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Use keyboarded suggestionsthirgunner
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_1.jpgA map where your a sackperson trying to do stuff. While doing stuff, you'll encounter things. Somethings also stop you from doing stuff. Also, swift pacifistic fish try to kill you.
I read a post earlier about Chernobyl, and decided to make a Chernobyl style of map. About 3-4 minutes of creating, I found the object to create the layer glitch. After making various roaming hills, I then decided the upper area of the Japanese background had neat looking trees and built a giant and perilous ramp (with casually falling rocks, harmless mind you).

Suddenly a city emerged,warlord_evil (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?4945-warlord_evil)hopped in to inspect my work, fixed 42% (http://www.google.com/#hl=en&q=+the+Answer+to+Life%2C+the+Universe%2C+and+Every thing&aq=f&aqi=&oq=&fp=c26c79a56c95bda8) of the map, then the structure and overall design came crashing down as suddenly I made a race down a sewer pipe which led to, obviously, a strange snowy wasteland with talking rocks.

After a meeting with Martut (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/member.php?3717-Martut), the rock quotes Minority Report (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Minority_Report_%28film%29) and the area floods, only so that airships can attack your vulnerable boat while pacifistic fish jump at you.

This level is obviously kind of silly, because rocks can't talk. (http://maps.google.com/maps?hl=en&oq=&um=1&ie=UTF-8&q=talking+rocks&fb=1&gl=us&hq=talking+rocks&hnear=Missouri&cid=0,0,5102025200127788093&ei=cqJvS6HtNpXINeKWrdwE&sa=X&oi=local_result&ct=image&resnum=1&ved=0CAgQnwIwAA)

The name itself was what my Ps3 suggested I type. While I was writing a description, it suggested a far more superior selection of words. When writing a comment, I suggest you do the same.

Now, for some media.

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_1.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_10.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_11.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_2.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_3.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_6.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_7.jpg
http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_8.jpg

And this crazy angle:

http://i32.photobucket.com/albums/d43/ninjadave90/APhoto_5.jpg

The level is located somewhere in Russia on my level planet thing. I also have maps that involve oranges.
2010-02-08 05:47:00

Author:
thirdgunner
Posts: 26


Hiya
I thought this had great atmosphere at the start. The bright light combined with the 3D glitch gave a really good effect. It reminded me of MYST in its style. The combination of soldiers and flying vehicles worked nicely . Looking at this level really reminds me that I need to get to grips with the 3D tools too.

A few suggestions...
some more varied gameplay would be nice
You seemed to run out gameplay ideas half way (which you acknowledged) - maybe spending longer working on the level would give a more complete experience.
2010-02-08 22:50:00

Author:
TheAdipose
Posts: 533


Hey! Thanks! I'll definitely work on my maps longer.
I honestly didn't know what I was doing with the 3D tools, especially when it came to the city. I think I could refine it so much more if I had to re-make the city a second time.

Funny, I forgot I mentioned running out of ideas, which kind of points to my own problem.

I appreciate the feedback very much, thank you for taking your time to try out my creation.
2010-02-09 15:44:00

Author:
thirdgunner
Posts: 26


This level is funny! Oh, by the way, you have a typing error in the title thirgunner.

Use keyboarded suggestionsthirgunner
2010-02-15 05:16:00

Author:
warlord_evil
Posts: 4193


Last edited by thirdgunner; 1 Week Ago at 09:54 PM. Reason: I forgot to add a reason for editting

Off-topic, but, lol!
2010-02-15 06:21:00

Author:
Incinerator22
Posts: 3251


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