1361

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Well, I played the level Good: -Awesome visuals. -Camera angles were good. -Story and Cutscenes were nice, I like how you made the last part Sepia. -Nice, catchy title. It's kinda like a tongue twister. Bad: -The part after the intro wasn't really nice in terms of gameplay. I kept getting stuck.(The sinking ship) -In the part where you drag the light down a vertical hallway, dark matter is visible at the very bottom near the checkpoint. -I got kinda frustrated after the part where you grab those thingies to avoid the spikes. There was a dark room with the hanging grabbable thing and what looked like a checkpoint at the bottom. I jumped down to the "checkpoint" and got gassed Overall, a very nice-looking level with somewhat decent gameplay. :star::star::star::star: and a Heart for the atmosphere. Please give Feedback for the level in my Sig.

2010-04-13 04:28:00 Author: Jazve Posts: 341

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hey, thanks man! i thought i got rid of this dark matter you spoke of, i'll have to check this out. i currently don't have my ps3, but i will do my BEST to remember to play your level. if i don't get back to you by... next monday? start bugging me and don't stop. thanks so much! i appreciate it. oh yeah... where you got gassed, i know exactly what you're talking about, and i think i might know how to fix it. i've been meaning to for a while, the gas was a temp fix for another issue that i forgot was there.. sorry! forgive me?

2010-04-13 04:38:00 Author: monstahr Posts: 1361

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