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The Lumbermill by Stunkel
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| The LumbermillStunkel Explore the Lumbermill and destroy the owners evil plot to take over the world! Thanks to all of my friends who played my level and to help find flaws and problems through out it. I hope that you enjoy my level! Also please give me feedback about what you think of the level after playing it | 2010-03-26 22:57:00 Author: Stunkel  Posts: 120 |
| I couldn't find it on search, or by looking at your name. | 2010-03-26 23:04:00 Author: Arkei  Posts: 1432 |
| i just published it | 2010-03-26 23:24:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
Cool. Looks like you're improving on the visual end by the goings of those visuals. I never thought visuals youre strong point. You had other strengths. Looking forward to playing!  | 2010-03-26 23:27:00 Author: KQuinn94Z  Posts: 1758 |
| Cool. Looks like you're improving on the visual end by the goings of those visuals. I never thought visuals youre strong point. You had other strengths. Looking forward to playing! Thanks! and it really isnt my best but i just put more effort time into it and i guess it turned out nicely | 2010-03-26 23:37:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Just played it and here is what I think: Pros: Colorful and imaginative Fun game play mechanics two bosses Problems I found with the level: The camera angle at the begging was a bit annoying because of how much it shakes While battling the stump I saw it's logic boxes shadows moving around During the machine fight I was getting frustrated at two things>: 1. How fast the gears moved (especially the bottom one). This made especially hard to get the lower brains. 2.I found myself dying a lot but I guess that's part of the challenge for F4F check my sig. | 2010-03-27 00:57:00 Author: singularik  Posts: 130 |
| Just played it and here is what I think: Pros: Colorful and imaginative Fun game play mechanics two bosses Problems I found with the level: The camera angle at the begging was a bit annoying because of how much it shakes While battling the stump I saw it's logic boxes shadows moving around During the machine fight I was getting frustrated at two things>: 1. How fast the gears moved (especially the bottom one). This made especially hard to get the lower brains. 2.I found myself dying a lot but I guess that's part of the challenge for F4F check my sig. Oh ok thanks I will fix it now | 2010-03-27 01:03:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| I couldn't find it on search, or by looking at your name. I published it a little bit after i posted this thread | 2010-03-27 01:18:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Just played it and here is what I think: Pros: Colorful and imaginative Fun game play mechanics two bosses Problems I found with the level: The camera angle at the begging was a bit annoying because of how much it shakes While battling the stump I saw it's logic boxes shadows moving around During the machine fight I was getting frustrated at two things>: 1. How fast the gears moved (especially the bottom one). This made especially hard to get the lower brains. 2.I found myself dying a lot but I guess that's part of the challenge for F4F check my sig. Hey i made changes, do you mind playing it to tell me if its any better? | 2010-03-27 01:22:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| I'll get to it now | 2010-03-27 01:29:00 Author: singularik Posts: 130 |
| Thank you for listening to my feedback especially the part about the gears spinning too fast. I got much less frustrated with those and was able to aim better conclusion: 4 stars and a heart | 2010-03-27 01:47:00 Author: singularik Posts: 130 |
| Thank you for listening to my feedback especially the part about the gears spinning too fast. I got much less frustrated with those and was able to aim better conclusion: 4 stars and a heart Yeah no problem, should the gears be slower? or are they good? Also can u see the logic boxes still? | 2010-03-27 02:00:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| The gears are perfect. I can see the logic boxes shadows when I spawn but that is it. When you have time could you give me some feedback on my level? It's in a link in my signature on this post. | 2010-03-27 03:17:00 Author: singularik Posts: 130 |
| This was an amazing level. The visuals were detailed but somehow felt bland at the same time. I loved the logic on the bosses and the puzzles. 5 stars and a heart. | 2010-03-27 04:03:00 Author: Arkei Posts: 1432 |
| This was an amazing level. The visuals were detailed but somehow felt bland at the same time. I loved the logic on the bosses and the puzzles. 5 stars and a heart. Haha thanks! I really worked hard on this, it took A LOOOOOOOONG time to make, working mainly weekends though, but what would you have added if you had to? | 2010-03-27 05:31:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| The gears are perfect. I can see the logic boxes shadows when I spawn but that is it. When you have time could you give me some feedback on my level? It's in a link in my signature on this post. I couldnt find the level  | 2010-03-27 05:55:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Try looking for my psn? It will have a face with a red glowing eye on the cover EDIT: I just tried searching just Forsaken World and it worked | 2010-03-27 12:55:00 Author: singularik Posts: 130 |
| Oh, this sounds pretty original, I'll check it out ! | 2010-03-27 12:56:00 Author: Oddmania  Posts: 1305 |
| Oh, this sounds pretty original, I'll check it out ! Alright, please give me feedback when you play for any flaws or glitches, Thanks! | 2010-03-27 16:11:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Try looking for my psn? It will have a face with a red glowing eye on the cover EDIT: I just tried searching just Forsaken World and it worked Oh ok I'll check it out now | 2010-03-27 16:13:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Try looking for my psn? It will have a face with a red glowing eye on the cover EDIT: I just tried searching just Forsaken World and it worked I played it, the detail is phenomenal, but its definitly only receommended for 1 player, some puzzles are a bit confusing | 2010-03-27 16:23:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Are there any bugs or glitches? Also I recommend going to the level thread for it rather than posting it on your thread and thank you for the compliments  | 2010-03-27 16:25:00 Author: singularik Posts: 130 |
| Are there any bugs or glitches? Also I recommend going to the level thread for it rather than posting it on your thread and thank you for the compliments Oh sorry I will post problems on your post, and no problem | 2010-03-27 23:51:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Wow just played this level and i loved it, i found the boss at the end easier thsn the middle boss lol, but thats just me well done. | 2010-03-28 09:30:00 Author: lbpholic  Posts: 1304 |
| Very good level stunkel. The environments were great, and the characters looked brilliant. I think the forest could have a little more detail, like lights and decorations. Other than that, 4 stars and a heart. | 2010-03-28 14:18:00 Author: FlipMeister  Posts: 631 |
| Wow just played this level and i loved it, i found the boss at the end easier thsn the middle boss lol, but thats just me well done. Haha thanks! I tried to make them the same difficulty, but im sure some people may have had more trouble with one or the other, but thamks for the comment  | 2010-03-28 14:20:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Very good level stunkel. The environments were great, and the characters looked brilliant. I think the forest could have a little more detail, like lights and decorations. Other than that, 4 stars and a heart. thanks, any flaws that you noticed throughout the level? | 2010-03-28 14:24:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| My main problem with this level was that you had detail in the visuals, but it seemed to be done wrong. As someone said earlier that the visuals were detailed AND bland at the same time. The reason being that Everything is square. If you just look at the digger/dozer whatever ( I can't remember), that thing should have sleek corner edited edges. I'm not just talking about that part, everywhere felt squarish and too gridded. This is the problem I've had with all of your levels. Keep up the good work and try to experiment a little more with visuals and the corner editor. Ps. No need to multi-post so much. | 2010-03-28 16:38:00 Author: KQuinn94Z Posts: 1758 |
| My main problem with this level was that you had detail in the visuals, but it seemed to be done wrong. As someone said earlier that the visuals were detailed AND bland at the same time. The reason being that Everything is square. If you just look at the digger/dozer whatever ( I can't remember), that thing should have sleek corner edited edges. I'm not just talking about that part, everywhere felt squarish and too gridded. This is the problem I've had with all of your levels. Keep up the good work and try to experiment a little more with visuals and the corner editor. Ps. No need to multi-post so much. oh ok, so would it be something like jackofcourses levels? and thanks for the advice, usually people just tell me to add more decorations and other random objects that would fit the levels scenery. All of that definitly helped, but I'll try working on it some more. Thanks for the help! | 2010-03-28 16:59:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| I just played this one, and I really enjoyed it. I like the theme, and I think the game play all works really well. I didn't find anything that was a problem. I had a blast playing through this. Some people say you need work on your visuals, but I think it depends on what look your going for. There are so many different styles out there that it's really a matter of opinion. I think that if your happy with your visuals than leave it the way it is, because the level is really fun as is, and the looks don't detract too much. Great work!! Could you try my LBP Paint Factory? Thanks. | 2010-03-29 01:21:00 Author: smasher  Posts: 641 |
| I just played this one, and I really enjoyed it. I like the theme, and I think the game play all works really well. I didn't find anything that was a problem. I had a blast playing through this. Some people say you need work on your visuals, but I think it depends on what look your going for. There are so many different styles out there that it's really a matter of opinion. I think that if your happy with your visuals than leave it the way it is, because the level is really fun as is, and the looks don't detract too much. Great work!! Could you try my LBP Paint Factory? Thanks. thanks! but like to take all advice possible, its not my opinion that matters its the community. Thanks for the comment though, and i would love to try your level | 2010-03-29 03:20:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Update: fixed a small bug in the beginning I noticed once you enter the lumbermill, the checkpoint slides over to the gas but only if you wait a bit I added a small bridge that emitts over one of the water puzzles so that the players don't get killed Small arrows have been added for directional confusion | 2010-03-29 20:03:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Great level, I just played it, some great interesting designs, especially the 1st Boss having to dodge the leaves, 5 Stars and a heart | 2010-03-29 21:11:00 Author: Widget  Posts: 13 |
| Cool level. The boss battles are intriguing, the characters are cleverly funny, and the platforming works well. Although the visuals are not jaw dropping, the gameplay seems to work really well. Nicely done. | 2010-03-29 23:48:00 Author: JustinArt  Posts: 1314 |
| Cool level. The boss battles are intriguing, the characters are cleverly funny, and the platforming works well. Although the visuals are not jaw dropping, the gameplay seems to work really well. Nicely done. Thanks, people say that is my main problem, but i will get to work on it for my upcoming levels Great level, I just played it, some great interesting designs, especially the 1st Boss having to dodge the leaves, 5 Stars and a heart haha thanks | 2010-03-30 15:50:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| I thought the boss battles were great. Some of the better I've played. Really cool level overall. | 2010-03-30 23:27:00 Author: BasketSnake  Posts: 2391 |
| A very enjoyable level. It has some very nice character designs. It gets straight into the action with a chase which is different and nice to see. Some of the mechanics were really well done, such as the turning staire section near the start. The tree boss was very fun and played more like a survival challenge. The paint switch made me think wheres the paint gun until I jumped on the switch and noticed the balls are emitted. Just three attacks to kill it works well as anymore than that and it woulkd become repetitive. It felt good to destroy the bulldozer at the end too .An interesting and fun level. :star::star::star::star::star: and hearted. | 2010-03-31 04:29:00 Author: SteveBigGuns  Posts: 423 |
| Looks good, I think I'll check this one out. | 2010-03-31 20:13:00 Author: X-FROGBOY-X  Posts: 1800 |
| A very enjoyable level. It has some very nice character designs. It gets straight into the action with a chase which is different and nice to see. Some of the mechanics were really well done, such as the turning staire section near the start. The tree boss was very fun and played more like a survival challenge. The paint switch made me think wheres the paint gun until I jumped on the switch and noticed the balls are emitted. Just three attacks to kill it works well as anymore than that and it woulkd become repetitive. It felt good to destroy the bulldozer at the end too .An interesting and fun level. :star::star::star::star::star: and hearted. haha thanks steve | 2010-04-01 00:36:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Congratulations! very nice level... played it the other night! Loved the fellow nature buddy... beret-ted baddie! It was a load of fun, good humor sprinkled in and most of all fun! the machine at the end was good stuff too! I'm always afraid to build bosses but really liked yours. Just enough story too to make an emotional investment. Well done! | 2010-04-02 03:12:00 Author: Gravel  Posts: 1308 |
| Congratulations! very nice level... played it the other night! Loved the fellow nature buddy... beret-ted baddie! It was a load of fun, good humor sprinkled in and most of all fun! the machine at the end was good stuff too! I'm always afraid to build bosses but really liked yours. Just enough story too to make an emotional investment. Well done! Thanks, I usually try to be as original as possible with the stuff I build. I really appreciate the comment, and I hope that you enjoy my other levels, you will be seeing more from me | 2010-04-02 20:08:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| Really great level, I had a blast playing this! Cool Things: - I really can't get over just how much fun it is to play through this level, start to finish. Great flow. - Details like the gas pipe hallway, the rotating stairs and the rocks getting caught up in the gears to proceed, etc, are ingenious and really add to the charm of the level - I really like the visual style in this level - Awesome bosses! Suggestions: - During the tractor chase in the beginning, the camera angle made it so I couldn't see in front of me as my sackperson was all the way on the left of the screen. Still doable, but I had to let the tractor get right up on me before I could really tell where I was going. If this could be tweaked at all this section would be even better - The character who asks you to find out about the forest being taken out brings up a message box that pops up right before you get to the last group of bubbles in a set. Hardly game-breaking, but all I could think was "My combo!" : D - On the platform above the conveyor belt, when you pull the lever a message pops up that says "-". Why does it do this? I couldn't figure it out. - After you make it outside the lumbermill again, there's a row of trees and hanging vines. As you move to the left, you can catch a glimpse of the top of one of the vines and it's just hanging in the air. Minor thing, but if you can raise the top out of frame from that angle, it will keep the immersion you have going on. Bottom line: Amazingly fun level, 5 stars and hearted. If you're still good for F4F, can you check out my level "Sackboy 2109: A Dystopian Tale"? ------------------ My F4F Level: Sackboy 2109: A Dystopian Tale (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=24699-Sackboy-2109-A-Dystopian-Tale) | 2010-04-02 21:42:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| Really great level, I had a blast playing this! Cool Things: - I really can't get over just how much fun it is to play through this level, start to finish. Great flow. - Details like the gas pipe hallway, the rotating stairs and the rocks getting caught up in the gears to proceed, etc, are ingenious and really add to the charm of the level - I really like the visual style in this level - Awesome bosses! Suggestions: - During the tractor chase in the beginning, the camera angle made it so I couldn't see in front of me as my sackperson was all the way on the left of the screen. Still doable, but I had to let the tractor get right up on me before I could really tell where I was going. If this could be tweaked at all this section would be even better - The character who asks you to find out about the forest being taken out brings up a message box that pops up right before you get to the last group of bubbles in a set. Hardly game-breaking, but all I could think was "My combo!" : D - On the platform above the conveyor belt, when you pull the lever a message pops up that says "-". Why does it do this? I couldn't figure it out. - After you make it outside the lumbermill again, there's a row of trees and hanging vines. As you move to the left, you can catch a glimpse of the top of one of the vines and it's just hanging in the air. Minor thing, but if you can raise the top out of frame from that angle, it will keep the immersion you have going on. Bottom line: Amazingly fun level, 5 stars and hearted. If you're still good for F4F, can you check out my level "Sackboy 2109: A Dystopian Tale"? ------------------ My F4F Level: Sackboy 2109: A Dystopian Tale (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=24699-Sackboy-2109-A-Dystopian-Tale) Thank you so much for you comment, and a reply to your suggestions: -That little "-" that appears after hitting that switch above the conveyor belt is to let the player know that those electric things have disapeared, I'm not trying to sound like a jerk when I ask this but did it bother you? If it did please let me know. -Thank you for letting me know about the vines hanging, I never really noticed it, I kinda rushed through that last part I guess and didnt really check it over thoroughly. And for the angle of that last part, I will try to raise it -Also I will try to make it so the camera angle allows you to see ahead of you during the tractor part, thank you for letting me know. I kinda forgot about the race part and how people will go as fast as possible and probably cant see where they are going. But I am really glad that you enjoyed the level and thanks for hearting it and I will check out your level | 2010-04-03 05:11:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| I thought the boss battles were great. Some of the better I've played. Really cool level overall. Thanks, everybody seems to like the boss battles, I guess I will add more of them into my levels | 2010-04-03 05:29:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| OK, finally got around to playing it, I liked the characters and the boss battle was great, the lunbermill theme was a good idea since it has rarely been used. :star::star::star::star: | 2010-04-03 14:07:00 Author: X-FROGBOY-X Posts: 1800 |
| OK, finally got around to playing it, I liked the characters and the boss battle was great, the lunbermill theme was a good idea since it has rarely been used. :star::star::star::star: haha thanks | 2010-04-04 20:30:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
| You are like ''Queen''. You make few awesome levels like Queen makes few asome songs, but then you make something like Little Big Food levels and Queen makes something like ''Bicycle ride''. WHY!? This level shows exactly why I DO NOT hate you as a creator. I gave this 4 stars and heart. | 2010-05-07 18:39:00 Author: FreeAim  Posts: 2462 |
| You are like ''Queen''. You make few awesome levels like Queen makes few asome songs, but then you make something like Little Big Food levels and Queen makes something like ''Bicycle ride''. WHY!? This level shows exactly why I DO NOT hate you as a creator. I gave this 4 stars and heart. so this is a good thing? | 2010-07-26 20:16:00 Author: Stunkel Posts: 120 |
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