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Sewer Sackmanufan4587
Oh no! You're flushed down a human toilet into the sewers. Only the LittleBIGGod knows what you'll find down there. Maybe dead sack, maybe a giant monster made of poo, or, more worryingly, an association to assasinate the Sacks...
I like this level. It took a while to make and is a decent level, but unfortunately my levels never get any plays... (sob). So please play it, and leave feedback for me if you think it needs improvement. If you like Man Utd, clap your hands!
2010-03-11 19:05:00

Author:
mutant_red_peas
Posts: 516


I might play it, IF... You try my levels in return, since I have the same problem. NOONE ever plays my levels, but probably because there half decent.2010-03-11 21:46:00

Author:
VeRsioNs_Z
Posts: 341


I'll play it.

This post is short, so I'll make up for it by stating it's too short.

EDIT: So I played your level. A few things.

-Try to evenly space the score bubbles at the beginning, it'll look nicer
-When you drop down to the poop boss, the checkpoint isn't always triggered. Use a player proximity switch to activiate it when they fall.
-You should move the powerup remover away from the end of the slide.
-To make it a bit clearer, when you're in the room with the closed door, have a speech bubble with a cutscene camera look at the switch on the wall.
-I just grabbed the camera-thing, and one of the closet doors dissolved.
-If you're having trouble with the thermo, try some of the tutorials here.

3 Stars
2010-03-11 23:10:00

Author:
Darth
Posts: 186


Hi mutant

A blow by blow account as I play:

Funny start, heck the kid in me loves toilet humor!
Nice water effect, nice and simple puzzle.
Nice sticker switch.
Yeah, as mentioned by Darth, the checkpoint didn't register at the boss.
Lol at cleaning the blockage!
Not quite sure how I unlocked the door with the switch in the cupboard, but I liked it anyhooo.
Shame it got to the ending! Maybe a sequel coming to round it off?

Good effort!
Score out of 10.

Graphics 8.
Game play 8.7
length 8
Originality 7.6

Thats a total of 8, not bad, well done!

F4F: Pirates of the Carob Bean by Shade_seeker.
2010-03-12 14:14:00

Author:
Shade_seeker
Posts: 328


Thanks. You lot should all try my newest level The Dark Mines. I've made an F4F post for it. I'm sure you'll find something else that can be improved and I will improve it. Thanks.2010-07-03 20:39:00

Author:
mutant_red_peas
Posts: 516


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