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the lost tomb
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| the lost tombalimista http://i45.tinypic.com/dvoohw.jpga level i spent quite a while on so please play it! im going to update it when i get some feedback on what needs improving but for now, ENJOY! please play this level i worked really hard on it! hearts are good and i wouldnt mind 5 stars :star::star::star::star::star:  but only if you think it deserves it. | 2010-02-13 20:29:00 Author: alimista443  Posts: 57 |
| I would say, It's really a nice scenery you've made up. How many hours was it, you did spend on this? The gameplay was also just fine. I gave it 5 stars. Can you play my level? Doom of Dragons, because I do also need some feedback. I'm not that good at making visuals and scenery. | 2010-02-13 21:34:00 Author: ghik16  Posts: 311 |
yeh ill play it tomorrow (my brothers have gone to sleep and the ps3's in their room) thanks for the feedback  | 2010-02-13 21:42:00 Author: alimista443 Posts: 57 |
Okay that's fine.  | 2010-02-13 21:51:00 Author: ghik16 Posts: 311 |
| Very good. Nice quick level. Visuals were on the whole well put together (although too many flat floors at weird edges). Im glad you didnt make everything square - but 'a lost tomb' wouldnt have many floors built an angle. Perhaps you could make them look more like rubble or cut away various sections to make it look more realistic. Your decorations were pretty good, nice use of LEDs and objects to keep interest - love the dino bridge! I'd be interested in seeing you come up with some more original ideas for gameplay. Although you did everything well, i'm pretty sure I've seen most of those ideas before. You've proven you can create well in this level, so why not include some puzzles, more unusual gameplay, a boss, etc next time. I'm sure you'd do well. Send me a message next time you finish one - i'd be interested to see it. Overall a fun quick level with some nice visuals - well done. Adi | 2010-02-14 08:14:00 Author: TheAdipose  Posts: 533 |
| It was fun I liked it something you can do is hide your tech stuff like motion switches and magnetic keys by making them invisible. | 2010-02-14 08:50:00 Author: Xeno_Destroyer  Posts: 72 |
| thanks for the comments evri 1 ill make sure i pay attention to them when making my next level | 2010-02-14 10:21:00 Author: alimista443 Posts: 57 |
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