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The Lost Temple of the TRIsackiansSplurk A little platform a little puzzle alot of fun! lol This is my first level. I spent over two months on it, with out this site and the tutorials on youtube by The Adipose and Luos_Desruc, I would never have finished. Thank you much to both. I hope you all enjoy. Note: I don't know how to get a screenshot off my PS3 to here or i would. Also I got four 1 star ratings within 5 minutes of posting my level, its as if they didn't even they didn't even play it, whats with that?

2010-03-03 15:45:00 Author: Unknown User

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Hullo! I'm glad my tutorials worked out for ya. and as you were nice enough to name check me, I'll check out your level. I can see the tutorial influence in the colour scheme - but thats not a criticism - it works well. I like the way you've used the triangle shape to bring a lot of interest to your scenery. You've got a lot of nice little puzzles, and the doubling back and opening extra routes makes the level feel bigger. I would be tempted to turn the lights off completely and light the whole thing using LEDs, spotlights and flames. The temple is well built, but i dont think the gloomy lights you've chosen do it justice. The rock material you've used works ok, but in some places (the elevator, a few of the floors) its too square and too unbroken. perhaps put a line of one material on the front layer almost like a border. Or try putting a line of another material about 2 small squares below the top. then you get like a 3-stripe effect. One part you definately need to sort out is the opening in the lift. you can't see it because the camera automatically goes to the right angle. Put a camera there or make the elevator stop there or something. I suspect you got the bad rankings because people didnt find that. Sadly I didnt get to the end either - on the rotating triangles with spikes (very tricky!) I lost all my lives except one, then the flipper threw me up... but not quite high enough, and I hit another spike. I would suggest you always use infinite lifegates. your level isn't short and its very frustrating for a player to get that far and fail. I'm giving you a lot of ideas here but let me really just enforce that this is a GOOD level and it is a VERY GOOD first level. You've learned a ton of techniques that you've used well in this level. ... a few more and you're well on your way to being a good creator too - well done. check out my new discworld level if you fancy it. adi

2010-03-03 22:15:00 Author: TheAdipose Posts: 533

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