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M306 Trash Drop

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M306 Trash DropShebhnt
Help your roommate take out the trash without getting squished! The longer you survive the more points you earn but also the harder it becomes.
Hi all!

Level Name: M306 Trash Drop
PSN: Shebhnt

This is my first survival challenge based off of how we really take out the trash at my apartment. I hope you enjoy the level but any constructive criticism is very welcome.
2010-02-15 23:55:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


Here is a screenshot of it.
http://sheb.001webs.com/trashdrop%21.jpg
2010-02-17 03:47:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


Nice idea mate. Enjoyed it.2010-02-20 15:45:00

Author:
TheAdipose
Posts: 533


Thanks for the play! I really enjoyed your Arena of the Gladiators (played it at like 1 this morning).2010-02-20 19:17:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


as you gave me a nice lengthy comment, I shall return the favour.
The 'intro' to the level was nice - good character. Cover the dissolve with something so it doesnt look so bare. Maybe metal the lift.
The challenge itself works well and you've got the idea of increased difficulty as the challenge goes on. Perhaps other objects could start falling too - rubbish bags burst after all. Sometimes i found that i was jammed and couldnt escape from the bags - perhaps maybe if they were slightly smaller I could plan my dodges better.

That said, I was able to think "this bag is older to will disappear first" and it was fun avoiding them.
..and alternative could be that you have to CATCH all the bags before they disappear and you score for each one you grab. If you dont grab before a certain time it could cost you a life and you could give the player 3/5 lives?

Well done, and looking forward to you next one. adi
2010-02-20 20:55:00

Author:
TheAdipose
Posts: 533


lol about the lengthy comment2010-02-21 01:39:00

Author:
austimerr
Posts: 385


I changed the elevator to make it look better, thanks for the lengthy comment!2010-02-21 05:45:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


M306 Trash Drop by shebhnt

I open to what is apparently my dad telling me about the trash (the room could use a little more work but it's a great start; i'd recommend that you change the surrounding material from cardboard to something else), then go down the "stairs (really an elevator, might want to wither actually make it stairs or change the dialogue), walk right through the rock(???) to the arena. A basic but effective and pretty fun dodging game, though i'd have to wonder why your dad is throwing spiked, electrified, and flaming trash at you...

4 stars, no tag/heart. Basically, improve the look and you've got a great survival!

Overall: 4 stars
Gameplay: 4.5 stars
Visuals: 3 stars
Sound: 4 stars (only thing i can think of would be to add some sort of squishy sound when the trash drops to the ground)
2010-03-04 02:04:00

Author:
RCIX
Posts: 250


Thanks for the feedback, the "dad" is actually based off my roommate and this is how we take the trash out at our apartment. And yes we have almost hit ourselves with our own trash.2010-03-04 07:48:00

Author:
shebhnt
Posts: 414


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