General Stuff #1
My experimental stuff ive made.
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| This is a awesome poster i made for my dad's friend who wants to start a spearfishing gear biz(the water was made in photoshop.):http://files.me.com/deviantgeek/6lbkmp How could i improve on this? | 2010-02-28 03:42:00 Author: Deviantgeek  Posts: 386 |
| The water is a nice effect, however it puts the text to shame. The text is blocky and unsuited to its target (spearfishing). I'd consider using a more flowing font with more variation in colours than the block 2. just my opinion ofc. | 2010-02-28 08:26:00 Author: Mrgenji  Posts: 803 |
| So far it looks great i really like it but here comes the C&C: The water really works well, however the text does put it to shame, i feel it stands out more than it needs to perhaps if you where to choose a more flowing font and then addeed an emboss in to it it would look good, there ae quite a few guides on the internet on how to make liquid text, so give it ago. Apart from that well done. | 2010-02-28 08:59:00 Author: lbpholic  Posts: 1304 |
| hmm pretty cool water loos a little fake but ts a good attempt text man like the others have said i dunno try make it 3d and actually look like its part of the water not just randomly flying you know  | 2010-02-28 09:02:00 Author: rseah  Posts: 2701 |
| Thanks for the feedback. I didn't spend much time on it so I could probably do better. | 2010-02-28 16:27:00 Author: Deviantgeek Posts: 386 |
| So, how exactly did you make the water? | 2010-02-28 17:13:00 Author: Unknown User  |
| Hmmmm... Are you going to fish Spears, or the spearfishes with those long things as noses? What about adding a spear or a spearfish in the image, so people know what you are talking about? The text needs also a little improvement, I would suggest something fluid as water. The Image looks really cool anyway! | 2010-02-28 19:42:00 Author: moonwire  Posts: 1627 |
| It doesn't really look like the text is in the water, maybe some kind of blurry effect. :O Don't know how you created that water though, look pretty awesome!  | 2010-02-28 23:37:00 Author: Yarbone  Posts: 3036 |
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