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I will review your levels, providing detailed feedback. Please wait about 1 day for reviews to be completed.
EDIT: i will now be reviewing levels in a style similar to the level spotlight.
EDIT2: The review shop is now closed. see my last post here for more info. if you have any questions PM me.

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2010-02-19 02:09:00

Author:
Deviantgeek
Posts: 386


Hello my friend. If you'd be so inclined I'd like a review of my HMS Doubtless part 1, if you kindly. The link is in my signature.

Many thanks in advance.
2010-02-19 07:12:00

Author:
The Gentleman
Posts: 360


Cool, could you please review my latest level;

PSN: Coxy224
Level: Flaming Arabia

Link in sig

Thanks
2010-02-19 10:38:00

Author:
Coxy224
Posts: 2645


PSN: Syroc
Level: Just hatchet!

Pretty please.
2010-02-19 10:43:00

Author:
Syroc
Posts: 3193


Here is The Gentleman's review:

Storyline: 5-10. Its an interesting plot, but there is no mid-level story progression. (Advice, add talk to yoourself moments, pointing at the goal
Graphics: 7-10. Most of the level looked great, but dissolve doors look horrible if you can see them dissolve.
Puzzles: 4-10. Puzzles were only composed of magnetic keys being dragged around. (Advice: read up on logic, and make some cool logic based puzzles. Its not that hard.)
Platforming: 6-10 platforming was ok, but there was no sense of direction in the level, mainly the part where you are airdropped in that pod thingy. (Advice: Add subtle hints, such as ship parts.)
Replayability 6-10. There are ace prizes, get all prizes prizes, and some secret areas, but thats it.
Final Score 6.5-10. Its an okay level, but it needs some work. The place with the electric wind mill was frustrating, and the unstickered dissolve disappointed me, there were other areas that need improvement, such as the camera angles and mostly, the puzzles. Other than that the level was great.
:star::star::star::star: but no heart.
2010-02-19 12:55:00

Author:
Deviantgeek
Posts: 386


Hi Deviantgeek!

I posted my new level over a week ago and despite some great feedback from theadipose and stevbigguns ( who left a great comment on my level itself) I have not had much reaction to it from the forums - don't really want to keep bumping my thread so maybe if you could review my level UNDER SIEGE psn catseyez it may help my cause!

If you can't then no worries - thanks for providing the time to review levels

cheers
2010-02-19 14:37:00

Author:
Catseyez
Posts: 68


Thank you for the review mate! I appreciate constructive critism.2010-02-19 21:04:00

Author:
The Gentleman
Posts: 360


May I please have a review of my level The Drowned Dungeon by bonner123? Thanks in advance.2010-02-20 04:24:00

Author:
bonner123
Posts: 1487


I Would like a review of my level
The Pollo Chronicles: The Crazy Pollo
Author: Eprim
Please and thanks in advance
2010-02-20 05:16:00

Author:
Racroz
Posts: 406


I would always appreciate a review

M306 Trash Drop
shebhnt

link is in my sig also!
2010-02-20 08:19:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


I would appreciate a review of-

Level: 'Myst: Masterpiece Edition'
PSN: Ladylyn1

Note, you will need to play the introduction first, plus the finale is in a separate level... I hope ur up for a challenge!

You could find yourself playing this level for well over 1 hour. If u start to get frustrated and stuck here is the link to the Level Showcase which includes the walk-through:

http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/sho...rpiece-Edition

Thanks in advance.
2010-02-20 11:15:00

Author:
ladylyn1
Posts: 836


Sorry about the wait for the reviews, i am on vacation and am away from my PS3. I will try to get all the reviews done by the 26th.2010-02-21 01:44:00

Author:
Deviantgeek
Posts: 386


When you get back you want to try out the level I just made?
Joe Snow Mountain
Shebhnt
2010-02-23 02:35:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


I am closing down the review shop. two much stress on me. everyone will get there reviews, but any more requests will be ignored. look in your level threads for the review. if the level thread is mare than a week old, i will pm you with the review.2010-02-23 19:00:00

Author:
Deviantgeek
Posts: 386


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