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Dojo of Destiny

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Dojo of Destinyloey1884
This level is based on a the Sensi's lost castle from the story. This level is about a sackboy who trains to become a ninja.
Screenshots (thanks kirbyman62)
http://img28.imageshack.us/img28/5606/aphoto15.jpg

http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/2415/aphoto14.jpg

http://img38.imageshack.us/img38/2019/aphoto13.jpg

http://img688.imageshack.us/img688/6117/aphoto12.jpg

Thanks
Edit: I have now added a description.
2010-02-07 17:45:00

Author:
Unknown User


Hiya
you've created a good narrative here with a simple but effective plot. You've mastered many of the LBP basics like races, pulleys and mouths.
we really liked your trees. they were pretty and fitted the style. The buildings made of the white banner worked really well and felt like genuine japanese buildings.

Some suggestions:
Maybe include a description on the level so people can read a bit about it before they go in.
some of the camera angles were unhelpful. try not to use sideways angles unless there is a good reason.
Some of the final buildings looked nice, but we just had to run right past them - perhaps make them shorter if you arent including any gameplay elements.
Adi and Clarie
2010-02-08 22:19:00

Author:
TheAdipose
Posts: 533


Level needs a description, and some more visual polish, but it was a nice solid level. Only real complaint I have are the stairs.2010-02-09 05:41:00

Author:
DarkDedede
Posts: 672


Yopu put the photo's up!

Yay
2010-02-15 21:09:00

Author:
kirbyman62
Posts: 1893


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