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A look at my Sinking Titanic Level. 2 links Bata version http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aDPtxyU1NbE
that was made in bata version. Or Final version http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qEs26gQ14BU
see how much work ive put into this level altogether 168 hours of hard work please tell me how it looks.
2010-02-20 17:58:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


A look at my Sinking Titanic Level. 2 links Bata

That's as far as I read.
2010-02-20 18:12:00

Author:
ARD
Posts: 4291


lol did u at least check the vids2010-02-20 18:15:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


I'm not sure you've placed this in the right section.

Are you meaning to show this level off as a project, or as a completed project?

(also, 168 hours on that? Really?)
2010-02-20 18:30:00

Author:
SLS10
Posts: 1129


i already have a level thread for this level and its completed so i put it in here because it doesn't fit into any other category because its more like a vote2010-02-20 18:37:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


I just wanted to say that the ground floor's machinery is very awesome, and looks great. It started looking dull after you went upstairs, but your sense of scale and space was good. The railed staircases, and band-stage look really nice... the ship end and the upper sections window designs and shaping as very good too, but that long stretch without much to do seemed to drag on - some points or surprises there might help make it more action packed. I like the way you sank it, and had the lifeboat as part of it, floating up and getting caught (requiring you to panic and float it up the right way), and the sack people falling down.

You should spruce up the sackpeople cutouts a little with clothing, and some funny quotes or something. Add some squeaking and wretching sounds to make the place sound alive, like it's really sinking, and give a few sackboy's some terrified screams or good vocal sounds etc falling debris can help too.

Looks good so far, and I can tell you worked really hard on it, so keep it up til you're happy with it.
2010-02-20 20:53:00

Author:
Unknown User


How dare you smile during your video in your final version of the Titanic level! I say that's a mockery to the people.

Well, I'm just kidding. Looks great, but instead of putting that action song, how about you make it this song:

Nearer My God To Thee (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r4LyoUGxVd8)

That'll make it both memorial and real.
2010-02-20 22:32:00

Author:
CyberSora
Posts: 5551


tyvm NinjaMicWZ and CyberSora for your feed back im almost done NinjaMicWZ's requests and i dont know if i can fit the song in there because i only have 5% of space left on my level but ill try2010-02-20 22:47:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


old vs new, theres a big imporvement between versions
1st of the mechinery in the boiler section is loverly

but until you get to the deck, it lacks........... urm, the grand felling you should get the ship... but you could probably fix it with some stickers and decorations

As for music, that songs is suitable but as Cybersora said, if you use a sadder song it might grab more replays from people. you could even use the song you have at the scoreboard for the level

Other suggestions I have could be falling people, flares geoing off in the background, crying and screaming
you could have the last cooling tower break and smash down
Just from the video, it does not seem that the boat you have to grab is very obvious, maybe an arrow that appears pointing to it
you should probably make it do the escape boat does not get dragged down with the ship

these are all minor suggestions, overall this looks to be very good gameplay I probably check it out next time im on
well done, hope that helps
2010-02-21 18:05:00

Author:
samalot
Posts: 591


My two cents.. I like the concept quite a bit. The full ship on the outside is an incredibly detailed scale model of the real Titanic which is quite an accomplishment. The first floor with the machinery and such is also really nice. There are some points afterwards like with the bar that is also a nice touch, but as others have said, the rest lacks a bit of gameplay. Especially on that long run through the upper deck. Though with the ship filling with water and rotating, it does tend to be a huge undertaking to complete!! I think if there were some extra elements to complete as well as more decoration like up the stairs and such, it would really help finish it off. Especially since so much care and work went into the outside modeling.

Nice work!
2010-02-21 18:15:00

Author:
jwwphotos
Posts: 11383


maybe, on the deck, obsticles like lifeboats to jump over.... or people 2010-02-21 18:16:00

Author:
samalot
Posts: 591


tyvm samalot and jwwPhotos for your input 1st samalot i would put the song my heart will go on through my level but it might not work due to the fact the Titanic is so large second ill try to add more decorations as being more people inside the ship third there is a sack follow arrow if you go to far away from it also there is a speech bubble that appears so u know where to go fourth the fourth smoke stack falling over it an exelent idea ill consider putting that in if i can fifth getting pulled down with the escape life boat is meant because in real life people died way under water because of drowning so its made like a survival but if you drown you resown inside the life boat just a fyi and sixth if you get to the deck there is a bunch of life boats to jump over. in the actual titanic the decks weren't crowded because I wanted to make as realistic as possible.2010-02-21 19:16:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


seventh I will put screams of dieing people now jmmphotos the only suggestion im gonna do with yours would be that im going to put a babie that you have to drag from the deck to the other side to a mom for added sadness i will be putting these updates asap thank you very much with your feedback on this amazing level2010-02-21 19:22:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


updates added 41 screams of dieing sack people. added more people inside ship for decorations. fixed split now has noises before brakes and cracking noise another would be a better song at beginning also when ship splits falls over to generate effect. thank you all for playing so far will let know when new updates come please give feedback tyvm to everyone for there support.2010-02-23 22:53:00

Author:
WESFUN
Posts: 1336


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