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Epic Adventure

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Epic Adventurejbpuffinstuff
Epic Adventure starts the players off in a dark realm boyond the boundries of the little big world. From there you are thrown into a variety of atmospheres and challenges. there is a mysterious element to this level so i hope you will check it out and not be upset about any lack of detail.
Epic Adevnture is an adventure level where players can dive into my imagination and creation development for the past almost year. i only have one other level which is a snowboarding level where i can pull off some serious tricks. since then ive been messing around and constructed this level over a long period of time. ive added creations and techniques that ive learned along the way. i may not be the best lbp level creator in the world, maybe im more like you. maybe i cant find the time i wish i could to mess with this game. if someone would pay me id blow levels outta the water! the following are things ive not only creaeted but that you will encounter if you play this level. 1st of all my snowboard design is extreamly responsive to the player, the list of tricks i am capable of keeps growing. In Epic Adventure more importantly you will also come across my deployable parachute! the first to my knowledge(hint; if you'd like to continue sky diving just blow yourself up after landing to respawn in the jet.) you will also come across my new way of traversing rooms with my desolvable house. also never seen done before. finally you will also see my motorcycle with detachable parachute to clear big jumps! WARNING this is a big file and may take some time to load, the thermometer is bordering full so give it a minute it is worth it. please heart and let me know what you think. if you've seen a post on this level b4 yes its the same level. the last post got completly filled with fighting and only 1 person gave me a review. though that one review was quite good i think this level deserves another chance for feed back and enjoyment. thanks guys let me know what you think and feel free to add me on here or lbp to mess around! jbpuffinstuff
2010-02-05 01:46:00

Author:
Unknown User


I'll check it out if you'd like, but are you looking for honest feedback to improve your level or plays? Also, it helps to use the F4F system.2010-02-07 12:56:00

Author:
CCubbage
Posts: 4430


I played it...

Pros
some good gameplay elements
Nice and long

Cons
It looks as if the water was a last minute addition
I was confused as where to go,
It's difficult to get up the sail
I didn't like the self promotion (Parachute) it made me feel like I was playing an advert,
The speaking parts I thought what my sackboy was saying was offensive
I don't like seeing the blank background, or the creation floor
Bugs
You can float to the top of the level with the parachute
You can walk on the wooden sea


And btw I think the deployable parachute has been done before...

I hope you can take my constructive critiscism and improve your level.

Kthxbai
2010-02-07 13:05:00

Author:
Kern
Posts: 5078


well seeing as it is F4F and I reviewed this last time you posted it, how about you review the one in my sig?2010-02-07 23:03:00

Author:
cthulhu82
Posts: 211


kernal, the water was put in later in the development but thats because when i made the boat and waves in the start water hadnt been put out yet. i wasnt about to just throw out my work. im glad you liked it, if i could id make levels more often i wish i had more time to make it over the top perfect but i kinda loaded up the thermometer on this one and cant see much more room to mess around without it completly overheating. chu ill try topsy turvy and get a review, but im playing dantes inferno a lot l8ly but i will do it. dont worry either i wont judge u as harshly as u and some others have judged my wopping 2 levels so ill be sure to do that.2010-03-04 10:33:00

Author:
Unknown User


Enough, now! I will be speaking to some people privately about this. Please keep messages on this thread relevant to the level and to giving constructive feedback. This is a first and final warning.

And since this is a duplicate thread for a level that has already been showcased before, I'll be conferring with my colleagues on what we do here.
2010-08-09 08:55:00

Author:
BabyDoll1970
Posts: 1567


enough what? i simply pointed out that kernel has something against me so that my fellow gamers understand y half my level thread is filled with trash. i hardly think thats grounds for punishment. you wanna help the lbp community and do right? suggestion get this guy to leave my threads alone. thanks2010-08-09 09:30:00

Author:
Unknown User


I have done that cloud, and it would be in your best interests not to jump to conclusions - or fill the thread with your own arguments if that's what you're trying to avoid. We're not out to get you. We're allowing this thread to stand in place of the old one (which has been locked). Here's hoping you get some good feedback.2010-08-09 10:29:00

Author:
BabyDoll1970
Posts: 1567


Hello cloud,

I've done a bit of research here into the two threads that you have going, and taken a look at some of the concerns you have.

First, let me remind you of two very important rules regarding the Level Showcase forum:



Double Posting/Bumping
Don't do it. These are site-wide rules, but it can't hurt to reiterate here. Double posting occurs whenever you make more than one post consecutively. This is quite annoying, as it clutters up the thread and ruins the Cool Levels (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=10809-About-Cool-Levels) system. In that same vein, bumping occurs whenever you make a post that generally offers nothing to the thread, and only serves to bring the thread to the top of the forums. If you must add additional information, familiarize yourself with the Edit Button (http://www.lbpcentral.com/forums/faq.php?faq=vb3_reading_posting#faq_vb3_editing_de leting). That said, you are allowed to make a second consecutive post only if you have substantial information to add in the post. Make the smart choice!

Duplicate Threads
...will be deleted. We do not tolerate the posting of duplicate threads, as they clutter up the forums. One thread per level is sufficient. If you would like to start fresh with a level, either edit the original message, or post in the original thread with your significant changes as per the above guidelines.


Second, let me address your concerns:


enough what? i simply pointed out that kernel has something against me

It looks like his original response in this thread is an honest attempt at providing you with constructive criticism.

Now, BabyDoll has let this thread stand on its own while the Staff had a chance to discuss it. As the rule stands, one thread per level is sufficient. In the interest of giving you the benefit of the doubt, I am deleting your old thread and allowing this thread to suffice. Those of you who commented in the original know who you are and what was said.

As for fighting with the moderators, I would advise against doing so. There are rules in place to allow the forum to be productive and positive, and to prevent abuse and negativity. You may want to re-read the general rules (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=21530-Rules-Consequences) and Level Showcase rules (https://lbpcentral.lbp-hub.com/index.php?t=25952-General-Level-Showcase-Guidelines) respectively to make sure you are familiar with them.

I will be watching this thread with interest. As a F4F thread, it's success will mostly depend on the reciprocal feedback you provide to others. Don't bump or double post, and take constructive criticism for what it is: honest and helpful feedback with opinions on how to make your level better (and thus make you a better creator in the long run.) I assume that the community here will keep their responses to this thread on-topic and helpful. Appropriate action will be taken as necessary.

If you have any questions or comments about the above, do NOT put them in the thread. Send them to me via PM.

Thank you,

schm0
2010-08-09 16:24:00

Author:
schm0
Posts: 1239


i love how u guys use my level thread for this bs, pm me next time hows that?2010-08-13 12:06:00

Author:
Unknown User


Sorry cloud. I think you've done your dash with this one. Locked. How's THAT?2010-08-13 13:57:00

Author:
BabyDoll1970
Posts: 1567


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