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A Spiders Treasure

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A Spiders Treasuretrianglepigsquar
http://i801.photobucket.com/albums/yy294/trianglepigsquar/lbpspiderstreasureboss.jpgFind out whats in the spiders chest. Sequel: Dungeon Escape!
My latest level. I belive its well corner edited and detailed. Its the most complex level I have made so far(so the themo says anyway!).

Please leave feedback and the level names you would like me to f4f!
2010-03-21 18:50:00

Author:
trianglepigsquar
Posts: 144


Hi., trianglepigsquar! I loved your level - its design is simple but well madded, adventure part not very big, but have some interesting details. Final boss killed me about 5 times, before I did right jump up to his back. Maybe a little bit more story moments will be good, bot and without them level looked good and have good gameplay with fine flow. And you did good work with corner tool. So I give you 4 :star: for it and will look for your next levels! Good Luck!2010-03-23 16:26:00

Author:
Domik12
Posts: 838


Great level trianglepigsquar, I liked the style you had throughout the level (I freaking love the canyon background), and the baddies were simple yet effective (the first playthrough I died a few times lol), and the boss at the end took a well timed precision jump to take down, again very effective. I also liked how the one puzzle required you to pull two switches to open the door. Not much I can say bad about this level, the one thing that stood out was when you pull the second switch to open the door a better camera angle to show the door opening would have been cool. That is a minor detail on very good level.

I hearted this and gave you five stars.

Keep up the great work buddy!!
2010-03-26 02:03:00

Author:
VelcroJonze
Posts: 1305


Hey trianglepigsquar-

Not bad! This level has a lot of promise and is really well put together. You did a great job keeping with the Canyons theme, and I like the smooth textures you corner edited everywhere. The smaller spider enemies are excellent. I thought at first that they moved too fast, but after battling a few I think they are tuned exactly right. The story is good but basic, and the final boss creature looks very cool. Timing is tricky but hey, it's a boss!

I don't have lots else to add about this level because it's really quite short. It's a good idea for a level but seems like it ends about halfway into the story... maybe sooner. I like what you did with the stickers for the background, but it did seem like some of the areas were a little open and empty. Some platforms here and there with optional score bubbles would be nice additions. The gameplay elements you used here are your best yet, such as the platforms that rise up and the floor that retracts, but I want more! I guess what I'm getting at is that I think you are very much on the right track here, but ideally you need a little more content to help fill up the level.

Although short, this level is very well built so I gave it 4 stars. Great job!
2010-03-28 23:58:00

Author:
Taffey
Posts: 3187


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