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13 Days in Hell

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13 Days in HellShakeMeUpJudy
http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/attachment.php?attachmentid=14277Make your way through hell.
Hey guys so this is ma new level 13 Days in Hell, it was made by me and Worm2580. We spent a lot of time on this level so i hope you like it.

The level is mainly platforming based but has story features added into it such as a boss battle at the end, it also has a 2 player challenge to get extra points. The idea is to make your way through this wasteland of hell into the devils house and destroy him, however when you arrive at the house you find lots of dangers, Sack eating dogs, rotating fire pillars of death and The Devils guardian.

We decided to put this into two levels we have only done the first level so the next part will be out once we have done it, we hope you like our level and rate it high and heart if you enjoyed it. To close up here are some pictures sorry there dark this is the darkness in the level:

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Special thanks to Luos_Desruc for helping with the lighting.
2010-03-21 18:01:00

Author:
lbpholic
Posts: 1304


The level is mainly platforming based but has story features added into it such as a boss battle at the end, it also has a 2 player challenge to get extra points.

Don't just add a boss for the purpose of having one. It seemed to me that it wasn't something that you guys had really thought through... The boss did just throw some rocks, and it was no hard challenge beating it, tbh I've had harder times beating regular enemies in some levels than beating this ''boss''. The paintinator doesn't exacly increase the whole hell-setting either.

I would also suggest using the layers more. Most of the level the 3 walkable layers had the exact same shape, and I didn't like it. For me, it's important that all the three layers are used in order for me to really enjoy a level.

The scoreboard wasn't even decorated/stickered. I don't think you'll find a piece of cardboard in hell, you know. So, sticker it or hide the edges of the board.

I didn't feel too happy with the lighting either. I didn't feel that it was placed the right places.

Also, the level is fairly short.

I gave it 3 stars.


Try taking some of my feedback and put it in your level. I'm not trying to be evil or something, just coming with some constructive critisism.
2010-03-21 18:42:00

Author:
Fredrik94
Posts: 342


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